[gnome-getting-started-docs] browse-web: change wording
- From: Petr KovÃÅ <pmkovar src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-getting-started-docs] browse-web: change wording
- Date: Mon, 4 Feb 2013 15:25:22 +0000 (UTC)
commit d829d9053aea3a1e8cb992ab5025e70a80c0ad2c
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date: Mon Feb 4 16:24:53 2013 +0100
browse-web: change wording
getting-started/C/browse-web.page | 15 +++++++++------
1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/getting-started/C/browse-web.page b/getting-started/C/browse-web.page
index 382a719..c0c8537 100644
--- a/getting-started/C/browse-web.page
+++ b/getting-started/C/browse-web.page
@@ -35,14 +35,17 @@
<steps style="continues">
<item><p>Click the address bar at the top of the <app>Web</app> browser
- window and start typing a web page name.</p></item>
- <item><p>Typing a web page name starts searching for it in the
+ window and start typing in the website you want to visit.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Typing in a website starts searching for it in the
browser history and bookmarks, so you do not need to remember the exact
- web page address.</p>
- <p>If the web page is found in the history or bookmarks, a drop-down list is shown below the address bar.</p></item>
- <item><p>From the drop-down list, you can quickly select a web page that you want to visit by using the arrow keys.</p>
+ address.</p>
+ <p>If the website is found in the history or bookmarks, a drop-down list
+ is shown below the address bar.</p></item>
+ <item><p>From the drop-down list, you can quickly select a website by
+ using the arrow keys.</p>
</item>
- <item><p>To visit the selected web page, press <key>Enter</key>.</p>
+ <item><p>After you have selected a website, press <key>Enter</key> to
+ visit it.</p>
</item>
</steps>
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