[gnome-user-docs] Mouse and a11y keys pages marked review



commit 1b63efcea4a4267e7e902f20590a6086ab5465e3
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
Date:   Mon Mar 12 06:07:51 2012 -0400

    Mouse and a11y keys pages marked review

 gnome-help/C/a11y-bouncekeys.page         |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/a11y-dwellclick.page         |   15 ++++++---
 gnome-help/C/a11y-locate-pointer.page     |   18 +++++++---
 gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page        |   11 ++++--
 gnome-help/C/a11y-slowkeys.page           |   18 ++++++++---
 gnome-help/C/a11y-stickykeys.page         |   28 +++++++++++-----
 gnome-help/C/mouse-disabletouchpad.page   |   10 +++--
 gnome-help/C/mouse-doubleclick.page       |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/mouse-drag-threshold.page    |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/mouse-lefthanded.page        |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/mouse-middleclick.page       |   15 +++++---
 gnome-help/C/mouse-mousekeys.page         |   13 +++++---
 gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page |   48 +++++++++++++++-------------
 gnome-help/C/mouse-sensitivity.page       |   10 +++--
 gnome-help/C/mouse-touchpad-click.page    |   10 +++--
 gnome-help/C/mouse-wakeup.page            |   16 +++++----
 gnome-help/C/mouse.page                   |    2 +-
 17 files changed, 136 insertions(+), 86 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-bouncekeys.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-bouncekeys.page
index 6bf8d5a..57276c0 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-bouncekeys.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-bouncekeys.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="keyboard"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="keyboard" group="a11y"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-dwellclick.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-dwellclick.page
index ae9ce14..44e3e26 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-dwellclick.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-dwellclick.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="clicking"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -17,7 +17,8 @@
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>The Hover Click (Dwell Click) feature allows you to click by holding the mouse still.</desc>
+    <desc>The Hover Click (Dwell Click) feature allows you to click by holding
+     the mouse still.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
@@ -33,8 +34,10 @@ let go of the mouse, and then wait for a while before the button will be clicked
 for you.</p>
 
 <steps>
-  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Open <gui>Universal Access</gui> and select the <gui>Pointing and Clicking</gui> tab.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select
+   <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Open <gui>Universal Access</gui> and select the <gui>Pointing and
+   Clicking</gui> tab.</p></item>
   <item><p>Switch <gui>Hover Click</gui> on.</p></item>
 </steps>
 
@@ -44,7 +47,9 @@ you hover. For example, if you select <gui>Secondary Click</gui>, you will
 right-click when you hover. After you double-click, right-click, or drag, you
 will be automatically returned to clicking.</p>
 
-<p>When you hover your mouse pointer over a button and don't move it, it will gradually change color. When it has fully changed color, the button will be clicked.</p>
+<p>When you hover your mouse pointer over a button and don't move it, it will
+ gradually change color. When it has fully changed color, the button will be
+ clicked.</p>
 
 <p>Adjust the <gui>Delay</gui> setting to change how long you have to hold the
 mouse pointer still before clicking.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-locate-pointer.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-locate-pointer.page
index 7476134..28ab991 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-locate-pointer.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-locate-pointer.page
@@ -5,26 +5,32 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#vision" group="lowvision"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Pressing <key>Ctrl</key> can find your mouse pointer.</desc>
+    <desc>Pressing <key>Ctrl</key> can find the mouse pointer.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
   <title>Quickly locate the pointer</title>
 
 
-  <p>If you have trouble seeing where the mouse pointer is on your screen, you can make it so that simply pressing the <key>Ctrl</key> key will locate your pointer.  Once this is set up, pressing <key>Ctrl</key> will cause an animation to appear briefly at the location of your pointer.</p>
+  <p>If you have trouble seeing where the mouse pointer is on your screen, you
+  can make it so that simply pressing the <key>Ctrl</key> key will locate your
+  pointer.  Once this is set up, pressing <key>Ctrl</key> will cause an
+  animation to appear briefly at the location of your pointer.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Open <gui>Mouse and Touchpad</gui> and select the <gui>Mouse</gui> tab.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Select <gui>Show position of pointer when the Control key is pressed</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select
+     <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Open <gui>Mouse and Touchpad</gui> and select the
+     <gui>Mouse</gui> tab.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Select <gui>Show position of pointer when the Control key is
+     pressed</gui>.</p></item>
 
