[release-notes/gnome-3-6] Fix typos
- From: Piotr DrÄg <piotrdrag src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [release-notes/gnome-3-6] Fix typos
- Date: Wed, 19 Sep 2012 22:58:03 +0000 (UTC)
commit eaedae84ddf29c9049e0805b6fd4a5f0ddcda264
Author: Piotr DrÄg <piotrdrag gmail com>
Date: Thu Sep 20 00:56:48 2012 +0200
Fix typos
Plus a lot of cosmetic and grammar fixes.
help/C/a11y-improved-Web-support.page | 2 +-
help/C/admins-xdg.page | 2 +-
help/C/developers-deprecations.page | 2 +-
help/C/developers-gtk.page | 2 +-
help/C/developers-misc.page | 10 +++++-----
help/C/i18n-ibus.page | 2 +-
help/C/index.page | 12 ++++++------
help/C/users-boxes.page | 22 +++++++++++-----------
help/C/users-clocks.page | 2 +-
help/C/users-core.page | 2 +-
help/C/users-disks.page | 8 ++++----
help/C/users-empathy.page | 4 ++--
help/C/users-evolution.page | 4 ++--
help/C/users-files.page | 6 +++---
help/C/users-lock-screen.page | 4 ++--
help/C/users-message-tray.page | 6 +++---
help/C/users-notifications.page | 14 +++++++-------
help/C/users-system-settings.page | 18 +++++++++---------
help/C/users-user-menu.page | 4 ++--
help/C/users-web.page | 16 ++++++++--------
20 files changed, 71 insertions(+), 71 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/a11y-improved-Web-support.page b/help/C/a11y-improved-Web-support.page
index 81f19f2..ff7abd6 100644
--- a/help/C/a11y-improved-Web-support.page
+++ b/help/C/a11y-improved-Web-support.page
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
<title>Web Accessibility Improvements</title>
<p>
- WebKitGtk received a lot of attention and many bugfixes that have resulted in a better accessibility support. We are quite pleased with the progress thus far towards making content viewed in Web compellingly accessible for Orca users.
+ WebKitGTK+ received a lot of attention and many bug fixes that have resulted in a better accessibility support. We are quite pleased with the progress thus far towards making content viewed in Web compellingly accessible for Orca users.
</p>
<p>
diff --git a/help/C/admins-xdg.page b/help/C/admins-xdg.page
index 8adac9d..24c616f 100644
--- a/help/C/admins-xdg.page
+++ b/help/C/admins-xdg.page
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
</p>
<p>
- <link href="http://www.freedesktop.org";>FreeDesktop</link> therefore issued a
+ <link href="http://www.freedesktop.org";>freedesktop.org</link> therefore issued a
<link href="http://standards.freedesktop.org/basedir-spec/latest/ar01s03.html";
>recommended solution</link> for this problem.
</p>
diff --git a/help/C/developers-deprecations.page b/help/C/developers-deprecations.page
index ed70e08..2352f1c 100644
--- a/help/C/developers-deprecations.page
+++ b/help/C/developers-deprecations.page
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
<!-- libsecret 1.0 migration: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=679893 and https://mail.gnome.org/archives/desktop-devel-list/2012-March/msg00086.html -->
<item><p>
Several packages now use <link href="http://developer.gnome.org/libsecret/0.9/migrating.html";><app>libsecret</app> instead of gnome-keyring</link>, such as <app>Disks</app>, <app>empathy</app>, <app>gvfs</app>, <app>vinagre</app>, and <app>vino</app>.</p>
- <p>The <sys>libsecret</sys> library is a new client for the <link href="http://standards.freedesktop.org/secret-service/";>Secret Service DBus API</link>. It allows storage of passwords in a common way on the desktop.
+ <p>The <sys>libsecret</sys> library is a new client for the <link href="http://standards.freedesktop.org/secret-service/";>Secret Service D-Bus API</link>. It allows storage of passwords in a common way on the desktop.
