[gnome-user-docs] g-h/a11y: Intro language, title changes, mark review

[Shaun McCance <shaunm src gnome org>]

commit fb10d1fc08df309cd28ebeaff9c2f74a5cadaae1
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Mon Mar 21 17:14:45 2011 -0400

    g-h/a11y: Intro language, title changes, mark review

 gnome-help/C/a11y.page |   21 ++++++++++-----------
 1 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y.page
index bc90bfa..d723118 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="a11y"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-19" status="incomplete"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-21" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@
     </credit>
 
     <desc>
-     <link xref="a11y#vision">Vision</link>,
-     <link xref="a11y#sound">sound</link>,
+     <link xref="a11y#vision">Seeing</link>,
+     <link xref="a11y#sound">hearing</link>,
      <link xref="a11y#mobility">mobility</link>,
      <link xref="a11y-braille">braille</link>,
      <link xref="a11y-mag">screen magnifier</link>
@@ -23,11 +23,13 @@
 
   <title>Universal access</title>
 
-  <p>Short introductory text...</p>
+  <p>GNOME includes assistive technologies to support users with various
+  impairments and special needs, and to interact with common assistive
+  devices. Many accessibility features can be accessed from the
+  accessibility menu in the top bar.</p>
 
   <section id="vision">
-    <title>Vision</title>
-    <p>Something about vision...</p>
+    <title>Visual Impairments</title>
 
     <links type="topic" groups="blind" style="linklist">
       <title>Blindness</title>
@@ -41,18 +43,15 @@
     <links type="topic" groups="#first #default #last" style="linklist">
       <title>Other topics</title>
     </links>
-
   </section>
 
   <section id="sound">
-    <title>Sound</title>
-    <p>Something about sound...</p>
+    <title>Hearing Impairments</title>
     <links type="topic" style="linklist"/>
   </section>
 
   <section id="mobility">
-    <title>Mobility</title>
-    <p>Something about mobility...</p>
+    <title>Mobility Impairments</title>
     <links type="topic" groups="pointing" style="linklist">
       <title>Mouse movement</title>
     </links>