[baobab/mallard-documentation] More edits for final review

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit 216f28298a86bbaeb66a58defccc9d4dde47aed2
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
Date:   Mon Feb 20 15:35:01 2012 -0500

    More edits for final review

 help/C/introduction.page    |    6 +++++-
 help/C/pref-view-chart.page |    2 +-
 help/C/scan-filesystem.page |    6 +++++-
 help/C/scan-home.page       |    8 ++++++--
 4 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index 173556c..1d5d69c 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -15,9 +15,13 @@
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc><app>Disk Usage Analyzer</app>, also referred to as
-    <app>baobab</app>, graphically represent your use of storage space.</desc>
+    <app>baobab</app>, graphically represents your use of storage space.</desc>
 
   </info>
 
diff --git a/help/C/pref-view-chart.page b/help/C/pref-view-chart.page
index f2cfac4..844718b 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-view-chart.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-view-chart.page
@@ -32,6 +32,6 @@
   subfolders.</p>
   <p>Chart visibility can be changed to <gui>Treemap View</gui> using the
   drop-down list at the top of the chart on the right-hand side. The tree layout
-  displays the folders ad proportionately sized boxes.</p>
+  displays the folders as proportionately sized boxes.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/scan-filesystem.page b/help/C/scan-filesystem.page
index 3cebe32..c51d6d4 100644
--- a/help/C/scan-filesystem.page
+++ b/help/C/scan-filesystem.page
@@ -14,6 +14,10 @@
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc>Scan all internal and removable storage devices.</desc>
 
@@ -52,7 +56,7 @@
   also use the results to estimate how much space would be needed for a
   <link href="help:gnome-help/backup-how">backup</link> of specific folders.</p>
 
-  <p>Right-click on any folder and select <gui>Open Folder</gui> to launce the
+  <p>Right-click on any folder and select <gui>Open Folder</gui> to launch the
   <app>Files</app> application, or <gui>Move to Trash</gui> to move your folder
   to <file>Trash</file>.</p>
 
diff --git a/help/C/scan-home.page b/help/C/scan-home.page
index 0f1cb57..adfd3c9 100644
--- a/help/C/scan-home.page
+++ b/help/C/scan-home.page
@@ -15,8 +15,12 @@
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Scan all of your personal files files that are on your internal
+    <desc>Scan all of your personal files that are on your internal
     storage device.</desc>
 
   </info>
@@ -58,7 +62,7 @@
     <p>The default subdirectories usually include <file>Desktop</file>,
     <file>Documents</file>, <file>Downloads</file>, <file>Pictures</file> and
     <file>Music</file>, among others. Some of these will already exist when
-    GNOME is installed, others will be created by applications when they are
+    GNOME is installed; others will be created by applications when they are
     needed.</p>
   </note>