<!-- TODO:XXX: Check bugs 679849 (NetworkManager), 679851 (gnome-shell), 679855 (evince), 679870 (tracker) and 679918 (epiphany) and add them in case they made it on time before hardcode freeze! -->
</p></item>
<!-- gstreamer 1.0 migration: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=679412 -->
diff --git a/help/C/developers-gtk.page b/help/C/developers-gtk.page
index 666035b..bb5fbfc 100644
--- a/help/C/developers-gtk.page
+++ b/help/C/developers-gtk.page
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
<item><p>
<link href="http://developer.gnome.org/gtk3/3.6/GtkSearchEntry.html";>GtkSearchEntry</link> is a new subclass of GtkEntry that is set
up to be used as a search entry; this is widely used to
- ensure consistent behaviour and appearance of search entries.
+ ensure consistent behavior and appearance of search entries.
</p></item>
<item><p>
GtkEntry lets you set Pango attributes for the text
diff --git a/help/C/developers-misc.page b/help/C/developers-misc.page
index e0e72e6..83a6793 100644
--- a/help/C/developers-misc.page
+++ b/help/C/developers-misc.page
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#developers" group="#last"/>
- <desc>Further GNOME Platform improvements</desc>
+ <desc>Further GNOME Platform improvements.</desc>
<credit type="author">
<name its:translate="no">Andre Klapper</name>
<email its:translate="no">ak-47 gmx net</email>
@@ -20,10 +20,10 @@
</license>
</info>
- <title>And more...</title>
+ <title>And More...</title>
<section id="plans">
- <title>Further improvements in 3.6</title>
+ <title>Further Improvements in 3.6</title>
<p>Other GNOME Platform improvements in GNOME &gnomeversion; include:</p>
<list>
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ GNOME's default <sys>GSettings</sys> backend <sys>dconf</sys> received a massive
<link href="http://developer.gnome.org/rest/";><sys>librest</sys></link>, the API for accessing RESTful web services, received HTTP authentication support.
</p></item>
<item><p>
-All <sys>gvfs</sys> utilities, as well as commandline utilities that are part
+All <sys>gvfs</sys> utilities, as well as command line utilities that are part
of <sys>GLib</sys> and <sys>GTK+</sys> now include manual pages.
</p></item>
</list>
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ of <sys>GLib</sys> and <sys>GTK+</sys> now include manual pages.
<list>
<item><p>
<sys>libgnome-keyring</sys> will be completely <link href="developer.gnome.org/libsecret/0.9/migrating.html">deprecated in favor of <sys>libsecret</sys></link>.</p>
- <p>The <sys>libsecret</sys> library is a new client for the <link href="http://standards.freedesktop.org/secret-service/";>Secret Service DBus API</link>. It allows storage of passwords in a common way on the desktop.
+ <p>The <sys>libsecret</sys> library is a new client for the <link href="http://standards.freedesktop.org/secret-service/";>Secret Service D-Bus API</link>. It allows storage of passwords in a common way on the desktop.
</p></item>
<!-- https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=678610 -->
<item><p>
diff --git a/help/C/i18n-ibus.page b/help/C/i18n-ibus.page
index 2c99327..d4de340 100644
--- a/help/C/i18n-ibus.page
+++ b/help/C/i18n-ibus.page
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
Options for the <gui>Compose Key</gui>, as well as the <gui>Alternative Characters Key</gui> (also known as the 3rd level chooser key) can also be found in the <gui>Shortcuts</gui> tab of the <gui>Keyboard</gui> settings.
</p></item>
<item><p>
- Other keyboard layout customisation options can now be found in <gui>GNOME Tweak Tool</gui>.
+ Other keyboard layout customization options can now be found in <gui>GNOME Tweak Tool</gui>.
</p></item>
</list>
</note>
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 76ba58f..59990b8 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -35,9 +35,9 @@
<p>
GNOME 3.6 is the latest update to GNOME 3 and represents 6 months of work by the GNOME
Project. It delivers a number of major new features,
- including a reworked Activities Overview, updated Message Tray and notifications, an enhanced
- Files application, as well as improved Accessibility support and integrated input sources for
- using different languages. It also incorporates a host of smaller enhancements. Together, these
+ including a reworked Activities Overview, updated message tray and notifications, an enhanced
+ Files application, as well as improved accessibility support and integrated input sources for
+ using different languages. It also incorporates a host of smaller enhancements. Together, these
changes make GNOME 3 better than ever before.
