[release-notes/gnome-3-2] don't show comments in release-notes



commit f09027c1420b72310cd4bb706b45aae26e05d8bf
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date:   Mon Sep 12 16:09:01 2011 +0200

    don't show comments in release-notes

 help/C/rnusers.xml |  106 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++--------------------
 1 files changed, 65 insertions(+), 41 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 405e264..fe03a88 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -15,6 +15,18 @@
 		<para>
       Based on user feedback, lots of small changes have been made to give a
       smoother GNOME &gnomeversion; experience. Some noteworthy highlights:
+
+      <!-- DONE: Invisible window borders (https://afaikblog.wordpress.com/2011/07/13/news-from-gnome-shell-land/), made the control center easier to navigate by adding links, 
+            notification counters
+            (https://afaikblog.wordpress.com/2011/07/13/news-from-gnome-shell-land/),
+            user-defined calendar app can be used
+            (https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=651190)
+
+        ====== STILL TODO: ====
+      XXX https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/FixAnnoyingThings (but make sure that things are not listed twice) - Section with screenshots that compare GNOME 3.0 and 3.2 would be cool, that's aday's idea
+      XXX/TODO:  persistent workspace switcher
+      (https://afaikblog.wordpress.com/2011/07/13/news-from-gnome-shell-land/)
+      -->
     </para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
@@ -58,15 +70,6 @@
     <para>
       Please keep the feedback coming.
     </para>
-    <para>
-            <!-- DONE: Invisible window borders (https://afaikblog.wordpress.com/2011/07/13/news-from-gnome-shell-land/), made the control center easier to navigate by adding links, 
-            notification counters
-            (https://afaikblog.wordpress.com/2011/07/13/news-from-gnome-shell-land/),
-            user-defined calendar app can be used
-            (https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=651190), ... -->
-      XXX https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/FixAnnoyingThings (but make sure that things are not listed twice) - Section with screenshots that compare GNOME 3.0 and 3.2 would be cool, that's aday's idea
-      XXX/TODO:  persistent workspace switcher  (https://afaikblog.wordpress.com/2011/07/13/news-from-gnome-shell-land/)
-    </para>
   </sect2>
 
   <sect2 id="goa">
@@ -107,6 +110,12 @@
       opened the minute the computer is turned on, the site is open all the time,
       checked periodically, etc. Wouldn't it be nice if GNOME treats these sites
       as actual applications?
+      <!-- 
+      XXX/TODO: Epiphany:
+      http://blogs.gnome.org/xan/2011/08/31/web-application-mode-in-gnome-3-2/ |
+      http://blogs.gnome.org/xan/2011/04/11/the-web-comes-to-gnome-ready-or-not/
+      | https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/WebApplicationsIntegration
+      -->
     </para>
     <para>
       GNOME &gnomeversion; makes it possible to use a site as an application
@@ -146,9 +155,6 @@
         browser crash, the web application will not be affected.
       </para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
-    <para>
-      XXX/TODO: Epiphany: http://blogs.gnome.org/xan/2011/08/31/web-application-mode-in-gnome-3-2/ | http://blogs.gnome.org/xan/2011/04/11/the-web-comes-to-gnome-ready-or-not/ | https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/WebApplicationsIntegration
-    </para>
   </sect2>
 
 	<sect2 id="contacts">
@@ -158,6 +164,11 @@
       people. The goal is to provide one overview of people; no matter if the
       contacts are stored online, within <application>Evolution</application> or
       the chat application <application>Empathy</application>.
+      <!--
+      XXX/TODO: https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/Contacts |
+      http://live.gnome.org/Design/Apps/Contacts |
+      http://blogs.gnome.org/alexl/2011/08/19/a-contacts-update-in-which-robots-take-over-the-world/
+      -->
     </para>
     <figure id="fig.users.contacts">
      <title>Contacts application</title>
@@ -165,9 +176,6 @@
         <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;gnome-contacts.png" format="PNG"/>
       </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
     </figure>
-    <para>
-      XXX/TODO: https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/Contacts | http://live.gnome.org/Design/Apps/Contacts | http://blogs.gnome.org/alexl/2011/08/19/a-contacts-update-in-which-robots-take-over-the-world/
-    </para>
   </sect2>
 
 	<sect2 id="documents">
@@ -185,6 +193,14 @@
         an application, GNOME will helpfully show a list of recent files.
         Similarly, a list of recent directories will be shown when a file is
         saved.
+        <!-- 
+      XXX / TODO: http://live.gnome.org/Design/Apps/Documents ||
+      http://blogs.gnome.org/cosimoc/2011/08/30/introducing-documents/
+      XXX / TODO:
+      http://people.gnome.org/~federico/news-2011-07.html#recent-folders (save +
+      open!)
+      https://live.gnome.org/DocumentCentricGnome/Help%20the%20user%20choose%20a%20place%20to%20put%20a%20new%20file
+          -->
       </para>
     </sect3>
 
@@ -213,15 +229,6 @@
       </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
     </figure>
     </sect3>
-
-    <para>
-      XXX / TODO: http://live.gnome.org/Design/Apps/Documents ||
-      http://blogs.gnome.org/cosimoc/2011/08/30/introducing-documents/
-      XXX / TODO:
-      http://people.gnome.org/~federico/news-2011-07.html#recent-folders (save +
-      open!)
-      https://live.gnome.org/DocumentCentricGnome/Help%20the%20user%20choose%20a%20place%20to%20put%20a%20new%20file
-    </para>
   </sect2>
 
