[gnome-user-docs] more 3.2 candidates



commit 76bada4bd7c601f528cc260faac76fca2e3b1d1c
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
Date:   Sun Sep 25 17:37:50 2011 -0400

    more 3.2 candidates

 gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page          |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/sharing.page                  |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page       |   13 ++++++---
 gnome-help/C/shell-keyboard-shortcuts.page |   14 ++++++++--
 gnome-help/C/shell-overview.page           |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/shell-session-status.page     |    8 +++--
 gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page        |   38 +++++++++++++++++++++------
 gnome-help/C/shell-windows.page            |    2 +
 gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page        |    2 +
 gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page      |   12 ++++++---
 gnome-help/C/windows-key.page              |   36 ++++++++++++++++++++++---
 11 files changed, 99 insertions(+), 31 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
index 7c687d2..d66af59 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="topic"
       id="sharing-desktop">
   <info>
-    <link type="guide" xref="net" group="#sharing"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="sharing"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-24" status="candidate"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing.page
index 477a67b..e959c1b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="sharing">
   <info>
 
-    <link type="guide" xref="prefs"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="net" group="#sharing"/>
 
     <desc>
       <link xref="sharing-desktop">Desktop sharing</link>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
index 3353b63..df7a239 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
@@ -9,6 +9,8 @@
     <desc>A visual introduction to your desktop, the top bar, and the
     activities overview.</desc>
     
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-25" status="candidate"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
@@ -120,8 +122,8 @@ your computer.</p>
 use the <app>Empathy</app> instant messaging application, this will set
 your status for your contacts to see.</p>
 
-<p>If you set yourself to Busy, you won't be bothered by message popups at
-the bottom of your screen. Messages will still be available in the message
+<p>If you set yourself to Unavailable, you won't be bothered by message popups
+at the bottom of your screen. Messages will still be available in the message
 tray when you move your mouse to the bottom-right corner. But only urgent
 messages will be presented, such as when your battery is critically low.</p>
 
@@ -146,11 +148,12 @@ suspend or power off the computer from the menu.</p>
 
 <section id="message-tray">
 <title>Message Tray</title>
-  <p>The message tray can be brought into view by moving your mouse into the bottom-right corner.  This is where your notifications are stored until you are ready to view them.</p>
+  <p>The message tray can be brought into view by moving your mouse into the
+ bottom-right corner.  This is where your notifications are stored until you are
+ ready to view them.</p>
 
 <list style="compact">
-<item><p><link xref="shell-notifications">Learn more about the message tray.</link></p></item>
-<item><p><link xref="shell-terminology">Learn more about notifications.</link></p></item>
+<item><p><link xref="shell-notifications">Learn more about notifications and the message tray.</link></p></item>
 </list>
 </section>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-keyboard-shortcuts.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-keyboard-shortcuts.page
index d4a1a01..f7f85da 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-keyboard-shortcuts.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-keyboard-shortcuts.page
@@ -10,6 +10,8 @@
     
     <desc>Get around the desktop using the keyboard.</desc>
     
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-25" status="candidate"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -18,6 +20,10 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
+<comment>
+  <p>In 3.2, can't get Ctrl-Alt-D to work in *any* distro.</p>
+</comment>
+
 <title>Useful keyboard shortcuts</title>
 
 <table rules="rows" frame="top bottom" ui:expanded="no">
@@ -49,10 +55,12 @@
     switch keyboard focus between the top bar, dash, windows overview, applications
     list, and search field.</p></td>
   </tr>
+<!--
  <tr>
     <td><p><keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Alt</key><key>D</key></keyseq></p></td>
     <td><p>Hide all windows and show the desktop. This shortcut may not work on all distros.</p></td>
   </tr>
+-->
   <tr>
     <td><p><keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Alt</key><key>Up/Down</key></keyseq></p></td>
     <td><p><link xref="shell-workspaces-switch">Switch between workspaces.</link></p></td>
@@ -95,15 +103,15 @@
 <title>Capturing from the screen</title>
   <tr>
     <td><p><key>Print</key></p></td>
-    <td><p>Take a screenshot.</p></td>
+    <td><p><link xref="screen-shot-record#screenshot">Take a screenshot.</link></p></td>
   </tr>
   <tr>
     <td><p><keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>Print</key></keyseq></p></td>
-    <td><p>Take a screenshot of a window.</p></td>
+    <td><p><link xref="screen-shot-record#screenshot">Take a screenshot of a window.</link></p></td>
   </tr>
   <tr>
     <td><p><keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Alt</key><key>Shift</key><key>R</key></keyseq></p></td>
-    <td><p><link xref="screen-shot-record">Start and end screencast recording.</link></p></td>
+    <td><p><link xref="screen-shot-record#screencast">Start and end screencast recording.</link></p></td>
   </tr>
 </table>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-overview.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-overview.page
index dee454b..beb75c9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-overview.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-overview.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <title role="trail" type="link">Overview</title>
     
