[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] g-h/net-*: tech review
- From: Shaun McCance <shaunm src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] g-h/net-*: tech review
- Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2011 20:31:33 +0000 (UTC)
commit 1101ddd4f0fa0c19ef0d1cfaffed5c041b8e4fff
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date: Mon Jun 6 12:30:39 2011 -0400
g-h/net-*: tech review
gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page | 7 ++++++-
gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/net-otherscontrol.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/net-passwordok-noconnect.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page | 4 ++--
gnome-help/C/net-slow.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page | 4 ++--
8 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page b/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
index f9f992d..a5544af 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="net"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-05" status="final"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-06" status="incorrect"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -20,6 +20,11 @@
</info>
<title>What is a MAC address?</title>
+<comment>
+<cite>shaunm</cite>
+<p>Just as for net-findip, change instructions on getting to net settings, make
+sure to select the current connection (wired, wireless, etc).</p>
+</comment>
<p>A <em>MAC address</em> is the unique code that is assigned by the manufacturer to a piece of network hardware (like a wireless card or an ethernet card). <em>MAC</em> stands for <em>Media Access Control</em>, and each code is intended to be unique to a particular device.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page
index cdafa42..e003f33 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
<link type="seealso" xref="net-otherscontrol"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-06" status="incorrect"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-otherscontrol.page b/gnome-help/C/net-otherscontrol.page
index 8723adf..eeca1a9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-otherscontrol.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-otherscontrol.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="net#problems"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-06" status="incorrect"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-passwordok-noconnect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-passwordok-noconnect.page
index ce25486..c2168e2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-passwordok-noconnect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-passwordok-noconnect.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="net#wireless"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-05" status="final"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-06" status="correct"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page b/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page
index 323fc04..ca4e340 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
- type="topic"
+ type="topic" style="question"
id="net-proxy">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="net"/>
<link type="guide" xref="web#connections"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-06" status="correct"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page b/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page
index 64337ad..980cc5a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
<link type="guide" xref="net#problems"/>
<link type="guide" xref="web#connections"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-06" status="correct"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
index 61941f7..2f513f9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
<link type="guide" xref="net#vpn"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-06" status="incorrect"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page b/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
index c9e30da..70064ae 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
- type="topic" style="tip"
+ type="topic" style="question"
id="net-what-is-ip-address">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="net"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-05" status="final"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-06" status="correct"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Jim Campbell</name>
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