[gnome-getting-started-docs] browse-web: change wording



commit d829d9053aea3a1e8cb992ab5025e70a80c0ad2c
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date:   Mon Feb 4 16:24:53 2013 +0100

    browse-web: change wording

 getting-started/C/browse-web.page |   15 +++++++++------
 1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/getting-started/C/browse-web.page b/getting-started/C/browse-web.page
index 382a719..c0c8537 100644
--- a/getting-started/C/browse-web.page
+++ b/getting-started/C/browse-web.page
@@ -35,14 +35,17 @@
 
     <steps style="continues">
       <item><p>Click the address bar at the top of the <app>Web</app> browser
-       window and start typing a web page name.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Typing a web page name starts searching for it in the
+       window and start typing in the website you want to visit.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Typing in a website starts searching for it in the
        browser history and bookmarks, so you do not need to remember the exact
-        web page address.</p>
-        <p>If the web page is found in the history or bookmarks, a drop-down list is shown below the address bar.</p></item>
-      <item><p>From the drop-down list, you can quickly select a web page that you want to visit by using the arrow keys.</p>
+        address.</p>
+        <p>If the website is found in the history or bookmarks, a drop-down list
+         is shown below the address bar.</p></item>
+      <item><p>From the drop-down list, you can quickly select a website by
+       using the arrow keys.</p>
       </item>
-      <item><p>To visit the selected web page, press <key>Enter</key>.</p>
+      <item><p>After you have selected a website, press <key>Enter</key> to
+       visit it.</p>
       </item>
     </steps>
 



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