   </steps>
 <p>Your <key>Ctrl</key> keys will now locate the pointer when pressed.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page
index 024e652..6da7554 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="clicking"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -28,14 +28,17 @@ you find it difficult to move your fingers individually on one hand, or if your
 pointing device only has a single button.</p>
 
 <steps>
-  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Open <gui>Universal Access</gui> and select the <gui>Pointing and Clicking</gui> tab.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select
+   <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Open <gui>Universal Access</gui> and select the <gui>Pointing and
+   Clicking</gui> tab.</p></item>
   <item><p>Switch <gui>Simulated Secondary Click</gui> on.</p></item>
 </steps>
 
 <p>You can change how long you must hold down the left mouse button for before
 it is registered as a right click. On the <gui>Pointing and Clicking</gui> tab,
-change the <gui>Acceptance delay</gui> under <gui>Simulated Secondary Click</gui>.</p>
+change the <gui>Acceptance delay</gui> under
+<gui>Simulated Secondary Click</gui>.</p>
 
 <comment>
 <cite>shaunm</cite>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-slowkeys.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-slowkeys.page
index b758731..14a086c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-slowkeys.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-slowkeys.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="keyboard"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="keyboard" group="a11y"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -17,17 +17,25 @@
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Have a delay between a key being pressed and that letter appearing on the screen.</desc>
+    <desc>Have a delay between a key being pressed and that letter appearing on
+    the screen.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
 <title>Turn on slow keys</title>
 
-<p>Turn on <em>slow keys</em> if you would like there to be a delay between pressing a key and that letter being displayed on the screen. This means that you have to hold down each key you want to type for a little while before it appears. Use slow keys if you accidentally press several keys at a time when you type, or if you find it difficult to press the right key on the keyboard first time.</p>
+<p>Turn on <em>slow keys</em> if you would like there to be a delay between
+ pressing a key and that letter being displayed on the screen. This means that
+ you have to hold down each key you want to type for a little while before it
+ appears. Use slow keys if you accidentally press several keys at a time when
+ you type, or if you find it difficult to press the right key on the keyboard
+ first time.</p>
 
 <steps>
-  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Open <gui>Universal Access</gui> and select the <gui>Typing</gui> tab.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select
+   <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Open <gui>Universal Access</gui> and select the <gui>Typing</gui>
+   tab.</p></item>
   <item><p>Switch <gui>Slow Keys</gui> on.</p></item>
 </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-stickykeys.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-stickykeys.page
index 0541fd6..760bf90 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-stickykeys.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-stickykeys.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="keyboard"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="keyboard" group="a11y"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -17,27 +17,37 @@
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Type keyboard shortcuts one key at a time rather than having to hold down all of the keys at once.</desc>
+    <desc>Type keyboard shortcuts one key at a time rather than having to hold
+     down all of the keys at once.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
 <title>Turn on sticky keys</title>
 
-<p><em>Sticky keys</em> allows you to type keyboard shortcuts one key at a time rather than having to hold down all of the keys at once. For example, the <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>Tab</key></keyseq> shortcut switches between windows. Without sticky keys turned on, you would have to hold down both keys at the same time; with sticky keys turned on, you would press <key>Alt</key> and then <key>Tab</key> to do the same.</p>
+<p><em>Sticky keys</em> allows you to type keyboard shortcuts one key at a time
+ rather than having to hold down all of the keys at once. For example, the
+ <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>Tab</key></keyseq> shortcut switches between
+ windows. Without sticky keys turned on, you would have to hold down both keys
+ at the same time; with sticky keys turned on, you would press <key>Alt</key>
+ and then <key>Tab</key> to do the same.</p>
 
-<p>You might want to turn on sticky keys if you find it difficult to hold down several keys at once.</p>
+<p>You might want to turn on sticky keys if you find it difficult to hold down
+ several keys at once.</p>
 
