[gnome-user-docs] minor tweaks to accounts and contacts pages



commit 5344e322bf61940ce3183f9a03cc29ff08775d40
Author: Jeremy Bicha <jbicha ubuntu com>
Date:   Sun Sep 16 11:20:38 2012 -0400

    minor tweaks to accounts and contacts pages

 gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page             |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page          |    4 +++-
 gnome-help/C/accounts.page                 |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/clock-set.page                |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page           |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/clock.page                    |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/color-assignprofiles.page     |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-camera.page   |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-printer.page  |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-scanner.page  |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-screen.page   |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/color-calibrationdevices.page |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/color-canshareprofiles.page   |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/color-gettingprofiles.page    |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/color-howtoimport.page        |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/color-missingvcgt.page        |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/color-virtualdevice.page      |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/color-whatisprofile.page      |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/color-whatisspace.page        |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/color-why-calibrate.page      |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/color-whyimportant.page       |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/contacts-connect.page         |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/contacts-link-unlink.page     |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/contacts-setup.page           |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/contacts.page                 |    2 +-
 25 files changed, 28 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page b/gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page
index d3a26ff..5ebc8de 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="accounts-add">
 
 <info>
-  <desc>Connect an online account</desc>
+  <desc>Connect an online account.</desc>
   <link type="guide" xref="accounts"/>
   <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-14" status="draft"/>
   <credit type="author">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page b/gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page
index c5fcbfb..ff5d9f6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="accounts-remove">
 
 <info>
-  <desc>Completely remove an online account</desc>
+  <desc>Completely remove an online account.</desc>
   <link type="guide" xref="accounts"/>
   <link type="seealso" xref="accounts-disable-service"/>
   <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-15" status="draft"/>
@@ -16,6 +16,8 @@
 <title>Remove an account</title>
 
 <steps>
+  <item><p>Open the <gui>Online Accounts</gui> settings from the Activities
+  overview.</p></item>
   <item><p>Select the account you wish to remove.</p></item>
   <item><p>Click the <key>-</key> button in the lower-left portion of the
    window.</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/accounts.page b/gnome-help/C/accounts.page
index 67d6108..3c971d9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/accounts.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/accounts.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="accounts">
 
 <info>
-  <desc>Access online services like Facebook and Google Mail.</desc>
+  <desc>Access online services like Facebook and Google.</desc>
 
   <link type="guide" xref="prefs"/>
 
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 
 <title>Online accounts</title>
 
-<p>You can enter your login details for some online services (like Google Mail
+<p>You can enter your login details for some online services (like Google
 and Facebook) into the <gui>Online Accounts</gui> window. This will let you
 easily access your calendar, mail, chat accounts, and similar from those
 applications without having to enter your account details again.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
index 40bf935..43b0736 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <desc>Click the clock on the top bar and go into the <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui>
     to alter the date/time.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
index 3f86d8f..cde3107 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="clock"/>
     <desc>Add other timezones so you can see what time it is in other cities.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock.page b/gnome-help/C/clock.page
index d455da7..c58578e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock.page
@@ -13,6 +13,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
 
