[release-notes/gnome-3-4] say our and so on instead of GNOME



commit 51b9146d45a975f3b6f05361a8c8741c2bb4be07
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date:   Fri Mar 16 10:11:19 2012 +0100

    say our and so on instead of GNOME

 help/C/rnusers.xml |   12 ++++++------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index c4db196..56fbce2 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -30,10 +30,10 @@
   <sect3 id="gnome-3-apps">
     <title>Updated GNOME 3 Applications</title>
     <para>
-      Evolving GNOME's applications has been a major theme for this release cycle. 
-      Our new GNOME 3 applications have all received major updates that will make 
-      them easier and more pleasurable use. Several existing GNOME applications 
-      have also received the GNOME 3 treatment.
+      Evolving our applications has been a major theme for this release cycle. 
+      Our new applications have all received major updates that will make them
+      easier and more pleasurable use. Several existing applications 
+      have also received an overhaul.
     </para>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem><para>
@@ -44,14 +44,14 @@
         TODO: printing support too.
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
-        <application>Epiphany</application>, the GNOME web browser, has been 
+        <application>Epiphany</application>, our web browser, has been 
         renamed <application>Web</application>. It has a beautiful and sleek new 
         interface, which includes a a redesigned toolbar and 'super menu'. There 
         have also been major performance improvements, including faster rendering 
         and history.
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
-        GNOME's new contact application has also received a major design update. 
+        Our new contact application has also received a major design update. 
         The contacts list has been improved as has the layout of contact details. 
         <application>Contacts</application> also sports a number of new features, 
         including inline linking suggestions, and a new avatar selector with built



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