[gnome-user-docs] backup and windows-key pages marked review



commit 1208ba440af9f320f2144bba35c2c42e8bdbaaf3
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
Date:   Tue Feb 28 20:11:12 2012 -0500

    backup and windows-key pages marked review

 gnome-help/C/backup-check.page      |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page  |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/backup-how.page        |    8 ++++++--
 gnome-help/C/backup-restore.page    |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page |    8 ++++++--
 gnome-help/C/backup-what.page       |   12 ++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/backup-where.page      |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/backup-why.page        |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/windows-key.page       |    2 +-
 9 files changed, 26 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page
index 2d4ce09..abf6e9c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="files#backup"/>
     <desc>Verify your backup was successful.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page
index 4f38b59..5dfee7e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="files#backup"/>
     <desc>Learn how often you should backup your important files to make sure
     that they're safe.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
index 8974ba1..78adc6a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="backup-why"/>
     <desc>Use DÃjà Dup (or some other backup application) to make copies of your
     valuable files and settings to protect against loss.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
@@ -15,6 +15,10 @@
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
@@ -37,7 +41,7 @@
  entire Home folder with the following exceptions:</p>
 
 <list>
- <item><p>Files that are already backed-up somewhere else, such as to a CD, DVD,
+ <item><p>Files that are already backed up somewhere else, such as to a CD, DVD,
  or other removable media.</p></item>
  <item><p>Files that you can recreate easily. For example, if you are a
  programmer, you don't have to back up the files that get produced when you
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-restore.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-restore.page
index 7789e52..147bfae 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-restore.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-restore.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="files#backup"/>
     <desc>Retrieve your files from a backup.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page
index 7893ed7..b0d818a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <desc>A list of folders where you can find documents, files and settings
     that you may want to back up.</desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -17,6 +17,10 @@
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
@@ -60,7 +64,7 @@
   <p>System-wide settings</p>
   <p>Settings for important parts of the system aren't stored in your Home
  folder. There are a number of locations that they could be stored, but most are
- stored in the <file>/etc</file> folder. In general, you won't need to back-up
+ stored in the <file>/etc</file> folder. In general, you won't need to back up
  these files on a home computer. If you are running a server, however, you
  should back up the files for the services that it is running.</p>
  </item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-what.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-what.page
index 9ef7b8e..cddd94f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-what.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-what.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="backup-why"/>
     <desc>Back up anything that you can't bear to lose if something goes wrong.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -14,13 +14,17 @@
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
   </info>
 
   <title>What to back up</title>
 
-  <p>Your priority should be to backup your
+  <p>Your priority should be to back up your
  <link xref="backup-thinkabout">most important files</link> as well as those
  that are difficult to recreate.  For example, ranked from most important to
  least important:</p>
@@ -46,7 +50,7 @@
   <title>System settings</title>
    <p>Most people never change the system settings that are created during
    installation. If you do customize your system settings for some reason, or if
-   you use your computer as a server, then you may wish to backup these
+   you use your computer as a server, then you may wish to back up these
    settings.</p>
  </item>
 
@@ -57,7 +61,7 @@
  </item>
 </terms>
 
-  <p>In general, you will want to backup files that are irreplaceable and files 
+  <p>In general, you will want to back up files that are irreplaceable and files 
  that require a great time investment to replace without a backup. If things are
  easy to replace, on the other hand, you may not want to use up disk space by
  having backups of them.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-where.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-where.page
index 04c8e64..2462d73 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-where.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-where.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <desc>Advice on where to store your backups and what type of storage device
     to use.</desc>
     <title type="sort">c</title>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page
index 3942f8c..6334a1a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <desc>Why, what, where and how of backups.</desc>
     <title type="link" role="trail">Backups</title>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/windows-key.page b/gnome-help/C/windows-key.page
index 8edef9d..fcb3e31 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/windows-key.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/windows-key.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <desc>The windows key opens the activities overview. You can usually find it
     next to the <key>Alt</key> key on your keyboard.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>



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