</p>
<p>
@@ -64,11 +64,11 @@
<section id="users.core" style="2column">
- <title>What's New In Our Core User Interface</title>
+ <title>What's New in Our Core User Interface</title>
</section>
<section id="users.apps" style="2column">
- <title>What's New In Our Applications</title>
+ <title>What's New in Our Applications</title>
</section>
<section id="a11y" style="2column">
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
</section>
<section id="admins" style="2column">
- <title>What's New For Administrators</title>
+ <title>What's New for Administrators</title>
</section>
<section id="developers" style="2column">
diff --git a/help/C/users-boxes.page b/help/C/users-boxes.page
index b1eb5c2..f157ec2 100644
--- a/help/C/users-boxes.page
+++ b/help/C/users-boxes.page
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
</p>
<note style="sidebar">
- <title>Did you know?</title>
+ <title>Did You Know?</title>
<p>
A development version of <app>Boxes</app> was used for various screenshots included
@@ -36,24 +36,24 @@
<p>
A lot of effort has been put into making <app>Boxes</app> work smoothly, e.g. when
- resizing the window of a running VM. The new features implemented in 3.6
+ resizing the window of a running virtual machine. The new features implemented in 3.6
include:
</p>
<list>
<item><p>Search: Both inside <app>Boxes</app> and in the overview mode of GNOME
- Shell</p></item>
- <item><p>Much improved look and feel and animations</p></item>
+ Shell.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Much improved look and feel and animations.</p></item>
<item><p>Reworked selection mode to make more consistent with GNOME
- Documents</p></item>
+ Documents.</p></item>
<item><p>Allow customizing a box memory and disk size before it's
- created</p></item>
+ created.</p></item>
<item><p>Make it possible to force the shutdown of hung boxes through
- an application menu item</p></item>
- <item><p>Allow renaming of boxes</p></item>
- <item><p>Indicate installations in progress</p></item>
- <item><p>Allow favoriting boxes</p></item>
- <item><p>Create VM based on host capabilities and architecture</p></item>
+ an application menu item.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Allow renaming of boxes.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Indicate installations in progress.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Allow favoriting boxes.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Create virtual machines based on host capabilities and architecture.</p></item>
</list>
</page>
diff --git a/help/C/users-clocks.page b/help/C/users-clocks.page
index d1c6d9b..51aa3ea 100644
--- a/help/C/users-clocks.page
+++ b/help/C/users-clocks.page
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
</comment>
<p>
- <app>Clocks</app> is an application to handle world times. It provides alarms, a stopwatch and a timer. It is not ready for primetime yet, however we want to show you some development screenshots to get your appetite going for 3.8:
+ <app>Clocks</app> is an application to handle world times. It provides alarms, a stopwatch and a timer. It is not ready for prime time yet, however we want to show you some development screenshots to get your appetite going for 3.8:
</p>
<media type="image" src="figures/lookingforward-clocks.png" />
diff --git a/help/C/users-core.page b/help/C/users-core.page
index 6f86da9..c537d2c 100644
--- a/help/C/users-core.page
+++ b/help/C/users-core.page
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
</license>
</info>
- <title>And more...</title>
+ <title>And More...</title>
<p>
GNOME 3.6 includes many smaller changes, including bug fixes as well as enhancements.
diff --git a/help/C/users-disks.page b/help/C/users-disks.page
index 816c3f9..849fe36 100644
--- a/help/C/users-disks.page
+++ b/help/C/users-disks.page
@@ -20,13 +20,13 @@
<title>Disks</title>
<note style="sidebar">
- <title>Did you know?</title>
+ <title>Did You Know?</title>
<p>
The majority of the intelligence of <app>Disks</app> is being developed as part of
the <cmd
- href="http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/udisks";>udisks2</cmd>
- Freedesktop project.
+ href="http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/udisks";>udisks</cmd>
+ freedesktop.org project.