     <desc>An overview of the different parts of the desktop.</desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-25" status="candidate"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-session-status.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-session-status.page
index 3c1c531..7607e37 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-session-status.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-session-status.page
@@ -9,6 +9,8 @@
     
     <desc>Change your chat status and hide notifications.</desc>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-25" status="candidate"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
@@ -20,10 +22,10 @@
 <title>Change your availability</title>
 
 <p>If you're working on something and don't want to be bothered, you
-can change your status to <gui>Busy</gui>. Just click your name on the
-top bar and select <gui>Busy</gui>.</p>
+can change your status to <gui>Unavailable</gui>. Just click your name on the
+top bar and select <gui>Available</gui> to toggle it to <gui>Unavailable</gui>.</p>
 
-<p>When you're marked busy, most notifications will not pop up at the
+<p>When you're marked unavailable, most notifications will not pop up at the
 bottom of the screen. Very important notifications, such as when your
 battery is critically low, will still pop up. Notifications will still
 be available in the messaging tray when you move your mouse to the
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
index 83a6fb4..058fd1c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
@@ -7,6 +7,8 @@
     
     <desc>An overview of terms used to describe different parts of the desktop.</desc>
     
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-25" status="candidate"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -22,47 +24,65 @@
 <terms>
  <item>
   <title>Activities overview</title>
-  <p>The <em>activities overview</em> is the screen that's displayed when you click on <gui>Activities</gui> at the top left of the screen.</p>
+  <p>The <em>activities overview</em> is the screen that's displayed when you
+ click on <gui>Activities</gui> at the top left of the screen.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
   <title>Alt-Tab window switcher</title>
-  <p>When you hold down the <key>Alt</key> key and then press <key>Tab</key>, a <em>window switcher</em> appears. This shows the icons of the applications you have currently open.</p>
+  <p>When you hold down the <key>Alt</key> key and then press <key>Tab</key>, a
+ <em>window switcher</em> appears. This shows the icons of the applications you
+ have currently open.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
   <title>Dash</title>
-  <p>The <em>dash</em> is the list of your favorite applications that is shown on the left-hand side of the activities overview. Applications that are currently running are also shown here. The dash is sometimes referred to as the <em>dock</em>.</p>
+  <p>The <em>dash</em> is the list of your favorite applications that is shown
+ on the left-hand side of the activities overview. Applications that are
+ currently running are also shown here. The dash is sometimes referred to as the
+ <em>dock</em>.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
   <title>Hot corner</title>
-  <p>The <em>hot corner</em> is the corner at the top left of the screen. When you move the pointer to this corner, the activities overview opens.</p>
+  <p>The <em>hot corner</em> is the corner at the top left of the screen. When
+ you move the pointer to this corner, the activities overview opens.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
   <title>Notifications</title>
-  <p><em>Notifications</em> are messages that pop up at the bottom of the screen, telling you that something just happened. For example, when someone chatting with you sends a message, a message will pop up to tell you. If you don't want to deal with a message right now, it is hidden in your messaging tray. Move your mouse to the bottom-right corner to see your messaging tray.</p>
+  <p><em>Notifications</em> are messages that pop up at the bottom of the screen,
+ telling you that something just happened. For example, when someone chatting
+ with you sends a message, a notification will pop up to tell you. If you don't
+ want to deal with a message right now, it is hidden in your messaging tray. Move
+ your mouse to the bottom-right corner to see your messaging tray.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
   <title>System settings</title>
-  <p>The <em>system settings</em> are where you can change preferences and so on, similar to the Control Panel in Windows or the System Preferences in Mac OS. Click your name on the top-right of the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui> to access them.</p>
+  <p>The <em>system settings</em> are where you can change preferences and so on,
+ similar to the Control Panel in Windows or the System Preferences in Mac OS.
+ Click your name on the top-right of the top bar and select
+ <gui>System Settings</gui> to access them.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
   <title>Top bar</title>
-  <p>The <em>top bar</em> is the bar that runs along the very top of the screen. The <gui>Activities</gui> link is on one end of the top bar and your username is on the other.</p>
+  <p>The <em>top bar</em> is the bar that runs along the very top of the screen.
+ The <gui>Activities</gui> link is on one end of the top bar and your username
+ is on the other.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
   <title>Workspace</title>
-  <p>You can put windows on different <em>workspaces</em>. They are a convenient way of grouping and separating windows.</p>
+  <p>You can put windows on different <em>workspaces</em>. They are a convenient
+ way of grouping and separating windows.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
   <title>Workspace selector</title>
-  <p>The <em>workspace selector</em> is the list of workspaces that is shown on the right-hand side of the <gui>Windows</gui> view in the activities overview.</p>
+  <p>The <em>workspace selector</em> is the list of workspaces that is shown on
+ the right-hand side of the <gui>Windows</gui> view in the activities overview.</p>
  </item>
  