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-assignprofiles.page b/gnome-help/C/color-assignprofiles.page
index 8773edc..5936f0e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-assignprofiles.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-assignprofiles.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="color-whatisprofile"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="color-why-calibrate"/>
     <desc>Look in <guiseq><gui>System Settings</gui><gui>Color</gui></guiseq> for the option to change this.</desc>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Richard Hughes</name>
       <email>richard hughsie com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-camera.page b/gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-camera.page
index 72ee12a..c3819ae 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-camera.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-camera.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="color-calibrate-scanner" />
     <link type="seealso" xref="color-calibrate-screen" />
     <desc>Calibrating your camera is important to capture accurate colors.</desc>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Richard Hughes</name>
       <email>richard hughsie com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-printer.page b/gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-printer.page
index 24d7bf9..29b15c9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-printer.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-printer.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="color-calibrate-screen" />
     <link type="seealso" xref="color-calibrate-camera" />
     <desc>Calibrating your printer is important to print accurate colors.</desc>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Richard Hughes</name>
       <email>richard hughsie com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-scanner.page b/gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-scanner.page
index 48a9562..50bd289 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-scanner.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-scanner.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="color-calibrate-screen" />
     <link type="seealso" xref="color-calibrate-camera" />
     <desc>Calibrating your scanner is important to capture accurate colors.</desc>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Richard Hughes</name>
       <email>richard hughsie com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-screen.page b/gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-screen.page
index 0461383..6319322 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-screen.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-calibrate-screen.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="color-calibrate-scanner" />
     <link type="seealso" xref="color-calibrate-camera" />
     <desc>Calibrating your screen is important to display accurate colors.</desc>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Richard Hughes</name>
       <email>richard hughsie com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-calibrationdevices.page b/gnome-help/C/color-calibrationdevices.page
index 80818f2..b72aa76 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-calibrationdevices.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-calibrationdevices.page
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
       <name>Richard Hughes</name>
       <email>richard hughsie com</email>
     </credit>
+
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-canshareprofiles.page b/gnome-help/C/color-canshareprofiles.page
index f8dbdea..2c2fe75 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-canshareprofiles.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-canshareprofiles.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="color#calibration"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="color-whatisprofile"/>
     <desc>Sharing color profiles is never a good idea as hardware changes over time.</desc>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Richard Hughes</name>
       <email>richard hughsie com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-gettingprofiles.page b/gnome-help/C/color-gettingprofiles.page
index 8d46dda..ca86686 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-gettingprofiles.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-gettingprofiles.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="color-whatisprofile"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="color-missingvcgt"/>
     <desc>Color profiles are provided by vendors and can be generated yourself.</desc>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Richard Hughes</name>
       <email>richard hughsie com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-howtoimport.page b/gnome-help/C/color-howtoimport.page
index ecae7a1..bbae556 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-howtoimport.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-howtoimport.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="color-whatisprofile"/>
     <desc>Color profiles can be easily imported by opening them.</desc>
     <link type="seealso" xref="color-assignprofiles"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Richard Hughes</name>
       <email>richard hughsie com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-missingvcgt.page b/gnome-help/C/color-missingvcgt.page
index b1bec1b..9794eb3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-missingvcgt.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-missingvcgt.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="color#problems"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="color-gettingprofiles"/>
     <desc>Whole-screen color correction modifies all the screen colors on all windows.</desc>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Richard Hughes</name>
       <email>richard hughsie com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-virtualdevice.page b/gnome-help/C/color-virtualdevice.page
index c418ba8..6768593 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-virtualdevice.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-virtualdevice.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="color#profiles"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="color-why-calibrate"/>
     <desc>A virtual device is a color managed device that is not connected to the computer.</desc>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Richard Hughes</name>
       <email>richard hughsie com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-whatisprofile.page b/gnome-help/C/color-whatisprofile.page
index e6e88ea..e37ac59 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-whatisprofile.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-whatisprofile.page
@@ -5,6 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="color#profiles"/>
     <desc>A color profile is a simple file that expresses a color space or device response.</desc>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Richard Hughes</name>
       <email>richard hughsie com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-whatisspace.page b/gnome-help/C/color-whatisspace.page
index b53dcc5..9183fce 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-whatisspace.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-whatisspace.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="color#profiles"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="color-whatisprofile"/>
     <desc>A color space is a defined range of colors.</desc>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Richard Hughes</name>
       <email>richard hughsie com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-why-calibrate.page b/gnome-help/C/color-why-calibrate.page
index 9ef2470..8f65bbe 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-why-calibrate.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-why-calibrate.page
@@ -5,6 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="color#calibration"/>
     <desc>Calibrating is important if you care about the colors you display or print.</desc>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Richard Hughes</name>
       <email>richard hughsie com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-whyimportant.page b/gnome-help/C/color-whyimportant.page
index be27c3c..33db8c3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-whyimportant.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-whyimportant.page
@@ -5,6 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="color"/>
     <desc>Color management is important for designers, photographers and artists.</desc>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Richard Hughes</name>
       <email>richard hughsie com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/contacts-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/contacts-connect.page
index da5c4a3..270bd27 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/contacts-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/contacts-connect.page
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Email, chat with, or phone a contact</desc>
+    <desc>Email, chat with, or phone a contact.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Connect with your contact</title>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/contacts-link-unlink.page b/gnome-help/C/contacts-link-unlink.page
index 6f68f49..5df5c9f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/contacts-link-unlink.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/contacts-link-unlink.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 
     <link type="guide" xref="contacts"/>
 
-    <desc>Combine information for a contact from multiple sources</desc>
+    <desc>Combine information for a contact from multiple sources.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/contacts-setup.page b/gnome-help/C/contacts-setup.page
index 73b2ac9..90d44d3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/contacts-setup.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/contacts-setup.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="contacts-setup">
   <info>
-    <link type="guide" xref="contacts"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="contacts" group="#first"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-13" status="draft"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/contacts.page b/gnome-help/C/contacts.page
index e038cdf..f0b9bfd 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/contacts.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/contacts.page
@@ -21,6 +21,6 @@
 <title>Contacts</title>
 
 <p>Use <app>Contacts</app> to store, access or edit information for your
- contacts, locally or in your <gui>Online Accounts</gui>.</p>
+ contacts, locally or in your <link xref="accounts">Online Accounts</link>.</p>
 
 </page>
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