[gnome-user-docs] Some updates to clock pages for 3.8

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit 656812cb3167ebaec6fd31f29ac4793059a8b7e3
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sat Mar 9 13:49:18 2013 -0500

    Some updates to clock pages for 3.8

 gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page |   10 +++++++---
 gnome-help/C/clock-set.page      |   16 ++++++++++------
 gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page |   10 +++++++---
 3 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
index b78b6ef..5c64377 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
@@ -8,12 +8,16 @@
 
     <desc>Display your appointments on the calendar at the top of the screen.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
@@ -29,7 +33,7 @@
   <p>To view your appointments:</p>
   <steps>
    <item>
-    <p>Click on the clock on the top bar.</p>
+    <p>Click on the clock in the middle of the top bar.</p>
    </item>
    <item>
     <p>Click the date for which you want to see your appointments on the
@@ -65,4 +69,4 @@
     <p>Link to app-evolution-setup.page.stub.</p>
 </comment>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
index 43b0736..74054a9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
@@ -6,12 +6,16 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="clock"/>
     <desc>Click the clock on the top bar and go into the <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui>
     to alter the date/time.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
@@ -31,8 +35,8 @@
   <link xref="user-admin-explain">admin password</link>.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>Adjust the date and time by clicking on the arrows to choose the year,
-  day, hour and minute. You can choose the month from a drop-down list.</p>
+  <p>Adjust the date and time by clicking on the arrows to choose the  hour and
+  minute. You can choose the year, month and day from the drop-down lists.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
   <p>If you like, you can have the clock update itself automatically by
@@ -43,9 +47,9 @@
   internet.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>You can also change how the hour is displayed by switching the 24-hour
-  format on or off.</p>
+  <p>You can also change how the hour is displayed by selecting <gui>24-hour</gui>
+  or <gui>AM/PM</gui> format.</p>
  </item>
 </steps>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
index cde3107..9e88910 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
@@ -5,12 +5,16 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="clock"/>
     <desc>Add other timezones so you can see what time it is in other cities.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
@@ -18,7 +22,7 @@
 <title>Change your timezone</title>
 
 <steps>
-  <item><p>Click on the clock located in the middle of the top bar.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click on the clock in the middle of the top bar.</p></item>
   <item><p>Select <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui>.</p></item>
   <item><p>You may need to click <gui>Unlock</gui> and type the
   <link xref="user-admin-explain">admin password</link>.</p></item>
@@ -31,4 +35,4 @@
  access the <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui> window.  You may also wish to
  <link xref="clock-set">set the clock manually</link>.</p>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>