 </terms>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows.page
index 6bdd6ea..7c60aa1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows.page
@@ -9,6 +9,8 @@
 
     <desc>Move and organize your windows.</desc>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-25" status="candidate"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page b/gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page
index 3fdcf89..9834ea2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page
@@ -5,6 +5,8 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="tips"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="keyboard-layouts"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-25" status="candidate"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
index 7b5b822..7d53b59 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
@@ -9,6 +9,8 @@
     <desc>Keep your account secure by changing your password often
     in your account settings.</desc>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-25" status="candidate"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -39,8 +41,9 @@
 
 <comment>
   <cite date="2011-09-19">mdhill</cite>
-  <p>Not prompted to change keyring password on next login in 3.2. Add
-  keyring pages.</p>
+  <p>Not prompted to change keyring password on next login in 3.2, wording
+ changed. Keyring pages still need adding. Bug 643445 indicates password hints
+ not implemented yet in GDM.</p>
 </comment>
 
   <p>It is a good idea to change your password from time to time, especially if
@@ -70,9 +73,10 @@
   <em>keyring password</em>. The keyring keeps you from having to remember lots
   of different passwords by just requiring one <em>master</em> password to access
   them all. If you change your user password (see above), your keyring password
-  will remain the same as your old password. When you next log in, you will be
+  will remain the same as your old password. <!-- When you next log in, you will be
   asked to update your keyring password. If you prefer to change the keyring
-  password (to match your login password) immediately:</p>
+  password (to match your login password) immediately: --> To change the keyring
+  password (to match your login password):</p>
     
   <steps>
     <item><p>Open the <app>Passwords and Keys</app> application from
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/windows-key.page b/gnome-help/C/windows-key.page
index 9a8a0ec..32ae47f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/windows-key.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/windows-key.page
@@ -3,7 +3,9 @@
       id="windows-key">
 
   <info>
-    <desc>The windows key opens the activities overview. You can usually find it next to the <key>Alt</key> key on your keyboard.</desc>
+    <desc>The windows key opens the activities overview. You can usually find it
+    next to the <key>Alt</key> key on your keyboard.</desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-25" status="candidate"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -14,18 +16,42 @@
 
 <title>What is the "windows" key?</title>
 
-<p>When you press the <em>windows</em> key, the activities overview is displayed. This key can usually be found on the bottom-left of your keyboard, next to the <key>Alt</key> key, and often has a window/squares icon on it. It is sometimes called the super key, logo key, or system key.</p>
+  <p>When you press the <em>windows</em> key, the activities overview is
+ displayed. This key can usually be found on the bottom-left of your keyboard,
+ next to the <key>Alt</key> key, and often has a window/squares icon on it. It
+ is sometimes called the super key, logo key, or system key.</p>
 
 <note>
-<p>If you have an Apple keyboard, there will not be a windows key on your keyboard. The <key>Command (Cmd)</key> key can be used instead.</p>
+  <p>If you have an Apple keyboard, there will not be a windows key on your
+ keyboard. The <key>Cmd</key> (Command) key can be used instead.</p>
 </note>
 
 <comment>
- <p>Need to add info on changing the keybinding using the new preferences windows.</p>
+  <p>Need to add info on changing the keybinding using the new preferences
+ windows.</p>
 </comment>
 
 <!--
-<p>You can change which key is used to display the activities overview. Click your name on the top bar and click <gui>System Settings</gui>. Click <gui>Keyboard</gui> and change...</p>
+<p>To change which key is used to display the activities overview:</p>
+
+  <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click your name on the top bar and click <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Keyboard</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click the <gui>Shortcuts</gui> tab.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select <gui>System</gui> on the left side of the window, and
+      <gui>Show the activities overview</gui> on the right.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Hold down the desired key combination.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
 -->
 
 </page>



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