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[gnome-user-docs] g-h/backup: Minor edits, removed deja-dup icon, all final

commit b8c8e0b2bcc244f50855a4f0b1883bd008ad1a73
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Mon Apr 4 13:54:04 2011 -0400

    g-h/backup: Minor edits, removed deja-dup icon, all final

 gnome-help/C/backup-check.page      |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page  |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/backup-how.page        |   10 ++++------
 gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/backup-what.page       |    5 ++---
 gnome-help/C/backup-where.page      |    6 +++---
 gnome-help/C/backup-why.page        |    7 ++++---
 gnome-help/C/figures/deja-dup.png   |  Bin 3459 -> 0 bytes
 gnome-help/Makefile.am              |    1 -
 9 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page
index 11062e9..219303b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="files#backup"/>
     <desc>Verify your backup was successful.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-04-01" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2010-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page
index 20b1377..5e73285 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
 On the other hand, if you are backing up the data on your home computer then you may need to factor in a few things, such as:
 </p>
 
-<list>
+<list style="compact">
 <item><p>The amount of time you spend on the computer.</p></item>
 <item><p>How often and by how much the data on the computer changes.</p></item>
 </list>
@@ -34,6 +34,6 @@ On the other hand, if you are backing up the data on your home computer then you
 If it is just some music, e-mails and family photos, then weekly or even monthly backups may suffice. However, if you happen to be in the middle of a tax audit, more frequent backups may be necessary.
 </p>
 
-<p>As a general rule, the amount of time in between backups should be no more than the amount of time you could stand to spend re-doing any lost work. For example, if spending a week re-writing lost documents is too long for you, you should back-up at least once per week.</p>
+<p>As a general rule, the amount of time in between backups should be no more than the amount of time you could stand to spend re-doing any lost work. For example, if spending a week re-writing lost documents is too long for you, you should back up at least once per week.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
index 8437544..ded225d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
@@ -5,7 +5,6 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="backup-why"/>
     <desc>Use Déjà Dup (or some other backup application) to make copies of your valuable files and settings to protect against loss.</desc>
-    <title type="sort">d</title>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -18,16 +17,15 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-<title>Backup documents, files and settings</title>
+<title>How to back up</title>
 
-<p>The easiest way of backing-up your files and settings is to let a backup application manage the backup process for you. A number of different backup applications are available, for example <app>Déjà Dup</app>.</p>
+<p>The easiest way of backing up your files and settings is to let a backup application manage the backup process for you. A number of different backup applications are available, for example <app>Déjà Dup</app>.</p>
 
-<media type="image" src = "figures/deja-dup.png"/>
 <p>The help for your chosen backup application will walk you through setting your preferences for the backup, as well as how to restore your data if something goes wrong.</p>
 
-<p>An alternative option is to just <link xref="files-copy">copy your files</link> to a safe location, such as an external hard drive, another computer on the network or a USB drive. Your <link xref="backup-thinkabout">personal files</link> and settings are usually in your Home folder, so you can copy them from there.</p>
+<p>An alternative option is to just <link xref="files-copy">copy your files</link> to a safe location, such as an external hard drive, another computer on the network, or a USB drive. Your <link xref="backup-thinkabout">personal files</link> and settings are usually in your Home folder, so you can copy them from there.</p>
    
-<p>The amount of data you can backup is limited by the size of the storage device. If you have the room on your backup device, it is best to backup the entire Home folder with the following exceptions:</p>
+<p>The amount of data you can back up is limited by the size of the storage device. If you have the room on your backup device, it is best to back up the entire Home folder with the following exceptions:</p>
 
 <list>
  <item><p>Files that you have copied from a CD, DVD, or other removable media, since it would be faster to copy them again than to restore them from backup.</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page
index f64601f..bba1223 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ Deciding what files to backup and finding where they all are is the most difficu
 
   </tr>
   <tr>
-    <td><p>Your personal settings</p></td> <td><p><cmd>~/.config</cmd>, <cmd>~/gconf</cmd>, <cmd>~/.gnome3</cmd>, <cmd>~/.local</cmd></p></td>
+    <td><p>Your personal settings</p></td> <td><p><cmd>~/.config</cmd>, <cmd>~/.gconf</cmd>, <cmd>~/.gnome3</cmd>, <cmd>~/.local</cmd></p></td>
     <td><p>Contain settings you set for your desktop and some applications.</p></td>
   </tr>
   <tr>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-what.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-what.page
index 1448012..76b37c6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-what.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-what.page
@@ -3,8 +3,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="backup-why"/>
-    <desc>Backup anything that you can't bear to lose if something goes wrong.</desc>
-    <title type="sort">b</title>
+    <desc>Back up anything that you can't bear to lose if something goes wrong.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-30" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -18,7 +17,7 @@
 
   </info>
 
-  <title>What should you backup?</title>
+  <title>What to back up</title>
 
 <p>	
 Your priority should be to backup your <link xref="backup-thinkabout">most important files</link> as well as those that are difficult to recreate.  An example of most important to least important:
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-where.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-where.page
index 7c69034..a9bb690 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-where.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-where.page
@@ -17,9 +17,9 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Where to store your backup?</title>
-    <p>
-    You should store backup copies of your files somewhere separate from your computer (on an external hard disk, for example). An important consideration when choosing the backup medium is capacity. This will depend on how much data you need to backup.
+  <title>Where to store your backup</title>
+x    <p>
+    You should store backup copies of your files somewhere separate from your computer (on an external hard disk, for example). An important consideration when choosing the backup medium is capacity. This will depend on how much data you need to back up.
     </p>
 
    <list>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page
index 2fe1354..6d543fc 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page
@@ -21,12 +21,13 @@
 
   </info>
 
-  <title>Backup your important files</title>
+  <title>Back up your important files</title>
   <p>
-<em>Backing up</em> your files simply means to make a copy of your files for safekeeping. This is done in the event that the original files become unusable due to loss or corruption. These copies can be used to restore the original  data in the event of loss. Copies should be stored on a different device from the original files. For example, you may use a USB drive, an external hard drive, a CD/DVD, or an off-site service.
+<em>Backing up</em> your files simply means making a copy of your files for safekeeping.
+This is done in case the original files become unusable due to loss or corruption. These copies can be used to restore the original  data in the event of loss. Copies should be stored on a different device from the original files. For example, you may use a USB drive, an external hard drive, a CD/DVD, or an off-site service.
 </p>
 <p>
-The best way to backup up your files is to do so regularly, keeping the copies off-site and encrypted.</p>
+The best way to back up up your files is to do so regularly, keeping the copies off-site and encrypted.</p>
 
 <links type="topic" style="2column"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/Makefile.am b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
index 1089925..9296c9a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/Makefile.am
+++ b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
@@ -5,7 +5,6 @@ DOC_ID = gnome-help
 DOC_LINGUAS = de es gl sv
 
 DOC_FIGURES = \
-	figures/deja-dup.png \
 	figures/gnome.png \
 	figures/gnome-searchtool.png \
 	figures/nautilus.png \
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