[release-notes/gnome-3-4] [users] minor updates

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 1609387693a004a732674d335346e0b5c30ee57a
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Thu Mar 15 18:49:01 2012 +0000

    [users] minor updates

 help/C/rnusers.xml |   61 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 files changed, 41 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 5df9b13..4ed817f 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -109,8 +109,9 @@
   <sect3 id="updated-interface-components">
     <title>Updated Interface Components</title>
       <para>
-        Several of GNOME 3's basic interface components have been modernized this release. 
-        These changes will make GNOME applications more elegant and easier to use.
+        A number of GNOME 3's basic interface components have been modernized this release. 
+        These changes will make GNOME applications more elegant and easier to use. They are 
+        particularly focused on removing difficult click targets.
       </para>
       <figure id="fig.users.colorchooser">
       <!-- TRANSLATORS: you can get this dialog through the System Settings Background, 
@@ -123,13 +124,18 @@
           </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
       </figure>
     <para>
-      TODO: details about the color chooser.
+      GNOME's color chooser dialog has been brought up to date. The new design provides 
+      easy access to a tasteful palette of colors, and is much more straightforward to 
+      use than the previous version.
     </para>
     <para>
-      TODO: scrollbars
+      Scrollbars are another component that have been updated for 3.4. The new version 
+      takes up less space and removes the tiny 'stepper' buttons that traditionally 
+      feature on scrollbars.
     </para>
     <para>
-      TODO: spin buttons
+      GNOME also has new spin buttons for 3.4. The previous versions were small and fiddly. 
+      The new ones are much easier to use, and look great too.
     </para>
   </sect3>
 
@@ -177,13 +183,13 @@
 		    Better handling of docking stations and plugging of external monitors.
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
-	  	  Support for volume keys on USB speakers and headsets .
+	  	  Support for volume keys on USB speakers and headsets.
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
-        TODO: improved network menu
+        TODO: improved network menu.
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
-        Better looking system modal dialogs
+        Better looking system modal dialogs.
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
         Several important notifications improvements - notification popups will 
@@ -203,15 +209,26 @@
 
   <sect3 id="system-settings">
     <title>Improved System Settings</title>
-    <!-- https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointThree/Features/WacomPanel -->
     <para>
-      TODO: Following up the support for Wacom graphics tablets in 3.2, Calibration 
-      and button mapping for Wacom graphics tablets got implemented in gnome-control-center 
-      3.3.4 and we are able to identify different tablets and their capabilities. It is now 
-      also possible to configure multiple tablets. | 
-      http://www.hadess.net/2012/01/wacom-tablets-in-gnome-34.html and 
-      http://www.hadess.net/2012/02/wacom-tablets-in-gnome-34-part-2.html
+      The GNOME 3 <application>System Settings</application> have received a number 
+      of updates for 3.4..
     </para>
+    <itemizedlist>
+      <listitem><para>
+        Updated Network panel
+      </para></listitem>
+      <listitem><para>
+        Better looking power panel, which includes a redesigned status section.
+      </para></listitem>
+      <listitem><para>
+        Greatly enhanced Wacom graphics tablet support, including calibration and 
+        button mapping, as well as the new ability to configure multiple tablets.
+      </para></listitem>
+      <listitem><para>
+        Easier navigation thanks to the renaming of some panels and an updated 
+        'All Settings' button (which now features a grid icon instead).
+      </para></listitem>
+    </itemizedlist>
   </sect3>
 
 	<sect3 id="user-docs">
@@ -294,8 +311,16 @@
 Metabug: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=668503 | gnome-session: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666891 | gnome-system-monitor: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=667829 | gnome-packagekit: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666788 | control center user accounts: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666573 and https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=658352 | settings-daemon: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666787 | nm: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666783
 -->
 
+  <sect3 id="nautilus-undo">
+    <title>Undo File Operations</title>
+      <para>
+			  The file manager <application>Nautilus</application> provides Undo 
+				support which allows you to revert any of your actions.
+      </para>
+  </sect3>
+
   <sect3 id="sound-juicer">
-    <title>Sound Juicer</title>
+    <title>Better Music Ripping</title>
       <para>
         New metadata fetching facility which provides enhanced support for multi-disc albums.
       </para>
@@ -316,10 +341,6 @@ Metabug: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=668503 | gnome-session: http
         </para></listitem>
 <!-- https://mail.gnome.org/archives/nautilus-list/2012-January/msg00011.html -->
         <listitem><para>
-				  The file manager <application>Nautilus</application> provides Undo 
-				  support which allows you to revert any of your actions.
-        </para></listitem>
-        <listitem><para>
           TODO: gnome-games improvements: https://live.gnome.org/GnomeGames/Modernisation , 
           e.g. using app menus or refreshed look
         </para></listitem>