Re: Speakers reminder of COSCUP / GNOME.Asia 2010


Looks good, a few minor comments:

On 07/21/10 04:11 AM, Pockey wrote:
       * The venue is located at the International Conference Hall,
         Humanities&  Social Sciences Building, Academia Sinica, Taipei,

Is that supposed to say "Humanities&"?

       * Please register at the counter when you enter the venue during
         the two days of conference. Please also remember to take a lunch

Do you have to register on both days?  Above you say you register two

         coupon of the day in order to redeem a lunch box during lunch

       * In order to share your expertise, your talk will be recorded and
         share with the public. Please sign the form to release the

I would say "recorded and shared"

         recordings to the public with a Creative Commons license.  You
         can sign and return the form at the counter of the GNOME.Asia /
         COSCUP 2010 event

       * There will be WiFi in the conference and dedicated Ethernet
         cables for speakers, but we can not guarantee the quality or
         bandwidth of the network.

       * We will have a Birds-of-a-Feather session on the evening of
         August 14th. You are welcome to join us or to propose your own
         topic at .

Remove the space before the period at the end of the sentence.


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