[release-notes/gnome-3-2] reword yet again

[Olav Vitters <ovitters src gnome org>]

commit 4274dd520e1e984951fcde1adbb7c2a385d8fe64
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date:   Mon Sep 12 19:47:17 2011 +0200

    reword yet again

 help/C/release-notes.xml |   14 +++++++-------
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/release-notes.xml b/help/C/release-notes.xml
index 703d51d..109da99 100644
--- a/help/C/release-notes.xml
+++ b/help/C/release-notes.xml
@@ -57,16 +57,16 @@
         great software available to all. GNOME's focus is ease of use, 
         stability, first-class internationalization as well as accessibility
         support. GNOME is Free and Open Source Software. This means that 
-        all our work is free to use, modify 
-        and redistribute.
+        all our work is free to use, modify and redistribute. Follow our
+        progress on <ulink url="http://identi.ca/gnome";>Identi.ca</ulink>,
+        <ulink url="https://twitter.com/GNOME";>Twitter</ulink> or <ulink
+          url="https://www.facebook.com/GNOMEDesktop";>Facebook</ulink>.
       </para>
       <para>
         If you would like to help make our products even better, 
-        <ulink url="http://live.gnome.org/JoinGnome";>you can join us</ulink>. Or
-        follow our progress on <ulink
-          url="http://identi.ca/gnome";>Identi.ca</ulink>, <ulink
-          url="https://twitter.com/GNOME";>Twitter</ulink> or <ulinkÂ
-          url="https://www.facebook.com/GNOMEDesktop";>Facebook</ulink>.
+        <ulink url="http://live.gnome.org/JoinGnome";>join us</ulink>. We're
+        always in need of more people who can translate from English, assist
+        with marketing or do development.
       </para>
       <para>
         You can also support us financially by becoming a <ulink