[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] minor updates to files-removedrive.page. marked page as final.



commit 43e83562b076c7969d3b0b6de372bf799d0c5b5e
Author: Jim Campbell <jwcampbell gmail com>
Date:   Tue Jun 7 14:04:14 2011 -0400

    minor updates to files-removedrive.page. marked page as final.

 gnome-help/C/files-removedrive.page |    8 ++++----
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-removedrive.page b/gnome-help/C/files-removedrive.page
index f361aad..1015502 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-removedrive.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-removedrive.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="files#removable"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-29" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-07" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -31,16 +31,16 @@
     remove or eject the device.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
-  <p>Alternatively, you can right-click the device and select either
+  <p>Alternately, you can right-click the device and select either
   <gui>Eject</gui> or <gui>Safely Remove Drive</gui>. USB drives can't
   be physically ejected, so for these devices, there is no difference
   between <gui>Eject</gui> and <gui>Safely Remove Drive</gui>.</p>
 
-  <p>If you have any files stored on the device open in any applications, you
+  <p>If any of the files on the device are open and in use by an application, you
   will not be able to safely remove the device. You will be prompted with a
   window telling you that "the volume is busy", and listing all the open files
   on the device. Once you close all the files on the device, the device
-  will automatically be safely removed (so you can unplug or eject it).</p>
+  will automatically be safe to remove (so you can unplug or eject it).</p>
 
   <p>You can also choose <gui>Unmount Anyway</gui> to remove the device
   without closing the files. This can cause errors in applications that



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