[release-notes/gnome-3-6] Mark TODOs, add markup, remove dup Kerberos section

[Andre Klapper <aklapper src gnome org>]

commit ed1f8334dfef9079474608a1398d437f0ccd0b7c
Author: Andre Klapper <a9016009 gmx de>
Date:   Sat Sep 15 15:34:57 2012 +0200

    Mark TODOs, add markup, remove dup Kerberos section

 help/C/users-system-settings.page |   26 ++++++++++++--------------
 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/users-system-settings.page b/help/C/users-system-settings.page
index 8c556a9..827d6bd 100644
--- a/help/C/users-system-settings.page
+++ b/help/C/users-system-settings.page
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
   <media type="image" src="figures/users-system-settings.png"/>
 
   <p>
-    GNOME 3.6 comes with loads of changes within System Settings. XXX - shortly
+    GNOME 3.6 comes with loads of changes within System Settings. TODO:XXX - shortly
     describe them
   </p>
   <p>
@@ -74,11 +74,11 @@
   <section id="mouse-and-trackpad" style="2column">
     <title>Mouse &amp; Trackpad</title>
     <p>
-      natural scroll for touchpad;
+      TODO:XXX: natural scroll for touchpad;
       http://blogs.gnome.org/mclasen/2012/08/21/rounding-out-the-3-6-feature-list/
     </p>
     <p>
-      new test area to test your settings
+      TODO:XXX:new test area to test your settings
     </p>
   </section>
 
@@ -103,14 +103,12 @@
       </item><item>
         <p>Microsoft Exchange</p>
         <p>We now support Exchange through Exchange Web Services (EWS).
-        Evolution will continue to allow you to setup EWS from its preferences
+        <app>Evolution</app> continues to allow you to setup EWS from its preferences
         so that it can run in other environments.</p>
       </item><item> <p>Windows Live</p>
         <p>Windows Live has been enhanced to Include support for Skydrive allowing people 
            access documents on Skydrive through the Documents app like you can with your 
            Google account.</p>
-      </item><item> <p>Enterprise Login </p>  <p>You'll now be able to authenticate against an LDAP or
-Active Directory server using Kerberos.</p>
       </item>
     </list>
   </section>
@@ -121,10 +119,10 @@ Active Directory server using Kerberos.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/users-system-settings-sound.png" />
 
     <p>
-      The Sound panel has been simplified by removing the Hardware tab.
+      The Sound panel has been simplified by removing the <gui>Hardware</gui> tab.
       It is no longer necessary, because the device lists on the Input
       and Output tabs offer more fine-grained choices now. This improvement
-      relies on pulseaudio 2.0.
+      relies on <sys>Pulseaudio 2.0</sys>.
     </p>
   </section>
 
@@ -134,7 +132,7 @@ Active Directory server using Kerberos.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/users-system-settings-universal-access.png" />
 
     <p>
-     The Universal Access settings has been redesigned in order to offer a more
+     The <gui>Universal Access</gui> settings have been redesigned in order to offer a more
      coherent and easy to use experience. All the elements of the Universal
      Access settings follow the same layout in all the sections and it helps to
      go through all the settings in a consistent way. The zoom options dialog
@@ -173,7 +171,7 @@ Active Directory server using Kerberos.</p>
   <section id="network" style="2column">
     <title>Network</title>
 
-    <comment><p>XXX screenshot ?</p></comment>
+    <comment><p>TODO:XXX screenshot ?</p></comment>
 
     <p>
       For wireless connections, the network panel now shows all
@@ -186,10 +184,10 @@ Active Directory server using Kerberos.</p>
   <section id="printers" style="2column">
     <title>Printers</title>
 
-    <comment><p>XXX screenshot ?</p></comment>
+    <comment><p>TODO:XXX screenshot ?</p></comment>
 
     <p>
-      The 'Add New Printer' dialog has been greatly improved; it
+      The <gui>Add New Printer</gui> dialog has been greatly improved; it
       lets you add directly connected printers as well as printers
       discovered on the local network. You can also enter a printer
       network address directly.
@@ -197,11 +195,11 @@ Active Directory server using Kerberos.</p>
 
     <p>
       It is now possible to select a different driver (or ppd file)
-      for a printer, by clicking on the 'Model' field.
+      for a printer, by clicking on the <gui>Model</gui> field.
     </p>
 
     <p>
-      The Options button lets you modify the default values for
+      The <gui style="button">Options</gui> button lets you modify the default values for
       many printer options that are otherwise available in the
       print dialog.
     </p>