[cheese] help: reviewed and improved wording



commit 963f987102362806e04f1b074baa9c2aed5d4f6a
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sat Sep 17 10:44:15 2011 +0200

    help: reviewed and improved wording

 help/C/burst-mode.page   |   16 +++++++++-------
 help/C/delete-photo.page |    2 +-
 help/C/save-photo.page   |    2 +-
 help/C/webcams.page.stub |    2 +-
 4 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/burst-mode.page b/help/C/burst-mode.page
index dc4acc7..90326db 100644
--- a/help/C/burst-mode.page
+++ b/help/C/burst-mode.page
@@ -23,18 +23,20 @@
   <title>Take multiple photos in quick succession</title>
 
   <p>You can use <gui>Burst mode</gui> to automatically take several photos in
-  one go, with a short pause between each shot. It's particularly fun if you
+  one go, with a short pause between shots. It is particularly fun if you
   change your pose in between photos! To use <gui>Burst mode</gui>:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-     <p>Click <gui>Burst</gui>, the <gui>Take a Photo</gui> button will now say <gui>Take Multiple Photos</gui>.</p>
-     <p>Alternatively, click <guiseq><gui>Cheese</gui><gui>Burst</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Burst</gui>, the <gui>Take a Photo</gui> button will now say
+      <gui>Take Multiple Photos</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Alternatively, click <guiseq><gui>Cheese</gui><gui>Burst</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-     <p>Click <gui>Take Multiple Photos</gui> or press the <key>spacebar</key>.</p>
-     <p>By default, four photos will be taken, with a three second delay between
-     each countdown, which you will see before each photo is taken.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Take Multiple Photos</gui> or press the
+      <key>spacebar</key>.</p>
+      <p>By default, four photos will be taken, with a three second delay and a
+      countdown between photos.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
@@ -54,7 +56,7 @@
     </item>
   </steps>
   <note>
-    <p>The delay is between the last photo taken and the start of the count down
+    <p>The delay is between the last photo taken and the start of the countdown
     for the next photo, not between two photos.</p>
   </note>
 </section>
diff --git a/help/C/delete-photo.page b/help/C/delete-photo.page
index 6f5ae6c..a40c614 100644
--- a/help/C/delete-photo.page
+++ b/help/C/delete-photo.page
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
   video, you can right click it and select <gui>Move to Trash</gui> instead.
   This will move it to the computer's <gui>Trash</gui> folder.</p>
   <note>
-    <p>Cheese does not have its own <gui>Trash</gui> folder and you can not
+    <p>Cheese does not have its own <gui>Trash</gui> folder and you cannot
     access your computer's <gui>Trash</gui> folder from within <app>Cheese</app>.</p>
   </note>
 
diff --git a/help/C/save-photo.page b/help/C/save-photo.page
index 1c629bc..4c1439f 100644
--- a/help/C/save-photo.page
+++ b/help/C/save-photo.page
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 
   <p>To save an image to a different location, right-click the image in the
   photo stream and click <gui>Save As</gui>. Then, choose where you want to save
-  the image to.</p>
+  the image.</p>
 
   <p>Alternatively, open the folder where you want to keep the image using the
   file manager, then drag it from the photo stream into that folder.</p>
diff --git a/help/C/webcams.page.stub b/help/C/webcams.page.stub
index 71429e7..1f53ace 100644
--- a/help/C/webcams.page.stub
+++ b/help/C/webcams.page.stub
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
 <item>
 <p>First, you will have to ensure that it works with the <link href="http://gstreamer.freedesktop.org/";>Gstreamer Framework</link> (i.e.<link href="http://linux-galaxy.blogspot.com/2011/06/cheese-faltan-uno-o-mas-elementos.html";> installation</link>) and Video4Linux2 (V4L2) or Video4Linux (V4L). See some packages <link href="https://launchpad.net/~libv4l/+archive/ppa?field.series_filter=maverick";>here</link>. To
 test this, you can use the 'gstreamer-properties' tool or use this <link href="http://testwebcam.com";>page</link>.</p></item>
-<item><p>If the problem persists, check if your video card has the specific driver. Most of the time, general drivers are installed or detected by default instead of the specific one. To know what driver you need, see the <link href="http://en.gentoo-wiki.com/wiki/Webcam#Webcam_driver";>wiki webcam</link> or check the <link href="http://linuxcommand.org/man_pages/lsusb8.html";>lsusb command</link>; and search your webcam driver in <link href="http://www.logitech.com";>Logitech</link> or <link href="http://www.ideasonboard.org/uvc/";>Linux UVC</link>.</p></item> 
+<item><p>If the problem persists, check if your video card has the specific driver. Most of the time, general drivers are installed or detected by default instead of the specific one. To know what driver you need, see the <link href="http://en.gentoo-wiki.com/wiki/Webcam#Webcam_driver";>webcam wiki</link> or check the <link href="http://linuxcommand.org/man_pages/lsusb8.html";>lsusb command</link>; and search your webcam driver in <link href="http://www.logitech.com";>Logitech</link> or <link href="http://www.ideasonboard.org/uvc/";>Linux UVC</link>.</p></item>
 <item><p>Finally, if the problem continues, change the <link xref="resolution-photo">resolution</link> setting of the camera. Some applications can't detect the camera's resolution, so they put by defatult a diferent resolution of your webcam in the initial configuration.</p></item> 
 </steps>
 <p>See some <link href="https://wiki.ubuntu.com/SkypeWebCams?highlight=%28cheese%29";>webcams tested in Ubuntu</link> and <link href="http://building-a-black-hole.blogspot.com";>some experiences</link> with the <app>Cheese technology</app>.</p>



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