 <steps>
-  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Open <gui>Universal Access</gui> and select the <gui>Typing</gui> tab.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select
+   <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Open <gui>Universal Access</gui> and select the
+   <gui>Typing</gui> tab.</p></item>
   <item><p>Switch <gui>Sticky Keys</gui> on.</p></item>
 </steps>
 
 <note style="tip">
 <title>Quickly turn sticky keys on and off</title>
-<p>Select <gui>Turn on accessibility features from the keyboard</gui> to turn sticky
-keys on and off from the keyboard. When this option is selected, you can press
-<key>Shift</key> five times in a row to enable or disable sticky keys.</p>
+<p>Select <gui>Turn on accessibility features from the keyboard</gui> (above
+<gui>Sticky Keys</gui>) to turn sticky keys on and off from the keyboard. When
+this option is selected, you can press <key>Shift</key> five times in a row to
+enable or disable sticky keys.</p>
 <p>You can also turn sticky keys on and off by clicking the
 <link xref="a11y-icon">accessibility icon</link> on the top bar and selecting
 <gui>Sticky Keys</gui>.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-disabletouchpad.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-disabletouchpad.page
index e5e366f..cb560cb 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-disabletouchpad.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-disabletouchpad.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="mouse-mousekeys"/>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <desc>Turn the touchpad off while typing to prevent accidental clicks.</desc>
     
@@ -25,9 +25,11 @@ type. You can disable the touchpad while you type. It will only
 work again a short time after your last key stroke.</p>
 
 <steps>
-  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Open <gui>Mouse and Touchpad</gui> and select the <gui>Touchpad</gui> tab.
-  The touchpad tab will only be available if your computer has a touchpad.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select
+   <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Open <gui>Mouse and Touchpad</gui> and select the <gui>Touchpad</gui>
+   tab. The touchpad tab will only be available if your computer has a
+   touchpad.</p></item>
   <item><p>Select <gui>Disable touchpad while typing</gui>.</p></item>
 </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-doubleclick.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-doubleclick.page
index 5f7b17b..2e1632e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-doubleclick.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-doubleclick.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="clicking"/>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <desc>Control how quickly you need to press the mouse button
     a second time to double-click.</desc>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-drag-threshold.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-drag-threshold.page
index 4c80a2f..407bf61 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-drag-threshold.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-drag-threshold.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="clicking"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-lefthanded.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-lefthanded.page
index a4f0e2c..66299ab 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-lefthanded.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-lefthanded.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   id="mouse-lefthanded">
 <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <desc>Reverse the left and right mouse buttons in the mouse settings.</desc>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-middleclick.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-middleclick.page
index 43ff8b0..ce389c6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-middleclick.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-middleclick.page
@@ -3,12 +3,13 @@
       id="mouse-middleclick">
 
 <info>
- <desc>Use the middle mouse button to open applications, paste text, open tabs, and more.</desc>
+ <desc>Use the middle mouse button to open applications, paste text, open tabs,
+  and more.</desc>
 
  <link type="guide" xref="tips" />
  <link type="guide" xref="mouse#tips" />
 
- <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
  
  <credit type="author">
   <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -46,9 +47,10 @@ touchpad settings for this to work.</p>
   clipboard. This quick method of pasting only works with the middle
   mouse button.</p></item>
 
-  <item><p>On scrollbars and sliders, a regular click in the empty space moves by a set
-  amount (such as one page) in the direction you clicked. You can also middle-click in
-  the empty space to move to exactly the location you clicked.</p></item>
+  <item><p>On scrollbars and sliders, a regular click in the empty space moves
+  by a set amount (such as one page) in the direction you clicked. You can also
+  middle-click in the empty space to move to exactly the location you
+  clicked.</p></item>
 
   <item><p>In the <gui>Activities</gui> overview, you can quickly open a new
   window for an application in its own new workspace with middle-click. Simply
@@ -60,7 +62,8 @@ touchpad settings for this to work.</p>
   it will open in a new tab. Be careful clicking the link in the <app>Firefox</app>
   web browser, though. In <app>Firefox</app>, if you middle-click anywhere except
   on a link, it will try to load your selected text as a URL, as if you used
-  middle-click to paste it to the location bar and pressed <key>Enter</key>.</p></item>
+  middle-click to paste it to the location bar and pressed
+  <key>Enter</key>.</p></item>
 
