[release-notes/gnome-3-0] Bits and pieces.



commit ca4e56b2c55540bdba10c70a00e969d12bc65a23
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Thu Mar 31 23:27:09 2011 +0530

    Bits and pieces.

 help/C/release-notes.xml |    9 +++++----
 help/C/rndevelopers.xml  |   14 +++++++-------
 help/C/rnusers.xml       |    2 +-
 3 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/release-notes.xml b/help/C/release-notes.xml
index 22d9921..61cfdf8 100644
--- a/help/C/release-notes.xml
+++ b/help/C/release-notes.xml
@@ -133,20 +133,21 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      GNOME release notes can be freely translated into any language. If you 
+      These release notes can be freely translated into any language. If you 
       wish to translate them into your language, please contact the
 			<ulink url="http://live.gnome.org/TranslationProject";>GNOME Translation
 			Project</ulink>.
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      These notes are released under a <ulink
-			url="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/";>Creative
+      Free to share and remix:
+      <ulinkurl="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/";>Creative
 			Commons Sharealike 3.0 license</ulink>. Copyright © The GNOME Project
 		</para>
 
     <para>
-      Compiled by Allan Day with help from the GNOME community.
+      These notes were compiled by Allan Day with much help from the GNOME 
+      community.
     </para>
 
 	</sect1>
diff --git a/help/C/rndevelopers.xml b/help/C/rndevelopers.xml
index 4b7d1e2..1b6cc9b 100644
--- a/help/C/rndevelopers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rndevelopers.xml
@@ -109,13 +109,6 @@
   <sect2 id="rich-flexible">
     <title>Richer, More Flexible User Interfaces</title>
 
-	<figure id="fig.app-chooser">
-	  <title>GNOME &gnomeversion;</title>
-		  <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
-			  <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;app-chooser-3-0.png" format="PNG"/>
-			</imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
-	</figure>
-
     <para>
       The GNOME interface toolkit has gained enhanced layout abilities which 
       makes for more flexible and efficient and space allocation for both both 
@@ -124,6 +117,13 @@
       dialog.
     </para>
 
+	<figure id="fig.app-chooser">
+	  <title>GNOME &gnomeversion;</title>
+		  <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
+			  <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;app-chooser-3-0.png" format="PNG"/>
+			</imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
+	</figure>
+
   </sect2>
 
   <sect2 id="anjuta">
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index ab7dc80..8060c1e 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
       The Activities Overview is a key feature of the GNOME 3 desktop. 
       Accessible through the Activities button, top-left hot corner or windows 
       key, it is the portal to all your computing activities. The overview 
-      allows you to see all of your activities at once and can be used to 
+      allows you to see all of your windows at once and can be used to 
       switch between tasks and launch applications.
     </para>
 



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