Re: Speakers reminder of COSCUP / GNOME.Asia 2010

[Brian Cameron <brian cameron oracle com>]

Pockey:

Looks good, a few minor comments:

On 07/21/10 04:11 AM, Pockey wrote:
>        * The venue is located at the International Conference Hall,
>          Humanities&  Social Sciences Building, Academia Sinica, Taipei,

Is that supposed to say "Humanities&"?

>        * Please register at the counter when you enter the venue during
>          the two days of conference. Please also remember to take a lunch

Do you have to register on both days?  Above you say you register two
days.

>          coupon of the day in order to redeem a lunch box during lunch
>          break.
>
>        * In order to share your expertise, your talk will be recorded and
>          share with the public. Please sign the form to release the

I would say "recorded and shared"

>          recordings to the public with a Creative Commons license.  You
>          can sign and return the form at the counter of the GNOME.Asia /
>          COSCUP 2010 event
>          (https://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0AVuXLsanO-xAZGRoN2Qzd3RfNjU2Z3Z6d2JkZA)
>
>
>        * There will be WiFi in the conference and dedicated Ethernet
>          cables for speakers, but we can not guarantee the quality or
>          bandwidth of the network.
>
>
>        * We will have a Birds-of-a-Feather session on the evening of
>          August 14th. You are welcome to join us or to propose your own
>          topic at http://wiki.coscup.org/bof-2010 .

Remove the space before the period at the end of the sentence.

Brian