   <item><p>In the file manager, middle-click serves two roles. If you
   middle-click a folder, it will open in a new tab. This mimics the
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-mousekeys.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-mousekeys.page
index 0ca0852..c678eee 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-mousekeys.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-mousekeys.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="pointing"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     
     <desc>Enable mouse keys to control the mouse with the keypad.</desc>
     
@@ -28,8 +28,10 @@ control the mouse pointer using the numeric keypad on your keyboard. This
 feature is called <em>mouse keys</em>.</p>
 
 <steps>
-  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Open <gui>Universal Access</gui> and select the <gui>Pointing and Clicking</gui> tab.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select
+   <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Open <gui>Universal Access</gui> and select the
+   <gui>Pointing and Clicking</gui> tab.</p></item>
   <item><p>Switch <gui>Mouse Keys</gui> on.</p></item>
  <item>
   <p>
@@ -40,8 +42,9 @@ feature is called <em>mouse keys</em>.</p>
 </steps>
 
  <note style = "tip">
- <p>You can quickly turn mouse keys on and off by clicking the <link xref="a11y-icon">accessibility
- icon</link> on the top bar and selecting <gui>Mouse Keys</gui>.</p>
+ <p>You can quickly turn mouse keys on and off by clicking the
+ <link xref="a11y-icon">accessibility icon</link> on the top bar and selecting
+ <gui>Mouse Keys</gui>.</p>
  </note>
 
 <p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page
index a85e30c..20b4e96 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <desc>
     How to check your mouse if it is not working.
     </desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
         <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -42,22 +42,29 @@
 <section id="connected">
  <title>Check that the mouse was recognized by your computer</title>
  <steps>
-  <item><p>Open the <app>Terminal</app> application from the <gui>Activities</gui> overview.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Open the <app>Terminal</app> application from the
+   <gui>Activities</gui> overview.</p></item>
   <item>
    <p>
-   In the terminal window, type <cmd>xsetpointer -l | grep Pointer</cmd>, exactly as it appears here, 
+   In the terminal window, type <cmd>xsetpointer -l | grep Pointer</cmd>,
+    exactly as it appears here, 
    and press <key>Enter</key>.
    </p>
   </item>
   <item>
-   <p>
-   A short list of mouse devices will appear. Check that at least one 
-   of the items says <sys>[XExtensionPointer]</sys> next to it, and that one of the  <sys>[XExtensionPointer]</sys> items has the name of the mouse to the left of it.
-   </p>
+   <p>A short list of mouse devices will appear. Check that at least one of the
+   items says <sys>[XExtensionPointer]</sys> next to it, and that one of the
+   <sys>[XExtensionPointer]</sys> items has the name of the mouse to the left of
+   it.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+   <p>If there is no entry that has the name of the mouse followed by
+   <sys>[XExtensionPointer]</sys>, then the mouse was not recognized by your
+   computer. If the entry exists, your mouse was recognized by your computer.
+   In this case you should check that the mouse is
+   <link xref="mouse-problem-notmoving#plugged-in">plugged in</link> and in
+   <link xref="mouse-problem-notmoving#broken">working condition</link>.</p>
   </item>
-  <item><p>
-  If there is no entry that has the name of the mouse followed by  <sys>[XExtensionPointer]</sys>, then the mouse was not recognized by your computer. If the entry exists, your mouse was recognized by your computer.  In this case you should check that the mouse is <link xref="#plugged-in">plugged in</link> and in <link xref="#broken">working condition</link>.
-  </p></item>
  </steps>
 
  <comment>
@@ -80,23 +87,19 @@
  
  <comment>
  <cite date="2012-02-19">Phil Bull</cite>
-  <p>
-  Should provide some useful advice rather than just saying "you might need to 
-  perform extra steps".
-  </p>
+  <p>Should provide some useful advice rather than just saying "you might need
+  to perform extra steps".</p>
  </comment>
 </section>
 
