[gnome-terminal/mallard-help] help: review pref-login-shell.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 06b4df7e1d92b7f36316cf29729f092cb702006b
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Tue Feb 26 00:02:31 2013 +0100

    help: review pref-login-shell.page

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diff --git a/help/C/pref-login-shell.page b/help/C/pref-login-shell.page
index cb1e49c..c03d80c 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-login-shell.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-login-shell.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="pref-login-shell">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-01-09" status="draft"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-25" status="draft"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#advanced"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
@@ -11,40 +11,57 @@
       <email>sindhus live in</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc>Start a login shell in <app>Terminal</app>.</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Login Shells</title>
-
-  <p>Shells in UNIX based systems are classified into two types:</p>
-
-    <terms>
-      <item>
-        <title>Login shell</title>
-        <p>Login Shell is a shell given to user upon his login to her user account. This login shell is 
defined at the time of the user account creation by the root user. It is initiated by using the --login 
option with bash. It starts after a successful login using /bin/login and by reading the /etc/passwd file.</p>
-
-        <p>The other general cases for having a login shell include:</p>
-            <list>
-              <item>
-                 <p>accessing your computer remotely via ssh (or connecting locally with ssh localhost)</p>
-              </item>
-              <item>
-                <p>simulating an initial login shell with bash -l (or sh -l)</p>
-              </item>
-              <item>
-                <p>simulating an initial root login shell with sudo -i or sudo -u username -i for another 
non-root user.</p>
-              </item>
-              <item>
-                <p>authenticating as another non-root user with su - username (and their password) using the 
sudo login command to switch user</p>
-              </item>
-          </list>
-  </item>
-      <item>
-        <title>Sub shell</title>
-        <p>Sub shell also called a non-login shell is a shell started after the login process without the 
--login option. Configuring gnome-terminal to start bash as a login shell means it will start bash using the 
--login option.</p>
-      </item>
-    </terms>
+  <title>Login shells</title>
+
+  <p>Shells are UNIX based systems are classified into two types:</p>
+
+  <terms>
+    <item>
+      <title>Login shell</title>
+      <p>A login shell is a shell given to user upon his login to her user
+      account. This login shell is defined at the time of the user account
+      creation by the root user. It is initiated by using the --login option
+      with bash. It starts after a successful login using /bin/login and by
+      reading the /etc/passwd file.</p>
+      <!-- Use proper markup for "--login" and paths. -->
+
+      <p>The other general cases for having a login shell include:</p>
+      <list>
+        <item>
+         <!-- Use full sentences and no brackets. -->
+          <p>accessing your computer remotely via ssh (or connecting locally
+         with ssh localhost)</p>
+        </item>
+        <item>
+          <p>simulating an initial login shell with bash -l (or sh -l)</p>
+        </item>
+        <item>
+          <p>simulating an initial root login shell with sudo -i or sudo -u
+         username -i for another non-root user.</p>
+        </item>
+        <item>
+          <p>authenticating as another non-root user with su - username (and
+         their password) using the sudo login command to switch user</p>
+        </item>
+      </list>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <title>Sub shell</title>
+      <p>Sub shell also called a non-login shell is a shell started after the
+      login process without the --login option. Configuring gnome-terminal to
+      start bash as a login shell means it will start bash using the --login
+      option.</p>
+    </item>
+  </terms>
 
   <p>To start a login shell:</p>