[release-notes/gnome-3-6] message tray: only talk about tray, remove the notifications

[Olav Vitters <ovitters src gnome org>]

commit 084b2943fdb7e034d8cc0d3852d1f7be7b23920b
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date:   Mon Sep 10 11:08:04 2012 +0200

    message tray: only talk about tray, remove the notifications

 help/C/users-message-tray.page |   44 +++++++++++++++------------------------
 1 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 27 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/users-message-tray.page b/help/C/users-message-tray.page
index 4e16a0a..481d0ce 100644
--- a/help/C/users-message-tray.page
+++ b/help/C/users-message-tray.page
@@ -28,16 +28,9 @@
   </comment>
 
   <p>
-   In conception, the GNOME 3 notifications system hits all the right points: give a non-intrusive
-   indication when there is a new notification, let someone inspect it further and respond in place, and provide a
-   place where notifications can be reviewed and interacted with.
-  </p>
-
-  <p>
-   There were, however, issues with the execution of the GNOME 3 notifications model. Accessing the tray was fiddly,
-   the hot corner caused a lot of accidental triggers, and the action to close a notification bubble was also
-   non-obvious. We observed all of these issues during testing, and it was something that we received a lot of
-   feedback on. Well, we listened, and we came up with something better.
+    Based on testing and your feedback, we've learned and heard that there have
+    been some issues with the message tray. Accessing the tray was fiddly, and
+    the hot corner caused a lot of accidental triggers.
   </p>
 
   <p>
@@ -45,29 +38,26 @@
   </p>
 
   <p>
-   The new tray is clearer, better looking, and easier to interact with. It keeps the same schema in place, but it
-   refines the execution so that it is less error-prone and more satisfying to use.
-  </p>
-
-  <p>
-   Instead of overlapping the viewing area, the new tray slides the view up, suggesting that it is in the background,
-   beneath the normal plane of interaction. The items in the tray are also bigger, clearer, and donât move around,
-   making them easier to interact with.
+    The new tray is clearer, better looking, and easier to interact with. It
+    keeps the same schema in place, but it refines the execution so that it is
+    less error-prone and more satisfying to use.
   </p>
 
   <p>
-   The way that the tray is triggered has also been changed. The hot corner â which many people had problems with â
-   has been replaced. Instead, the whole of the bottom screen edge now acts as a trigger area; letting the mouse rest
-   there for a short period will cause the tray to appear. We plan to improve this behaviour in subsequent releases,
-   so that a certain about of pressure against the screen edge is required to open the tray (we need to wait for
-   changes down the stack before we can achieve this).
+    Instead of overlapping the viewing area, the new tray slides the view up,
+    suggesting that it is in the background, beneath the normal plane of
+    interaction. The items in the tray are also bigger, clearer, and donât move
+    around, making them easier to interact with.
   </p>
 
   <p>
-   There are quite a few other changes to notifications included in 3.6. Weâve tweaked the behaviour of the
-   notification popups to make sure that people donât miss them. Close buttons have been added, and the online status
-   of contacts is now indicated with an icon. Altogether, these should make the tray and notifications more effective
-   and easier to use.
+    The way that the tray is triggered has also been changed. The hot corner â
+    which many people had problems with â has been replaced. Instead, the whole
+    of the bottom screen edge now acts as a trigger area; letting the mouse rest
+    there for a short period will cause the tray to appear. We plan to improve
+    this behaviour in subsequent releases, so that a certain about of pressure
+    against the screen edge is required to open the tray (we need to wait for
+    changes down the stack before we can achieve this).
   </p>
 
 </page>