Re: [Rhythmbox-devel] Patch: spelling correction and rewording indruid
- From: James Kahn <james liet net>
- To: Rhythmbox Devel <rhythmbox-devel gnome org>
- Subject: Re: [Rhythmbox-devel] Patch: spelling correction and rewording indruid
- Date: 09 Aug 2003 00:02:53 +1200
On Fri, 2003-08-08 at 23:56, Bastien Nocera wrote:
> On Fri, 2003-08-08 at 12:49, James Kahn wrote:
> > The previous wording about adding music to the library sounded a bit
> > clumsy.
>
> > -You may choose to skip this step; instead, you
> > -can add music to your library at any point later.
> > +Its okay choose to skip this step; you can always add music to your library later.
>
> Urgh, that's hardly correct spelling or grammar. And it's also a bit too
> informal.
Argh, how could I overlook missing a word - I should've got more than 4
hours of sleep last night.
The problem I had with it before is that the druid was phrased as if it
was giving the user permission to skip the step, rather than the
choice. I also thought that it was a bit too formal.
Patch again, omitted word replaced. I prefer the more relaxed tone.
--
James Kahn <james@liet.net>
Index: data/glade/druid.glade
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/gnome/rhythmbox/data/glade/druid.glade,v
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.2 druid.glade
--- data/glade/druid.glade 7 Aug 2003 02:01:40 -0000 1.2
+++ data/glade/druid.glade 8 Aug 2003 11:33:48 -0000
@@ -52,8 +52,7 @@
<widget class="GtkLabel" id="label1">
<property name="visible">True</property>
<property name="label" translatable="yes">Rhythmbox needs to know where to find your music.
-You may choose to skip this step; instead, you
-can add music to your library at any point later.
+Its okay to choose to skip this step; you can always add music to your library later.
Please choose one of the options below:</property>
<property name="use_underline">False</property>
Index: lib/widgets/rb-druid.c
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/gnome/rhythmbox/lib/widgets/rb-druid.c,v
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.2 rb-druid.c
--- lib/widgets/rb-druid.c 7 Aug 2003 01:49:08 -0000 1.2
+++ lib/widgets/rb-druid.c 8 Aug 2003 11:38:15 -0000
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@
gnome_druid_append_page (druid->priv->druid, page);
gnome_druid_set_page (druid->priv->druid, page);
gnome_druid_page_edge_set_text (GNOME_DRUID_PAGE_EDGE (page),
- _("In order to get started using\nRhythmbox, this assisstant will ask\nyou some simple questions. "));
+ _("In order to get started using\nRhythmbox, this assistant will ask\nyou some simple questions. "));
/* page 2 */
page = GNOME_DRUID_PAGE (gnome_druid_page_standard_new ());
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