2009-02-24 klockan 10:16 skrev Alexander Larsson:
> On Mon, 2009-02-23 at 13:52 +0100, Wouter Bolsterlee wrote:
> > 1. Why use the passive voice in the first sentence ("... is unknown to
> > you")? Directly addressing the user seems more logical in this case.
> > 2. Why "is marked as trusted"? I think "has been marked trusted" makes more
> > sense?
> > 3. Reordering the words so that it ends with the word "unsafe" likely gets
> > more attention from the user.
> > 4. File names should be enclosed in double quotes.
> >
> > So, my suggestion:
> >
> > The application launcher "%s" has not been marked as trusted. If you do
> > not know this application launcher's source, launching it may be unsafe.
>
> This looks good to me, can i have another string freeze approval please?
1/2.
— Wouter
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