Re: CVS commits

[Vincent Untz <vuntz gnome org>]

Le mardi 21 juin 2005 Ã 10:51 -0700, Gregory Leblanc a Ãcrit :
> The other change that doesn't look right is in application-denied.txt.
>
> "You are free to re-apply at any time if you have additional information
> which you feel will help us to illustrate your eligibility."
>
> Here, we the committee members are not the ones doing the illustrating,
> so adding 'us to' to that sentence is not correct.  Reversing the order
> of those two words, and placing them at the end of the sentence makes
> far more sense.  That is
>
> "You are free to re-apply at any time if you have additional information
> which you feel will help illustrate your eligibility to us."

Fixed in CVS.

Vincent

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