[vinagre] Improve keyboard-shortcuts help page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit e7263b9343ffa603f675dce26cb58a9ea31f12ff
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 googlemail com>
Date:   Mon Dec 26 22:08:25 2011 +0100

    Improve keyboard-shortcuts help page
    
    Fix bug 666649, add <revision> information and general improvements to
    wording.

 help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page |   17 +++++++++--------
 1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page b/help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page
index c4b5ae3..d67c647 100644
--- a/help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page
+++ b/help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page
@@ -4,8 +4,9 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#options"/>
-    <desc>Use keyboard shortcuts with <app>Vinagre</app> instead of the remote
-    machine.</desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2011-12-26" status="review"/>
+
+    <desc>Disable the sending of keyboard shortcuts to the remote machine.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
       <email>kittykat3756 googlemail com</email>
@@ -17,14 +18,14 @@
 
   <title>Keyboard shortcuts</title>
 
-  <p>You can enable or disable keyboard shortcuts by clicking <guiseq><gui>View</gui>
-  <gui>Keyboard shortcuts</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+  <p>You can enable or disable keyboard shortcuts by clicking
+  <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Keyboard shortcuts</gui></guiseq>.</p>
 
-  <p>Select this option to use keyboard shortcuts, like
-  <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>D</key></keyseq>, menu accelerators and
-  mnemonics, like <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>M</key></keyseq>, with
+  <p>Enabling this option allows the use of keyboard shortcuts (like
+  <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>D</key></keyseq>), menu accelerators and
+  mnemonics (such as <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>M</key></keyseq>), with
   <app>Vinagre</app>. This means that <app>Vinagre</app> will catch those key
-  combinations, instead of sending them to the remote machine. This option is
+  combinations instead of sending them to the remote machine. This option is
   disabled by default because most of the time, you will be interacting with
   the computer which you have connected to.</p>