[release-notes/gnome-3-2] reword and restructure step 1



commit df5349f61b2c8a239c2143934f59d9a521fe18eb
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date:   Tue Sep 13 20:57:10 2011 +0200

    reword and restructure step 1

 help/C/rna11y.xml |   22 ++++++++++++++++++----
 1 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rna11y.xml b/help/C/rna11y.xml
index 2421277..f272a6d 100644
--- a/help/C/rna11y.xml
+++ b/help/C/rna11y.xml
@@ -12,7 +12,8 @@
    </para>
    <itemizedlist>
       <listitem><para>
-       Interacting with GNOME Shell via the keyboard now works better than ever! In addition to being fully keyboard navigable, Orca users will experience much more reliable and accurate presentation during navigation. For those users who require an on-screen keyboard, a brand new one has been built into the GNOME Shell.
+        For those users who require an on-screen keyboard, a brand new one has
+        been built in.
       </para>
       <figure id="fig.a11y.osk">
       <title>On-Screen Keyboard</title>
@@ -24,13 +25,26 @@
 <!-- https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/OnScreenKeyboard and http://justabovethetagclouds.blogspot.com -->
 
       <listitem><para>
-       AT-SPI2 has been greatly stabilized: Crashes, memory leaks, and a variety of other bugs have been fixed.
+        Using the the overmode with a keyboard works better than ever. In
+        addition to being fully keyboard navigable,
+        <application>Orca</application> users will experience much more reliable
+        and accurate presentation while navigating.
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
-       Orcaâs migration to introspection has made GNOMEâs screen reader noticeably snappier. And now that the ATK bridge only listens for signals when assistive technologies are being used, enabling accessibility support in GNOME should no longer result in a significant performance degradation.
+        <application>AT-SPI2</application> has been greatly stabilized: Crashes,
+        memory leaks, and a variety of other bugs have been fixed.
+      </para></listitem>
+      <listitem><para>
+        <application>Orca</application>âs migration to introspection has made
+        GNOMEâs screen reader noticeably snappier. And now that the ATK bridge
+        only listens for signals when assistive technologies are being used,
+        enabling accessibility support in GNOME should no longer result in a
+        significant performance degradation.
       </para></listitem> 
       <listitem><para>
-         Gail has been completely merged into GTK+ bringing GNOME yet another step closer to accessibility which is built in and not bolted on.
+        <application>Gail</application> has been completely merged into GTK+;
+        bringing GNOME yet another step closer to accessibility which is built
+        in, not bolted on.
       </para></listitem>
    </itemizedlist>
 </sect1>



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