[release-notes/gnome-3-6] improve english in fallback mode page

[Olav Vitters <ovitters src gnome org>]

commit 7d5df88dd23c5956b2da6349f3d3e955a915e06c
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date:   Tue Sep 4 00:46:25 2012 +0200

    improve english in fallback mode page

 help/C/lookingforward-fallbackmode.page |   22 ++++++++++++----------
 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/lookingforward-fallbackmode.page b/help/C/lookingforward-fallbackmode.page
index 8135d2b..dec8153 100644
--- a/help/C/lookingforward-fallbackmode.page
+++ b/help/C/lookingforward-fallbackmode.page
@@ -35,10 +35,10 @@
   </p>
 
   <p>
-    To allow GNOME 3 to be used, a fallback mode was implemented. This was done
-    by changing the <cmd>metacity</cmd> and <cmd>gnome-panel</cmd> components to
-    work like GNOME 3, while still allowing these components to mimic GNOME 2,
-    though that required some work.
+    To allow GNOME 3 to be used in such cases, a fallback mode was implemented.
+    This was done by changing the <cmd>metacity</cmd> and <cmd>gnome-panel</cmd>
+    components to work like GNOME 3, while still allowing these components to
+    mimic GNOME 2; although the latter required some work.
   </p>
 
   <p>
@@ -50,8 +50,7 @@
   <p>
     The fallback mode has become less and less useful as a pure fallback mode
     with recent releases: it's working (mostly), but as GNOME 3 moves on,
-    fallback mode mostly stays the same and the difference between GNOME 3 and
-    fallback mode increases with each GNOME release.
+    fallback mode has mostly stayed the same while GNOME 3 moved on.
   </p>
 
   <p>
@@ -60,15 +59,18 @@
 
   <list>
     <item><p>Almost nobody actively tests fallback mode</p></item>
-    <item><p>It is in maintenance mode (no new features for the core, but bug fixes go in), with no active development since nobody is stepping up (and some required parts, like polkit-gnome, are not maintained at all)</p></item>
-    <item><p>Several apps now require <cmd>clutter</cmd> and will not work in fallback mode (totem, audio/video UI in empathy, cheese, etc.) </p></item>
-    <item><p>some changes in our architecture require additional work to keep things somewhat working in fallback, even though they won't offer the full experience (for example the keyboard configuration)</p></item>
+    <item><p>It is in maintenance mode (no new features for the core, but bug
+    fixes go in), with no active development since nobody is stepping up (and
+    some required parts, like <cmd>polkit-gnome</cmd>, are not maintained at all)</p></item>
+    <item><p>Several applications now require <cmd>clutter</cmd> and will not work in fallback mode (totem, audio/video UI in empathy, cheese, etc.) </p></item>
+    <item><p>Some changes in our architecture require additional work to keep
+    them somewhat working in fallback mode, even though they won't offer the full experience (for example the keyboard configuration)</p></item>
   </list>
 
   <p>
     In addition to these issues, some people would like to improve components
     of the fallback mode to work differently -- but in a way that would make
-    the fallback mode work more like GNOME 2, and diverge from the GNOME 3
+    fallback mode work more like GNOME 2, and diverge from the GNOME 3
     vision. Those contributions are usually blocked because the goal of the
     fallback mode is to provide the GNOME 3 way.
   </p>