[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 9/278] help: modified help in accordance with last review

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 3098fda2e7a9234da3ace6d2f4975686c4ff8f17
Author: Sindhu S <sindhus live in>
Date:   Wed Jan 9 15:20:11 2013 +0530

    help: modified help in accordance with last review
    
    Made changes to name of the application, screenshot of the
    application. Modified introductory text to be simpler in
    explanation.

 help/C/figures/gnome-terminal.png |  Bin 523950 -> 12172 bytes
 help/C/introduction.page          |   23 +++++------------------
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/figures/gnome-terminal.png b/help/C/figures/gnome-terminal.png
index 2a9611f..6cba721 100644
Binary files a/help/C/figures/gnome-terminal.png and b/help/C/figures/gnome-terminal.png differ
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index f9a7d24..6b4613f 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -17,33 +17,20 @@
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index"/>
 
-    <desc>Introduction to GNOME <app>Terminal</app></desc>
+    <desc>Introduction to <app>Terminal</app></desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Introduction</title>
-  
-<!-- The application is called <app>Terminal</app> in the menu, so we should
-     use that instead of 'GNOME Terminal'. -->
 
-  <p>GNOME Terminal is a terminal emulator application that you can use to
-  access a UNIX shell environment and run any application available under the
-  GNOME Desktop environment.</p>
-
-  <p>GNOME <app>Terminal</app> emulates the xterm. In turn, xterm emulates a
-  text terminal with support for escape sequences that control cursor position
-  and colors.</p>
-
-<!-- You are saying here that an emulator is emulating an emulator, which is a
-     bit confusing. Improve the first sentence, maybe even merging it into the
-     second one. -->
+  <p><app>Terminal</app> is a terminal emulator application to
+  access a UNIX shell environment and run programs available on your system.
+  <app>Terminal</app> emulates xterm which supports escape sequences
+  that control cursor position and colors.</p>
 
     <table>
       <tr>
        <td>
         <media type="image" src="figures/gnome-terminal.png" width="700">
-<!-- The screenshot should be only of the application itself, not the whole
-     desktop. You can use the 'Take screenshot' application to automatically
-     take a screenshot only of the selected window. -->
           <p>Screenshot of GNOME <app>Terminal</app></p>
         </media>
        </td>