[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] made change to reflect that not all cases require <Unlock>.



commit f138db2c74c7efcc1c16c3aa7d4141f1d1c0a190
Author: Tiffany Antopolski <tiffany antopolski com>
Date:   Tue Jun 7 09:52:52 2011 -0400

    made change to reflect that not all cases require <Unlock>.

 gnome-help/C/clock-set.page      |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page |   10 ++++------
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
index d32c5e9..572b1b1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 
 <steps>
  <item><p>Click on the clock in the middle of the top bar and select <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui>.</p></item>
- <item><p>Click <gui>Unlock</gui> and type the <link xref="user-admin-explain">admin password</link>.</p></item>
+ <item><p>You may need to click <gui>Unlock</gui> and type the <link xref="user-admin-explain">admin password</link>.</p></item>
  <item><p>Adjust the date and time by clicking on the arrows to choose the year, day, hour and minute. You can choose the month from a drop-down list.</p></item>
  <item>
   <p>If you like, you can have the clock update itself automatically by turning the <gui>Network Time</gui> ON.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
index 3bbf901..36268e8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="clock"/>
     <desc>Add other timezones so you can see what time it is in other cities.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -16,15 +16,13 @@
   </info>
 
 <title>Change your timezone</title>
-<p>If you want to know what time it is in different cities around the world, you can add additional timezones to the clock.</p>
-<p>Change timezones by choosing a different geographical location:</p>
 <steps>
   <item><p>Click on the clock located in the middle of the top bar.</p></item>
   <item><p>Select <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Now, click on <gui>Unlock</gui> and type your password.  </p></item>
-  <item><p>Click on your current continent, then select your current city from the drop-down list.</p></item>
+<item><p>You may need to click <gui>Unlock</gui> and type the <link xref="user-admin-explain">admin password</link>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click on your the location on the map, then select your current city from the drop-down list.</p></item>
 </steps>
 
-<p>The time shown on the clock will not update automatically when you select a different location; it needs to be <link xref="clock-set">set manually</link>.</p>
+<p>The time shown on the top bar will update automatically when you select a different location.  The time in the window will be updated next time you access the <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui> window.  You may also wish to <link xref="clock-set">set the clock manually</link>.</p>
 
 </page>



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