Re: GNOME Amazon stores up and running

["Jaap A. Haitsma" <jaap haitsma org>]

On Sat, Sep 5, 2009 at 01:52, Patrick Fey<inside nachtarbeiter net> wrote:
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> Hi Jaap,
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>> I've added a logo and text to the sidebar.
>> Test site: http://gnome.haitsma.org/friends/
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>> What do you think, ready to commit?
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> looks nice. I think you did a very good job on the whole Amazon project!
> Two caveats, though:
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> a) I'm not a native speaker, but shouldn't it be "purchase at" instead
> of "purchase in"?
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> b) I'd at a dot at the end of the sentence.
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> While you're at it, could you please
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> a) add a dot at the end of "For details contact <fundraising at gnome org>"
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> b) Change the corporate sponsorship paragraph at the end of the page to:
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> "Do you as a company want to sponsor GNOME and take a seat in the GNOME
> Advisory Board? Please contact <fundraising at gnome org>." (added
> question mark in between and changed sponsoring to sponsor)

Thanks for your comments. I made all the above changes.

> I think we also need to update the check.html page, since the amounts
> mentioned there do not match what we have on the index page right now.
> Or is this intentional?

I never worked on it, so I don't know
Stormy shall I change the check page to the amounts and levels as on
the index page?

Regards

Jaap