[release-notes/gnome-3-6] Shorten Web section, move WebKit2 port to 3.8 section



commit 8af040edbf6ac4415c88b43a85dc544f56bc4272
Author: Andre Klapper <a9016009 gmx de>
Date:   Sat Sep 15 14:05:37 2012 +0200

    Shorten Web section, move WebKit2 port to 3.8 section

 help/C/lookingforward-misc.page |    2 +-
 help/C/users-web.page           |   45 +++++++++-----------------------------
 2 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 35 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/lookingforward-misc.page b/help/C/lookingforward-misc.page
index 23d7632..412fadb 100644
--- a/help/C/lookingforward-misc.page
+++ b/help/C/lookingforward-misc.page
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
       </p></item>
 <!-- https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=678610 -->
       <item><p>
-GNOME's browser <app>Web</app> will be ported to <sys>WebKit2</sys>.
+GNOME's browser <app>Web</app> is being ported to <sys>WebKit2</sys>. If you want to give this work in progress a try, build the browser with <cmd>--with-webkit2</cmd>.
       </p></item>
       <item><p>
 <app>Evolution</app> will use <sys>WebKit</sys> also for composing messages. This will deprecate <sys>GtkHtml</sys>.
diff --git a/help/C/users-web.page b/help/C/users-web.page
index 3f1682b..21d2962 100644
--- a/help/C/users-web.page
+++ b/help/C/users-web.page
@@ -29,26 +29,18 @@
     <title>The Overview</title>
 
     <p>
-      The most noticeable difference in 3.6 is the first iteration of what we
-      call âThe Overviewâ. This is still an evolving design and implementation,
-      but we felt that it was important to land a first version in time for this
-      release that brought actual, solid improvements to the user experience.
+      The most noticeable difference in 3.6 is the first version of
+      âThe Overviewâ. While this is still an evolving design,
+      it already is a solid improvement to the user experience.
     </p>
 
     <p>
-      What the overview currently does is easy to explain: we have changed the
-      blank start page for a grid that holds your most visited pages. Your
+      The previously blank start page was replaced by a grid that holds your
+      most visited pages. Your
       favorite pages are now easier to access, especially on touch devices, and
-      we have put valuable screen real estate to work! But what about if some
-      unwanted visitor ends up there? Fear not, if you need to you can remove
-      them from the grid by clicking on the <gui>X</gui> icon on the top right corner of
-      each snapshot.
-    </p>
-
-    <p>
-      Thereâs more to come, but we feel this is already much better than it was,
-      and fixes a long standing feature request for a better start page
-      experience.
+      valuable screen real estate is used! And if an unwanted page
+      ends up there, you can remove it from the grid by clicking on the 
+      <gui>X</gui> icon on the top right corner of each snapshot.
     </p>
 
   </section>
@@ -61,28 +53,13 @@
     For a long time <app>Web</app>âs fullscreen mode was somewhat awkward. Youâd still
       get a toolbar, so it wasnât really fullscreen, plus it would have a
       strange button embedded in it telling you how to go back to the safety of
-      the vanilla mode. Probably this was fine for the time, but with more and
+      the vanilla mode. With
       more HTML5 games or presentations done inside browsers, it was about time
-      we had way of making your browser show you the full content and nothing
-      but the content. So we just did that:
+      to make your browser show you the full content and nothing
+      but the content. So we just did that.
     </p>
   </section>
 
-  <section id="users-web-webkit2">
-    <title>WebKit2, beta</title>
-
-    <p>
-    Itâs been a long time in the making, but the first bits of the
-    <sys>WebKit2</sys>
-      support are already in the master branch. As we had anticipated for now it
-      is available in beta form, which means we donât build it by default and
-      thereâs still some functionality missing. That being said, it is really
-      usable at this point, and doing the actual porting has helped us a lot in
-      maturing the up and coming next generation of the <sys>WebKit</sys> framework. If you
-      are a developer and want to give it a shot, just build the browser with
-      <cmd>--with-webkit2</cmd>, and youâll notice:
-    </p>
-
     <list>
       <item><p>Increased responsiveness (how amazing the scrolling is!) and
       stability.</p></item>



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