 <section id="broken">
  <title>Check that the mouse actually works</title>
- <p>
- Plug the mouse in to a different computer and see if it works.
- </p>
+ <p>Plug the mouse in to a different computer and see if it works.</p>
  
- <p>
- If the mouse is an optical or laser mouse, a light should be shining out 
- of the bottom of the mouse if it is turned on.  If there is no light, check that it is turned on.  If it is and there is still no light, the mouse may be broken.
- </p>
+ <p>If the mouse is an optical or laser mouse, a light should be shining out 
+ of the bottom of the mouse if it is turned on.  If there is no light, check
+ that it is turned on.  If it is and there is still no light, the mouse may be
+ broken.</p>
 </section>
 
 <section id="wireless-mice">
@@ -149,7 +152,8 @@
 
 <comment>
  <cite date="2012-02-19">Phil Bull</cite>
- <p>Should provide some useful advice rather than just saying "you might need to perform extra steps".</p>
+ <p>Should provide some useful advice rather than just saying "you might need to
+ perform extra steps".</p>
 </comment>
 </section>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-sensitivity.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-sensitivity.page
index 79e87b9..2bc65f1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-sensitivity.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-sensitivity.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="pointing"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     
     <desc>Change how quickly the pointer moves when you use
     your mouse or touchpad.</desc>
@@ -32,10 +32,12 @@ or use your touchpad, you can adjust the pointer sensitivity and
 acceleration for these devices.</p>
 
 <steps>
-  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select
+   <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
   <item><p>Open <gui>Mouse and Touchpad</gui>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Adjust the <gui>Acceleration</gui> and <gui>Sensitivity</gui> sliders
-  until the pointer motion is comfortable for you.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Under <gui>Pointer Speed</gui>, adjust the <gui>Acceleration</gui>
+   and <gui>Sensitivity</gui> sliders until the pointer motion is comfortable
+   for you.</p></item>
 </steps>
 
 <p>Sensitivity is how much your pointer initially moves when you move your mouse.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-touchpad-click.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-touchpad-click.page
index 7028d08..d52e562 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-touchpad-click.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-touchpad-click.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
     <desc>Click or scroll using taps and gestures on your touchpad.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -21,9 +21,11 @@
 touchpad, without separate hardware buttons.</p>
 
 <steps>
-  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Open <gui>Mouse and Touchpad</gui> and select the <gui>Touchpad</gui> tab.
-  The touchpad tab will only be available if your computer has a touchpad.</p>
+  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select
+   <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Open <gui>Mouse and Touchpad</gui> and select the <gui>Touchpad</gui>
+   tab. The touchpad tab will only be available if your computer has a
+   touchpad.</p>
   </item>
 </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-wakeup.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-wakeup.page
index c6ae536..0f1c373 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-wakeup.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-wakeup.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse#problems"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     <desc>If you have to wiggle or click the mouse before it responds.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -16,10 +16,12 @@
 
   <title>Mouse has a delay before it will work</title>
   
-  <p>
-  Wireless and optical mice, as well as touchpads on laptops, may need to "wake up" before they will work. They automatically go to sleep when not in use to save battery power. To wake up your mouse or touchpad you can click on a mouse button or wiggle the mouse.
-  </p>
-  <p>
-  Laptop touchpads sometimes have a delay after you stop typing before they will start working.  This is to prevent you from accidentally touching the touchpad with your palm while typing. See <link xref="mouse-disabletouchpad"/> for details.
-	</p>
+  <p>Wireless and optical mice, as well as touchpads on laptops, may need to
+  "wake up" before they will work. They automatically go to sleep when not in
+  use to save battery power. To wake up your mouse or touchpad you can click on
+  a mouse button or wiggle the mouse.</p>
+  <p>Laptop touchpads sometimes have a delay after you stop typing before they
+  will start working.  This is to prevent you from accidentally touching the
+  touchpad with your palm while typing. See <link xref="mouse-disabletouchpad"/>
+  for details.</p>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse.page
index e0c81f7..73e6062 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
       <link xref="mouse-sensitivity">speed and sensitivity</link>,
       <link xref="mouse-touchpad-click">touchpad clicking and scrolling</link>...
     </desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
         <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>



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