</p>
</note>
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
<list>
<item><p>Power management as well as acoustic levels can be configured for ATA disks.</p></item>
<item><p>A Zzz icon is shown for any disk which is in standby mode.</p></item>
- <item><p>You can also manually put a disk into standby mode and also wake it up</p></item>
+ <item><p>You can also manually put a disk into standby mode and also wake it up.</p></item>
<item><p>Ability to securely erase a disk.</p></item>
<item><p>Long-running jobs are now displayed in the <app>Disks</app> user interface along with a way to cancel the job as well.</p></item>
<item><p>By popular demand, the benchmark feature that was lost in the <app>Disks</app>/<sys>udisks</sys> rewrite that landed in GNOME 3.4 is now back.</p></item>
diff --git a/help/C/users-empathy.page b/help/C/users-empathy.page
index 050c1a7..143b4bc 100644
--- a/help/C/users-empathy.page
+++ b/help/C/users-empathy.page
@@ -33,10 +33,10 @@
contacts consistent with <app>Contacts</app>. Groups have been disabled by
default as we noticed most people do not make use of them. Instead, we make
contacts easier to find using the integrated live search. If you still want
- to group contacts, this can be enabled in <gui>preferences</gui>.
+ to group contacts, this can be enabled in <gui>Preferences</gui>.
</p>
<p>
- <gui>Top contacts</gui> are always displayed at the top of the contact list.
+ <gui>Top Contacts</gui> are always displayed at the top of the contact list.
This contains the contacts that you have tagged as favorites but also those
contacts that you talk to the most often.
</p>
diff --git a/help/C/users-evolution.page b/help/C/users-evolution.page
index 09b2345..3bd01ec 100644
--- a/help/C/users-evolution.page
+++ b/help/C/users-evolution.page
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
<list>
<!-- http://git.gnome.org/browse/evolution/commit/?id=6bd1c6833a2c51898ac45865767dd01ba66a95c5 and followup commits. http://www.progdan.cz/2012/03/evolution-meets-webkit/ and see http://mbarnes.livejournal.com/5100.html -->
<item><p>
-Rendering of email now uses <sys>Webkit</sys> which improves the display of HTML enabled mail.
+Rendering of email now uses <sys>WebKit</sys> which improves the display of HTML enabled mail.
</p></item>
<!-- https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=245025 -->
<item><p>
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ GroupWise accounts can now receive emails via IMAPX and send via SOAP.
</p></item>
<!-- https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=329616 -->
<item><p>
-The "Summary" field in the event/task/memo editor now supports spell checking
+The 'Summary' field in the event/task/memo editor now supports spell checking.
</p></item>
<item><p>
Exchange accounts can now be configured using <app>GNOME Online Accounts</app>.
diff --git a/help/C/users-files.page b/help/C/users-files.page
index 8df54f9..7fac862 100644
--- a/help/C/users-files.page
+++ b/help/C/users-files.page
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
<app>Files</app> has never had an effective search capability.
With GNOME 3.6, this omission has finally been rectified. The new version includes
a powerful search feature, which can be used by simply typing. It is case insensitive,
- can search for hidden files or directories, can work recursively, doesn't only
+ can search for hidden files or directories, can work recursively, does not only
do prefix matching, can search metadata, has ranked results based on a
weighting algorithm, and can work on indexed and non-indexed directories.
</p>
@@ -76,8 +76,8 @@
</p>
<p>
Another addition that makes a common action that little bit easier is the <gui>New
- Folder with Selection</gui> context action. This makes a common action - selecting some
- files and putting them in a new folder - more immediate and less laborious.
+ Folder with Selection</gui> context action. This makes a common action â selecting some
+ files and putting them in a new folder â more immediate and less laborious.
</p>
</section>
diff --git a/help/C/users-lock-screen.page b/help/C/users-lock-screen.page
index f2018f0..0c0522c 100644
--- a/help/C/users-lock-screen.page
+++ b/help/C/users-lock-screen.page
@@ -44,11 +44,11 @@
<p>
The login screen has also been updated for GNOME 3.6, and has a new visual style and other minor enhancemets.
- Combined with the new lock scren, the result is a smoother experience when you log in or unlock your computer.
+ Combined with the new lock screen, the result is a smoother experience when you log in or unlock your computer.
