[cheese] fix some grammar errors in the documentation

[Daniel G. Siegel <dgsiegel src gnome org>]

commit df5539e68974f9cbd7d86e231cb33ae9aaf534e1
Author: daniel g. siegel <dgsiegel gnome org>
Date:   Mon Sep 14 19:59:46 2009 +0200

    fix some grammar errors in the documentation

 help/C/cheese.xml |   24 +++++++++++++-----------
 1 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/cheese.xml b/help/C/cheese.xml
index a9d2e03..6bbfe79 100644
--- a/help/C/cheese.xml
+++ b/help/C/cheese.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 <!--
       (Do not remove this comment block.)
   Template Maintained by the GNOME Documentation Project:
-	  http://developer.gnome.org/projects/gdp
+  http://developer.gnome.org/projects/gdp
   Template version: 2.0 beta
   Template last modified Feb 12, 2002
 -->
@@ -25,14 +25,15 @@
     <title>&application; Manual</title>
     <abstract role="description">
       <para>
-        &application; is a video and photo shoot program that for webcams
-        (or other cameras) and can do some cool effects.
+        &application; uses your webcam to take photos and videos, applies
+        fancy special effects and lets you share the fun with others.
       </para>
     </abstract>
     <copyright>
-      <year>2007,2008,2009</year>
+      <year>2007-2009</year>
       <holder>daniel g. siegel (dgsiegel gnome org)</holder>
       <holder>Jaap A. Haitsma (jaap haitsma org)</holder>
+      <holder>Filippo Argiolas (fargiolas gnome org)</holder>
     </copyright>
 
   <!-- translators: uncomment this:
@@ -49,6 +50,7 @@
      document.  -->
     <publisher role="maintainer">
       <publishername>Joshua Henderson (joshhendo gmail com)</publishername>
+      <publishername>Felix Kaser (f kaser gmx net)</publishername>
     </publisher>
 
    &legal;
@@ -164,7 +166,7 @@
         To report a bug or make a suggestion regarding the &app; application or
         this manual, follow the directions in the 
         <ulink url="http://projects.gnome.org/cheese/";
-	  type="http">&application; Contact Page</ulink>.
+	  type="http">&application; project page</ulink>.
       </para>
 <!-- Translators may also add here feedback address for translations -->
     </legalnotice>
@@ -191,8 +193,8 @@
   </indexterm>
 
   <para>
-  &app; is a video and photo shoot application with cool effects
-  for the <systemitem>GNOME desktop</systemitem>.
+  &app; uses your webcam to take photos and videos, applies
+  fancy special effects and lets you share the fun with others.
   </para>
 
 </section>
@@ -217,9 +219,9 @@
   </figure>
 	
 	<para>
-		Especially for &app;-users with small displays like the ones in netbooks we have designed
-		another view. The more horizontally aligned, so it does fit better on small widescreen displays.
-		The wide-view is showed in the screenshot below.
+		Especially for &app;-users with small displays, like the ones in netbooks, we have designed
+		another view. It is more horizontally aligned, in order to fit better on small widescreen displays.
+		The wide-view is shown in the screenshot below.
 	</para>
 	
 	<figure>
@@ -259,7 +261,7 @@
 
     <para>
       You are able to select numerous effects to apply to your photo. To apply
-      an effect, just click on the effect that you want. The button will appear highlighted.
+      an effect, just click on the effect you want. The button will appear highlighted.
       Selecting multiple effects will apply all the effects to
       your image (for example, if you apply <guibutton>Hulk</guibutton> and
       <guibutton>Vertical Flip</guibutton>, the