Re: release notes: first draft

[Bob Kashani <bobk ocf berkeley edu>]

On Thu, 2006-03-09 at 14:28 -0600, Jonathon Jongsma wrote:
> On 3/6/06, Davyd Madeley <davyd madeley id au> wrote:
> > Ok guys and gals. I am announcing a preliminary draft of the release
> > notes for 2.14. We now require proof readers for spelling, grammar and
> > technical correctness.
> >
> 
> In the very first paragraph, change:
> "GNOME comprises of both a desktop and developer's platform"
> 
> "GNOME comprises both a desktop and..."

I changed it to "GNOME includes both a desktop and developer's
platform..."

Bob

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