[release-notes/gnome-3-0] More tweaks.

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit ae7ce4e5ab92ff1824e4d357ae4a3a5f068246a9
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Thu Mar 31 17:39:29 2011 +0530

    More tweaks.

 help/C/release-notes.xml |    4 ++--
 help/C/rnusers.xml       |    6 +++---
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/release-notes.xml b/help/C/release-notes.xml
index 3d86b06..b9f84b6 100644
--- a/help/C/release-notes.xml
+++ b/help/C/release-notes.xml
@@ -57,8 +57,8 @@
         GNOME &gnomeversion; is a significant milestone in the history of the GNOME Project. The 
         release introduces an exciting new desktop which has been designed for 
         today's users and which is suited to a range of modern computing 
-        devices. GNOME's developer technologies have seen substantial 
-        improvements for 3.0. Modernized and streamlined, they will enable 
+        devices. GNOME's developer technologies have been substantially 
+        improved for 3.0. Modernized and streamlined, they will enable 
         developers to provide better user experiences with less time and 
         effort. And GNOME 3.0 comes with the same GNOME applications that users 
         know and trust, many of which have received significant enhancements.
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 430f385..fadcdcf 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
   </sect3>
 
   <sect3 id="rnusers.notifications">
-    <title>Notifications That Work For You</title>
+    <title>Notifications That Work for You</title>
 
     <para>
       GNOME 3.0 includes a new notifications system which has been designed to 
@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@
     </para>
 
 	<figure id="fig.search.gnome">
-	  <title>Launch applications through desktop search</title>
+	  <title>Desktop search</title>
 		  <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
 			  <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;search-3-0.png" format="PNG"/>
 			</imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@
   </sect3>
 
   <sect3 id="rnusers.under.the.hood">
-    <title>Improvements Under The Hood</title>
+    <title>Improvements Under the Hood</title>
 
     <para>
       Changes to GNOME's underlying technologies mean that GNOME 3 applications