[gnome-user-docs] Minor edits to display-dimscreen

[Shaun McCance <shaunm src gnome org>]

commit 6a3be8c71aeecbf39184384e46beabc6657e721a
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Mon Oct 3 12:19:35 2011 -0400

    Minor edits to display-dimscreen

 gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page |   17 ++++++++++-------
 1 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page b/gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page
index 192614b..43d42ca 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-display"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="display-lock"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2.1" date="2011-10-03" status="final"/>
     <desc>Dim the screen to save power or increase the brightness to
     make it more readable in bright light.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
@@ -25,7 +26,7 @@
 
   <title>Set screen brightness</title>
 
-  <p>You can change the brightness of your screen to save power or
+  <p>You can change the brightness of your screen to save power or to
   make the screen more readable in bright light. You can also have
   the screen dim automatically when on battery power and have it
   turn off automatically when not in use.</p>
@@ -33,13 +34,16 @@
   <steps>
     <title>Set the brightness</title>
     <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Select <gui>Screen</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Adjust the <gui>Brightness</gui> slider to a comfortable value.</p>
-    <p>Many laptop keyboards have special keys on the keyboard to adjust the brightness.
-    These have a picture of what looks like the Sun and are usually located on the <key>F8</key> and <key>F9</key> keys. Hold
-    down the <key>Fn</key> key to use these keys.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Open <gui>Screen</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Adjust the <gui>Brightness</gui> slider to a comfortable value.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
+  <note style="tip">
+    <p>Many laptop keyboards have special keys to adjust the brightness. These
+    have a picture that looks like the sun and are located on the function
+    keys at the top. Hold down the <key>Fn</key> key to use these keys.</p>
+  </note>
+
   <p>Select <gui>Dim screen to save power</gui> to have the brightness
   automatically lowered when you're on battery power. The backlight of
   your screen can take a lot of power and significantly reduce how
@@ -49,5 +53,4 @@
   for a while. This only affects the display, and doesn't turn off
   your computer. You can adjust how long you have to be inactive
   with the <gui>Turn off after</gui> drop-down list.</p>
-
 </page>