[gnome-user-docs] Minor edits to screen locking pages



commit 6df08f96f816a0ba23ffe56411fa880f320a9a13
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Mon Oct 3 12:23:52 2011 -0400

    Minor edits to screen locking pages

 gnome-help/C/display-lock.page        |    3 ++-
 gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page |    3 ++-
 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-lock.page b/gnome-help/C/display-lock.page
index 9cf6ff3..c5a8ae3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-lock.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-lock.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-display"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="session-screenlocks"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="shell-exit#lock-screen"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2.1" date="2011-10-03" status="final"/>
     <desc>Prevent other people from using your desktop when you
     go away from your computer.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
@@ -28,7 +29,7 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Select <gui>Screen</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Open <gui>Screen</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>Make sure <gui>Lock</gui> is switched on, then select a timeout
     from the drop-down list below. The screen will automatically lock after
     you have been inactive for this long. You can also select <gui>Screen
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page b/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page
index 626238c..7fd3efd 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page
@@ -5,6 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-display"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="hardware-problems-graphics"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2.1" date="2011-10-03" status="final"/>
     
     <desc>Change how long to wait before locking the screen in the
     <gui>Screen</gui> settings.</desc>
@@ -29,7 +30,7 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Select <gui>Screen</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Open <gui>Screen</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>Change the value in the <gui>Lock screen after</gui> drop-down list.</p></item>
   </steps>
 



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