</p>
<note style="hint">
- <title>Keyboard shortcut</title>
+ <title>Keyboard Shortcut</title>
<p>The new lock screen is of course accessible by more than a mouse. Press
either <key>Return</key> or <key>Escape</key> to get to the password prompt.</p>
</note>
diff --git a/help/C/users-message-tray.page b/help/C/users-message-tray.page
index af8a6a8..08c3858 100644
--- a/help/C/users-message-tray.page
+++ b/help/C/users-message-tray.page
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
<title>Message Tray</title>
<p>
- The Message Tray has received some major updates for GNOME 3.6. Many of these
+ The message tray has received some major updates for GNOME 3.6. Many of these
changes were based on feedback and testing, which indicated some interaction
issues with the old tray design.
</p>
@@ -48,11 +48,11 @@
which many people had problems with â has been replaced. Instead, the whole
of the bottom screen edge now acts as a trigger area; letting the mouse rest
there for a short period will cause the tray to appear. We plan to improve
- this behaviour in subsequent releases.
+ this behavior in subsequent releases.
</p>
<note style="hint">
- <title>Keyboard shortcut</title>
+ <title>Keyboard Shortcut</title>
<p>For the first time, the message tray is also accessible with the keyboard.
Press <keyseq><key>Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq> to bring up the message tray.</p>
</note>
diff --git a/help/C/users-notifications.page b/help/C/users-notifications.page
index b52637b..4a4c432 100644
--- a/help/C/users-notifications.page
+++ b/help/C/users-notifications.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#users.core"/>
- <desc>Smarter, more noticable, easier to dismiss.</desc>
+ <desc>Smarter, more noticeable, easier to dismiss.</desc>
<credit type="author">
<name its:translate="no">Allan Day</name>
<email its:translate="no">allanpday gmail com</email>
@@ -25,21 +25,21 @@
<!-- TODO:XXX - screenshot -->
<p>
- GNOME's notification popups have had quite a few refinements for 3.6. For the new
+ GNOME's notification pop-ups have had quite a few refinements for 3.6. For the new
release, we have made them:
</p>
<list>
<item><p>
- Smarter: notifications are smarter in GNOME 3.6. If you're running a
- fullscreen application or game, we only show you your important
+ Smarter: notifications are smarter in GNOME 3.6. If you are running a
+ full screen application or game, we only show you your important
notifications. All other notifications are delayed until you stop using
- your fullscreen application.
+ your full screen application.
</p></item>
<item><p>
- More noticable: we've tweaked the behavior of notification popups to make sure that
+ More noticeable: we have tweaked the behavior of notification pop-ups to make sure that
you see all your notifications. No longer will you miss out on a
- notification as we only hide a notification after we know you've
+ notification as we only hide a notification after we know you have
interacted with the system.
</p></item>
<item><p>
diff --git a/help/C/users-system-settings.page b/help/C/users-system-settings.page
index bf2ba61..70b710b 100644
--- a/help/C/users-system-settings.page
+++ b/help/C/users-system-settings.page
@@ -47,17 +47,17 @@
<p>
In 3.6, we show the current background as a large thumbnail. When clicked,
you can easily select either a background, one of your pictures or a
- background color. To make your choice easier, we've made the previews
+ background color. To make your choice easier, we have made the previews
bigger.
</p>
<p>
- We've also refreshed the default background in 3.6, and have updated the
+ We have also refreshed the default background in 3.6, and have updated the
choice of alternative backgrounds to include new images. Setting a single
color as a background has also been improved and features a new set of colors.
</p> <note style="tip">
<title>Tip</title> <p>
<app xref="users-files">Files</app> and the <app>Image Viewer</app> allow
- you to select any picture as a background. Additionally, you can drag
+ you to select any picture as a background. Additionally, you can drag
a new picture to the <gui>Background</gui> window.
</p>
</note>
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@
GNOME 3.6 includes revamped <gui>Mouse & Touchpad</gui> settings.
The old settings panel was overhauled to provide a set of options that are much easier
to understand. It also features a pretty new test area which enables scrolling settings
- to be tested - something that wasn't possible previously.
+ to be tested â something that was not possible previously.
</p>
<p>
If you use a touchpad, the new <gui>Content sticks to fingers</gui> setting allows
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
<p>
Logging into <gui>Online Accounts</gui> has been made nicer, as login pages can now
appear in your language. We also try to show the mobile version for the
- login pages, which makes it quickier and easier to use the page.
