[release-notes/gnome-3-4] say our and so on instead of GNOME

[Olav Vitters <ovitters src gnome org>]

commit 5be8fa88f91677cb3fbd22271b12b3bda3eeb13d
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date:   Fri Mar 16 10:14:17 2012 +0100

    say our and so on instead of GNOME

 help/C/rnusers.xml |   29 +++++++++++++++--------------
 1 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 56fbce2..321303d 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -93,16 +93,16 @@
   <sect3 id="application-menus">
     <title>Application Menus</title>
     <para>
-      Application menus are a new feature that will become an increasingly familiar 
-      part of GNOME 3 applications in the future. These menus, which can be accessed 
-      from the GNOME 3 top bar, provide a new space for global application options and 
-      actions, such as application preferences or documention.
+      Application menus are a new feature that will become an increasingly
+      familiar part of our applications in the future. These menus, which can be
+      accessed from the top bar, provide a new space for global application
+      options and actions, such as application preferences or documentation.
     </para>
     <para>
-      A number of GNOME applications, including <application>Documents</application>, 
+      A number of applications, including <application>Documents</application>, 
       <application>Web</application> and <application>Contacts</application>, are 
       providing application menus for this release. In the future they will become 
-      an increasingly common part of GNOME applications.
+      an increasingly common part of our applications.
     </para>
     <para>
       TODO: This might all be lies + structure needs work.
@@ -116,8 +116,8 @@
   <sect3 id="updated-interface-components">
     <title>Updated Interface Components</title>
       <para>
-        A number of GNOME 3's basic interface components have been modernized this release. 
-        These changes will make GNOME applications more elegant and easier to use. They are 
+        A number of basic interface components have been modernized this release. 
+        These changes will make our applications more elegant and easier to use. They are 
         particularly focused on removing difficult click targets.
       </para>
       <figure id="fig.users.colorchooser">
@@ -131,18 +131,19 @@
           </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
       </figure>
     <para>
-      GNOME's color chooser dialog has been brought up to date. The new design provides 
+      The color chooser dialog has been brought up to date. The new design provides 
       easy access to a tasteful palette of colors, and is much more straightforward to 
       use than the previous version.
     </para>
     <para>
-      Scrollbars are another component that have been updated for 3.4. The new version 
-      takes up less space and removes the tiny 'stepper' buttons that traditionally 
-      feature on scrollbars.
+      Scrollbars are another component that have been updated for
+      &gnomeversion;. The new version takes up less space and removes the tiny
+      'stepper' buttons that traditionally feature on scrollbars.
     </para>
     <para>
-      GNOME also has new spin buttons for 3.4. The previous versions were small and fiddly. 
-      The new ones are much easier to use, and look great too.
+      We also included new spin buttons for &gnomeversion;. The previous
+      versions were small and fiddly. The new ones are much easier to use, and
+      look great too.
     </para>
   </sect3>