[gnome-dictionary/wip/help-pages] More help pages reviewed and marked final



commit 35260f0aec62dabb388efc68c1be481c760278b8
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sat Apr 13 23:22:46 2013 -0400

    More help pages reviewed and marked final

 help/C/find.page                     | 14 +++++++-------
 help/C/{pref.page => pref.page.stub} |  0
 help/C/print-font.page               |  8 ++++----
 help/C/source-add-local.page         | 23 -----------------------
 help/C/source-add-local.page.stub    |  4 ++--
 help/C/sources-default.page          |  2 +-
 help/C/sources-select.page           |  4 ++--
 help/C/sources.page                  |  2 +-
 help/C/text-copy.page                |  2 +-
 help/Makefile.am                     |  2 --
 10 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 43 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/find.page b/help/C/find.page
index ab80dce..117603f 100644
--- a/help/C/find.page
+++ b/help/C/find.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="find">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#features"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
@@ -25,11 +25,11 @@
 
   <title>Search within a definition</title>
 
-  <p>Some dictionary entires can be very long and can contain many results, so
-  you may wish to search them to find the section that is relevant to you.</p>
+  <p>Some dictionary entires can be very long and can contain many results. You
+  may wish to search them to find the section that is relevant to you.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To find definitions:</title>
+    <title>To search within a definition:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui>
       <gui style="menitem">Find</gui></guiseq>.</p>
@@ -42,9 +42,9 @@
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui style="button">Previous</gui> or
       <gui style="button">Next</gui> to scroll through the results. The search
-      will not wrap around: in other words, it will not go to the top of the
-      page when you are on the last result and click
-      <gui style="button">Next</gui>.</p>
+      will not wrap around. In other words, it will not return to the top of the
+      page when you click <gui style="button">Next</gui> from the result
+      nearest the bottom.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/help/C/pref.page b/help/C/pref.page.stub
similarity index 100%
rename from help/C/pref.page
rename to help/C/pref.page.stub
diff --git a/help/C/print-font.page b/help/C/print-font.page
index 68690c7..6f986f1 100644
--- a/help/C/print-font.page
+++ b/help/C/print-font.page
@@ -24,20 +24,20 @@
 
   </info>
 
-  <title>Print font</title>
+  <title>Change the print font</title>
 
   <p>You can change the default font face and size that are used for printing
   the definitions.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>Change the font</title>
+    <title>To change the font:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Dictionary</gui>
+      <p>From the top bar, select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Dictionary</gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui>
       <gui style="tab">Print</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click font selector button.</p>
+      <p>Click the font selector button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select the font that you wish to use.</p>
diff --git a/help/C/source-add-local.page.stub b/help/C/source-add-local.page.stub
index 6be7d4c..68d1d25 100644
--- a/help/C/source-add-local.page.stub
+++ b/help/C/source-add-local.page.stub
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="sources-add-local">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-06" status="draft"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-06" status="stub"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="sources-guide#guide"/>
     <!--link type="guide" xref=""/-->
 
@@ -20,4 +20,4 @@
   <title>Add local dictionary sources</title>
 
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/help/C/sources-default.page b/help/C/sources-default.page
index 57c61de..a456220 100644
--- a/help/C/sources-default.page
+++ b/help/C/sources-default.page
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
   prefer to use instead.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>Change the default dictionary source:</title>
+    <title>To change the default dictionary source:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Select <guiseq><gui><app>Dictionary</app></gui>
       <gui style="menu">Preferences</gui>
diff --git a/help/C/sources-select.page b/help/C/sources-select.page
index c803bc1..43fd124 100644
--- a/help/C/sources-select.page
+++ b/help/C/sources-select.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="final"/>
-    <link type="guide" xref="sources#guide"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="sources#guide" group="#first" />
     <link type="seealso" xref="sources-default"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="dictionary-select"/>
 
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
   that you are currently using without changing your default preferences.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>Temporarily change the dictionary source:</title>
+    <title>To temporarily change the dictionary source:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">View</gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Dictionary Sources</gui></guiseq>.</p>
diff --git a/help/C/sources.page b/help/C/sources.page
index 5f74921..2dfcae8 100644
--- a/help/C/sources.page
+++ b/help/C/sources.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="final"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#preferences"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="definition"/>
-    <link type="guide" xref="pref"/>
+    <!-- link type="guide" xref="pref"/ -->
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
diff --git a/help/C/text-copy.page b/help/C/text-copy.page
index 843eb80..8c3bdbf 100644
--- a/help/C/text-copy.page
+++ b/help/C/text-copy.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="text-copy">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-30" status="final"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#features"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="keyboard-shortcuts"/>
 
diff --git a/help/Makefile.am b/help/Makefile.am
index cea33a7..7d13296 100644
--- a/help/Makefile.am
+++ b/help/Makefile.am
@@ -10,13 +10,11 @@ HELP_FILES = \
           introduction.page \
           keyboard-shortcuts.page \
           legal.xml \
-          pref.page \
           print-font.page \
           print.page \
           prob-retrieving-definition.page \
           save-definition.page \
           similar-words.page \
-          source-add-local.page \
           sources-default.page \
           sources-delete.page \
           sources-edit.page \


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