+ login pages, which makes it quicker and easier to use the page.
</p>
<p>
We have also added several new types of Online Accounts:
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@
<p>
The <gui>Sound</gui> panel has been made easier to use by removing the <gui>Hardware</gui> tab.
Instead, the device lists in the <gui>Input</gui> and <gui>Output</gui> tabs offer more
- fine-grained choices. This improvement relies on <sys>Pulseaudio 2.0</sys>.
+ fine-grained choices. This improvement relies on <sys>PulseAudio 2.0</sys>.
</p>
</section>
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@
A major new feature in GNOME 3.6 is the addition of Enterprise logins (also called Active
Directory or Kerberos logins). This allows GNOME to be used in centrally managed and
corporate environments in a much more integrated manner. Users can enroll their computer with
- an enterprise network, and use their enterprise username and password to log into GNOME.
+ an enterprise network, and use their enterprise user name and password to log into GNOME.
</p>
</section>
@@ -177,9 +177,9 @@
network. You can also enter a printer network address directly.
</p>
<p>
- It is now possible to select a different driver (or ppd file) for a printer,
+ It is now possible to select a different driver (or PPD file) for a printer,
by clicking on the <gui>Model</gui> field. The <gui style="button">Options</gui>
- button also lets you modify the default values for many printer options that are
+ button also lets you modify the default values for many printer options that are
otherwise available in the print dialog.
</p>
</section>
diff --git a/help/C/users-user-menu.page b/help/C/users-user-menu.page
index c209055..3fc84aa 100644
--- a/help/C/users-user-menu.page
+++ b/help/C/users-user-menu.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#users.core"/>
- <desc>Streamlined user menu with a Power Off by default</desc>
+ <desc>Streamlined user menu with a Power Off by default.</desc>
<credit type="author">
<name its:translate="no">Olav Vitters</name>
<email its:translate="no">olav vitters nl</email>
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
</p>
<p>
- We have also endeavoured to make the menu as smart as possible. As a result, the
+ We have also endeavored to make the menu as smart as possible. As a result, the
<gui style="menuitem">Switch User</gui> and <gui
style="menuitem">Log Out</gui> items are now only shown when there is more than one
user.
diff --git a/help/C/users-web.page b/help/C/users-web.page
index 34dac5d..d58a815 100644
--- a/help/C/users-web.page
+++ b/help/C/users-web.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#users.apps"/>
- <desc>Addition of The Overview, better fullscreen mode and a beta of
+ <desc>Addition of The Overview, better full screen mode and a beta of
WebKit2.</desc>
<credit type="author">
<name its:translate="no">Xan Lopez</name>
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
<title>Web</title>
<note style="sidebar">
- <title>Did you know?</title>
+ <title>Did You Know?</title>
<p>
GNOME <app>Web</app> is using
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
<p>
The most noticeable difference in 3.6 is the first version of
- "The Overview". While this is still an evolving design,
+ 'The Overview'. While this is still an evolving design,
it already is a solid improvement to the user experience.
</p>
@@ -63,12 +63,12 @@
</section>
<section id="users-web-fullscreen">
- <title>Fullscreen mode</title>
+ <title>Full Screen Mode</title>
<subtitle>Now with more full and more screen!</subtitle>
<p>
- For a long time <app>Web</app>'s fullscreen mode was somewhat awkward. You'd still
- get a toolbar, so it wasn't really fullscreen, plus it would have a
+ For a long time <app>Web</app>'s full screen mode was somewhat awkward. You would still
+ get a toolbar, so it was not really full screen, plus it would have a
strange button embedded in it telling you how to go back to the safety of
the vanilla mode. With
more HTML5 games or presentations done inside browsers, it was about time
@@ -78,10 +78,10 @@
</section>
<section id="users-web-other">
- <title>Other bits and pieces</title>
+ <title>Other Bits and Pieces</title>
<p>
- As usual there are lots of additional features and bugfixes, too numerous
+ As usual there are lots of additional features and bug fixes, too numerous
to mention: automatic session recovery, tab-less mode, Do Not Track, using
SoupTLD to make the URL completion smarter (so it can automatically figure
out that <sys>google.com</sys> is a URL, but <sys>foo.bar</sys> is a
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