I have fixed the order of members in form-letters. Also I fixed some grammar mistakes, changes some words in more common way. Changes I made are in changes.log (attached). From Sankarshan's mail: >> At last, we also need to find new administrators for the >> foundation-announce, membership-committee and vote mailing lists. Is >> someone interested? >/me volunteers for this. I'm ok with that. But I also think, it should be better to have more than one administrators for those lists. Lists moderation needs urgent action for most of times. When you need to deal with spam for example. Since this is volunteer work, one person might not be available all the time. Also I belive it should be better to select administrators from different time zones. We might also cite that in how-we-work.txt if you all agree on it. Btw, where are other members from? I live in Turkey where lay on GMT +2.
? changes.log
Index: application-accepted.txt
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RCS file: /cvs/gnome/gnome-foundation/form-letters/application-accepted.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -p -r1.8 application-accepted.txt
--- application-accepted.txt 22 Apr 2005 21:14:05 -0000 1.8
+++ application-accepted.txt 27 Apr 2005 01:50:36 -0000
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ you can do so here:
You are also encouraged to subscribe to the foundation-list mailing list.
It is open to the public (even non-members) and is used to discuss
-any issues relating to the GNOME Foundation. This is the place for
+any issue relating to the GNOME Foundation. This is the place for
you to suggest ideas and voice your opinions on issues pertaining to
the GNOME Foundation. To subscribe or read the archives, go to:
http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/foundation-list
@@ -25,8 +25,7 @@ Foundation's web page at:
GNOME is a part of the GNU Project, and is a project to create a Free
Software desktop. For more info about Free Software and its
-philosophy,
-please visit
+philosophy, please visit
http://www.gnu.org/
Thanks for your contributions to GNOME.
@@ -35,8 +34,8 @@ Sincerely,
The GNOME Foundation Membership Committee
- Vincent Untz <vincent vuntz net>
+ Barış Çiçek <baris teamforce name tr>
Albert Mora <jarashi telefonica net>
- Baris Cicek <baris teamforce name tr>
- Eddy Mulyono <eddymulyono mail com>
Sankarshan Mukhopadhay <sankarshan randomink org>
+ Eddy Mulyono <eddymulyono mail com>
+ Vincent Untz <vincent vuntz net>
Index: application-denied.txt
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RCS file: /cvs/gnome/gnome-foundation/form-letters/application-denied.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -p -r1.8 application-denied.txt
--- application-denied.txt 22 Apr 2005 21:14:05 -0000 1.8
+++ application-denied.txt 27 Apr 2005 01:50:36 -0000
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Subject: GNOME Foundation Membership - D
Dear <applicant name>,
-We are sorry to inform you that your application to the GNOME
+We regret to inform you that your application to the GNOME
Foundation Membership has been denied.
The reasons given were:
@@ -13,10 +13,10 @@ The Membership Committee uses the Member
http://foundation.gnome.org/membership-policy.html to determine
eligibility. Please review this policy if you believe this determination
was made in error. You can send questions to this committee by emailing
-membership-committee gnome org
+membership-committee gnome org
You are free to re-apply at any time if you have additional information
-which you feel will help illustrate your eligibility.
+which you feel will help us to illustrate your eligibility.
If correspondence with the Membership Committee does not result in
acceptance of your application, you can appeal the determination by
@@ -28,8 +28,8 @@ Sincerely,
The GNOME Foundation Membership Committee
- Vincent Untz <vincent vuntz net>
+ Barış Çiçek <baris teamforce name tr>
Albert Mora <jarashi telefonica net>
- Baris Cicek <baris teamforce name tr>
- Eddy Mulyono <eddymulyono mail com>
Sankarshan Mukhopadhay <sankarshan randomink org>
+ Eddy Mulyono <eddymulyono mail com>
+ Vincent Untz <vincent vuntz net>
Index: application-renewed.txt
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RCS file: /cvs/gnome/gnome-foundation/form-letters/application-renewed.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -p -r1.9 application-renewed.txt
--- application-renewed.txt 22 Apr 2005 21:14:05 -0000 1.9
+++ application-renewed.txt 27 Apr 2005 01:50:36 -0000
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ would like to read the archives you can
You are also encouraged to subscribe to the foundation-list mailing list.
It is open to the public (even non-members) and is used to discuss
-any issues relating to the GNOME Foundation. This is the place for
+any issue relating to the GNOME Foundation. This is the place for
you to suggest ideas and voice your opinions on issues pertaining to
the GNOME Foundation. To subscribe or read the archives, go to:
http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/foundation-list
@@ -34,8 +34,8 @@ Sincerely,
The GNOME Foundation Membership Committee
- Vincent Untz <vincent vuntz net>
+ Barış Çiçek <baris teamforce name tr>
Albert Mora <jarashi telefonica net>
- Baris Cicek <baris teamforce name tr>
- Eddy Mulyono <eddymulyono mail com>
Sankarshan Mukhopadhay <sankarshan randomink org>
+ Eddy Mulyono <eddymulyono mail com>
+ Vincent Untz <vincent vuntz net>
Index: no-need-to-renew.txt
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RCS file: /cvs/gnome/gnome-foundation/form-letters/no-need-to-renew.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -p -r1.8 no-need-to-renew.txt
--- no-need-to-renew.txt 22 Apr 2005 21:14:05 -0000 1.8
+++ no-need-to-renew.txt 27 Apr 2005 01:50:36 -0000
@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@ Thanks for your continuing contributions
The GNOME Foundation Membership Committee
- Vincent Untz <vincent vuntz net>
+ Barış Çiçek <baris teamforce name tr>
Albert Mora <jarashi telefonica net>
- Baris Cicek <baris teamforce name tr>
- Eddy Mulyono <eddymulyono mail com>
Sankarshan Mukhopadhay <sankarshan randomink org>
+ Eddy Mulyono <eddymulyono mail com>
+ Vincent Untz <vincent vuntz net>
Index: request-info.txt
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RCS file: /cvs/gnome/gnome-foundation/form-letters/request-info.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -p -r1.9 request-info.txt
--- request-info.txt 22 Apr 2005 21:14:05 -0000 1.9
+++ request-info.txt 27 Apr 2005 01:50:37 -0000
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Subject: GNOME Membership Application of
Dear <contact name>,
-The GNOME foundation membership committee needs more informations to
+The GNOME foundation membership committee needs more information to
process the application of <applicant name>. Since [he/she] has listed
you as the primary contact, the committee would like you to list the
contributions that <applicant name> has made for the GNOME community in
@@ -14,8 +14,8 @@ At your service,
The GNOME Foundation Membership Committee
- Vincent Untz <vincent vuntz net>
+ Barış Çiçek <baris teamforce name tr>
Albert Mora <jarashi telefonica net>
- Baris Cicek <baris teamforce name tr>
- Eddy Mulyono <eddymulyono mail com>
Sankarshan Mukhopadhay <sankarshan randomink org>
+ Eddy Mulyono <eddymulyono mail com>
+ Vincent Untz <vincent vuntz net>
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