[release-notes/gnome-3-4] say our and so on instead of GNOME
- From: Olav Vitters <ovitters src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [release-notes/gnome-3-4] say our and so on instead of GNOME
- Date: Fri, 16 Mar 2012 09:11:22 +0000 (UTC)
commit 51b9146d45a975f3b6f05361a8c8741c2bb4be07
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date: Fri Mar 16 10:11:19 2012 +0100
say our and so on instead of GNOME
help/C/rnusers.xml | 12 ++++++------
1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index c4db196..56fbce2 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -30,10 +30,10 @@
<sect3 id="gnome-3-apps">
<title>Updated GNOME 3 Applications</title>
<para>
- Evolving GNOME's applications has been a major theme for this release cycle.
- Our new GNOME 3 applications have all received major updates that will make
- them easier and more pleasurable use. Several existing GNOME applications
- have also received the GNOME 3 treatment.
+ Evolving our applications has been a major theme for this release cycle.
+ Our new applications have all received major updates that will make them
+ easier and more pleasurable use. Several existing applications
+ have also received an overhaul.
</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem><para>
@@ -44,14 +44,14 @@
TODO: printing support too.
</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>
- <application>Epiphany</application>, the GNOME web browser, has been
+ <application>Epiphany</application>, our web browser, has been
renamed <application>Web</application>. It has a beautiful and sleek new
interface, which includes a a redesigned toolbar and 'super menu'. There
have also been major performance improvements, including faster rendering
and history.
</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>
- GNOME's new contact application has also received a major design update.
+ Our new contact application has also received a major design update.
The contacts list has been improved as has the layout of contact details.
<application>Contacts</application> also sports a number of new features,
including inline linking suggestions, and a new avatar selector with built
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