[gnome-boxes/wip/user-help] Fixes per patch review on bug 670766



commit e5eb70f6aca794d33f4eb266ab8dfac0d416c048
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sun Mar 24 21:01:19 2013 -0400

    Fixes per patch review on bug 670766

 help/C/connect.page |   11 +++++------
 help/C/create.page  |    2 +-
 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/connect.page b/help/C/connect.page
index 4010e23..89d8cb1 100644
--- a/help/C/connect.page
+++ b/help/C/connect.page
@@ -16,9 +16,8 @@
 
   <title>Connect to another computer</title>
 
-  <p>When <app>Boxes</app> is launched, the collection view opens, displaying
-  your existing boxes. If you haven't yet created a box, the greeting reads
-  <gui>No boxes found.</gui></p>
+  <p><app>Boxes</app> can be used to view and access a remote machine or a
+  remote virtual machine.</p>
 
   <note style="important">
     <p>The remote machine should already be configured.</p>
@@ -37,10 +36,10 @@
       <code>spice://192.168.122.1?port=5906;</code>
       <p>The protocol will be:</p>
       <list>
-        <item><p>spice:// to connect to a remote <app>Xspice</app>
+        <item><p>spice:// to connect to a local or remote <app>Xspice</app>
         server.</p></item>
-        <item><p>qemu:// to connect to a box or qemu instance on a remote
-        machine.</p></item>
+        <item><p>qemu:// to connect to a libvirt instance providing access to
+        all virtual machines it is hosting.</p></item>
         <item><p>vnc:// to connect to a remote <app>vino</app> or <app>VNC</app>
         server.</p></item>
       </list>
diff --git a/help/C/create.page b/help/C/create.page
index aebed02..d1ac8d5 100644
--- a/help/C/create.page
+++ b/help/C/create.page
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
     <item><p>Create a local virtual machine using one of the following:</p>
 
       <list>
-        <item><p>select an iso from the list gathered by Tracker.</p></item>
+        <item><p>select from the list of isos found by <app>Boxes</app>.</p></item>
         <item><p>insert installation media in your CD/DVD drive or USB port.</p></item>
         <item><p>provide a filename or location for an iso file.</p></item>
         <item><p>provide a URL to connect locally as you would for a


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