 	<sect2 id="sushi">
@@ -230,6 +237,10 @@
       <application>File Manager</application> can now quickly preview movie,
       music, picture and other files. The preview can be shown and hidden again
       by pressing <keysym>space</keysym>.
+      <!-- 
+      XXX / TODO Sushi: http://blogs.gnome.org/cosimoc/2011/04/29/sushi/ | https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/FilePreviewing
+      Sample pictures/movies/documents:
+      https://gitorious.org/gnome-marketing/gnome-marketing -->
     </para>
     <figure id="fig.users.documents2">
      <title>Quick Preview of a GNOME 3 release party picture</title>
@@ -237,10 +248,6 @@
         <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;sushi-800px.png" format="PNG"/>
       </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
     </figure>
-    <para>
-      XXX / TODO Sushi: http://blogs.gnome.org/cosimoc/2011/04/29/sushi/ | https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/FilePreviewing
-      Sample pictures/movies/documents: https://gitorious.org/gnome-marketing/gnome-marketing
-    </para>
   </sect2>
 
   <sect2 id="integration">
@@ -255,7 +262,8 @@
       <para>
         GNOME &gnomeversion; allows to calibrate devices to ensure the shown
         colours are representative.
-        XXX / TODO: https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/ColorManagement
+        <!-- XXX / TODO:
+        https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/ColorManagement -->
     </para>
   </sect3>
 
@@ -293,14 +301,19 @@
     <title>Login screen</title>
     <para>
       The GNOME 3 login screen has been integrated with the rest of the 
-      experience. - https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/LoginScreen | https://afaikblog.wordpress.com/2011/07/13/news-from-gnome-shell-land/
+      experience.
+      <!-- https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/LoginScreen |
+      https://afaikblog.wordpress.com/2011/07/13/news-from-gnome-shell-land/ -->
     </para>
   </sect3>
 
   <sect3 id="integration.other">
     <title>Other Integration Improvements</title>
 		<para>
-		GNOME 3 now features integrated media hotplugging notifications: https://afaikblog.wordpress.com/2011/07/13/news-from-gnome-shell-land/ has a screenshot
+      GNOME 3 now features integrated media hotplugging notifications.
+      <!--
+      https://afaikblog.wordpress.com/2011/07/13/news-from-gnome-shell-land/ has
+      a screenshot -->
 		</para>
     <para>
       On tablets and similar touchscreen devices, rotating the device will automatically
@@ -312,7 +325,10 @@
         Settings</application>
 		</para>
 		<para>
-      XXX / TODO: Integrated contacts search - is this in for 3.2? - https://afaikblog.wordpress.com/2011/07/13/news-from-gnome-shell-land/
+      The search box in the overview mode now lets you search through your
+      contacts.
+      <!-- XXX/TODO: is this in for 3.2? -
+      https://afaikblog.wordpress.com/2011/07/13/news-from-gnome-shell-land/ -->
 		</para>
     </sect3>
   </sect2>
@@ -353,6 +369,7 @@
     </para>
     <para>
       There have also been large improvements to the Desktop Help.
+      <!-- XXX: reword; unclear -->
     </para>
   </sect2>
 
@@ -389,8 +406,9 @@
         raised button styles, refined pressed button states and focus rectangles
         will only be shown when using the keyboard to interact with an
         application.
-        XXX - needs to be reviewed -- not everything is clear, might contain
-        duplicates.
+        <!-- 
+        XXX - needs to be reviewed; not everything is clear, might contain
+        duplicates. -->
       </para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
   </sect2>
@@ -400,6 +418,11 @@
     <para>
       As well as big changes, there are also various small additions and tweaks 
       that happen in every GNOME release.
+      <!-- 
+      XXX/TODO:
+          A number of smaller usability improvements - redesigned power options and 
+          lock buttons.
+          https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/SystemDialogs -->
     </para>
   	<itemizedlist>
       <listitem><para>
@@ -413,10 +436,16 @@
         recorded on a photo camera or a smartphone
       </para></listitem>
 	    <listitem><para>
-        XXX/TODO: http://stef.thewalter.net/2011/09/viewer-for-certificate-and-key-files.html | https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/CryptoGlue - Further improvements are planned for version 3.4.
+        Crypto stuff
+        <!-- 
+        XXX/TODO:
+        http://stef.thewalter.net/2011/09/viewer-for-certificate-and-key-files.html
+        | https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/CryptoGlue - Further
+        improvements are planned for version 3.4. -->
       </para></listitem>
 	    <listitem><para>
-        Empathy: SMS support and experimental new call UI (XXX / TODO: probably not available by default)
+          Empathy: SMS support and experimental new call UI
+          <!-- XXX / TODO: probably not available by default) -->
       </para></listitem>
 	    <listitem><para>
         NetworkManager 0.9: http://blogs.gnome.org/dcbw/2011/08/25/when-the-sun-shines-well-shine-together/
@@ -434,11 +463,6 @@
         fullscreen 3D games.
       </para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
-    <para>
-      XXX/TODO:
-          A number of smaller usability improvements - redesigned power options and 
-          lock buttons. - https://live.gnome.org/ThreePointOne/Features/SystemDialogs
-    </para>
   </sect2>
 
 </sect1>



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