[release-notes/gnome-3-4] kill unneeded GNOME mentionings



commit 1683a0343fcf340ad004273ec46a0e40a5b9c690
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date:   Tue Mar 20 21:57:24 2012 +0100

    kill unneeded GNOME mentionings

 help/C/rnusers.xml |   31 ++++++++++++++++---------------
 1 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 548aa8f..f72ebd9 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -21,10 +21,10 @@
     small enhancements. The result is a shinier, more polished, more reliable GNOME 3.
   </para>
   <para>
-    This release also contains some important new developments. GNOME 3 applications have 
+    This release also contains some important new developments. Our applications have 
     been a major focus for recent design and development effort, and a host of applications 
     have had significant updates for this release. You will also see improvements to the 
-    building blocks that make up GNOME 3 applications in &gnomeversion;. This includes smooth 
+    building blocks that our applications have been made with. This includes smooth 
     scrolling, refreshed user interface components, a much refined visual theme and application 
     menus.
   </para>
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
     </para>
 
     <figure id="fig.users.documents">
-      <title>GNOME Documents</title>
+      <title>Documents</title>
         <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
           <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;rnusers.documents.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
     </para>
 
     <figure id="fig.users.contacts">
-      <title>GNOME Contacts</title>
+      <title>Contacts</title>
         <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
           <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;rnusers.contacts.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
@@ -91,7 +91,8 @@
       <application>Disks</application> is the new name for <application>GNOME 
       Disk Utility</application>, and it has had a major overhaul. The tool, 
       which allows you to manage the disks on your computer, has a refreshed 
-      interface and several new features, including enhanced GNOME 3 integration.
+      interface, integrates better with GNOME and also received several new
+      features.
     </para>
     <para>
       Another tool we have updated is <application>Passwords and Keys</application>. 
@@ -135,7 +136,7 @@
     <title>Application Menus</title>
     <para>
       Application menus are a new feature that will become an increasingly
-      familiar part of GNOME applications in the future. These menus, which 
+      familiar part of our applications in the future. These menus, which 
       are labelled with the application's name and can be seen in the top bar, 
       provide a new space for options that affect the whole application (as opposed 
       to specific windows), such as application preferences and documentation.
@@ -158,7 +159,7 @@
   <sect2 id="rnusers.interface-components">
     <title>Refreshed Interface Components</title>
       <para>
-        A number of GNOME application interface components have been modernized this release. 
+        A number of our application interface components have been modernized this release. 
         These changes will make applications more elegant and easier to use. They are 
         particularly focused on removing difficult click targets.
       </para>
@@ -167,13 +168,13 @@
       panel. Select System Settings > Background, then Colors and Gradients from the 
       dropdown. Then select the button in the bottom-right corner of the window.
       Screenshot Guidelines: https://live.gnome.org/GnomeMarketing/ScreenshotGuidelines-->
-        <title>GNOME's New Look Color Chooser</title>
+        <title>Our New Color Chooser Look</title>
           <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
             <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;rnusers.color-chooser.png" format="PNG"/>
           </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
       </figure>
     <para>
-      The GNOME color chooser dialog has been brought up to date for &gnomeversion;. The new 
+      Our color chooser dialog has been brought up to date for &gnomeversion;. The new 
       design provides easy access to a tasteful palette of colors, as well as a mechanism to 
       create a set of custom colors. It is much more straightforward to use than the previous 
       version.
@@ -197,7 +198,7 @@
       increase in quality.
     </para>
     <para>
-      The GNOME 3 visual theme is a lot more polished in this release. Many of the
+      The visual theme is a lot more polished in this release. Many of the
       changes are subtle, but almost every part of the theme has been improved
       in some way. The overall effect is much better looking applications.
     </para>
@@ -231,7 +232,7 @@
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
         <!-- https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=669066 -->
-        GNOME 3's built in screen recorder now produces smoother videos while also using less 
+        Our built in screen recorder now produces smoother videos while also using less 
         system resources. To use it, simply press <keysym>Control+Shift+Alt+R</keysym>.
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
@@ -279,7 +280,7 @@
       </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
     </figure>
     <para>
-      The default GNOME 3 background (or 'wallpaper') has been updated for this release. The new 
+      The default background (or 'wallpaper') has been updated for this release. The new 
       version is a new take on the stripes theme from the previous background. The new background 
       is also dynamic, becoming brighter and more radiant during the day, and dark and shadowy 
       in the evening.
@@ -289,7 +290,7 @@
   <sect2 id="system-settings">
     <title>Improved System Settings</title>
     <para>
-      The GNOME <application>System Settings</application> have received a number of
+      <application>System Settings</application> have received a number of
       updates for &gnomeversion;. These changes include:
     </para>
     <figure id="fig.users.power-settings">
@@ -416,7 +417,7 @@
         that is easier to use.
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
-        Improved integration with GNOME Contacts, which simplifies the user interface and means 
+        Improved integration with <application>Contacts</application>, which simplifies the user interface and means 
         that Empathy can take advantage of Contact's features, such as linking suggestions.
       </para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
@@ -457,7 +458,7 @@ Metabug: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=668503 | gnome-session: http
         </para></listitem>
 <!-- http://blixtra.org/blog/2011/11/23/gnome-system-monitor-swatting-bugs/ -->
         <listitem><para>
-				  <application>GNOME System Monitor</application> has received 
+				  <application>System Monitor</application> has received 
   				<ulink url="http://www.mjmwired.net/kernel/Documentation/cgroups.txt";>Control Groups</ulink> support.
         </para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>



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