Re: [Fwd: GUADEC7 press release draft]

[Murray Cumming <murrayc murrayc com>]

On Mon, 2005-06-20 at 15:34 +0200, Claus Schwarm wrote:
> Changed to 'and are encouraging the adoption of free software to the
> citizens.' How is that?

by citizens. Yes, that's better.

> 
> > > About the IGC
> > > 
> > > The Internet Global Congress is the leading Internet and New
> > > Technologies congress in Spain. Every year the IGC hosts an
> > > international event (IPv6 world meeting in 2005, Internet Society
> > > annual conference in 2004...)
> > 
> > Avoid the ...
> > 
> > > . Open Source has become a major topic in the IGC
> > > and they will host the GUADEC 2006 providing top quality
> > > infrastructures and services. More at www.igcweb.net.
> > 
> > replace "and they will host the GUADEC 2006 providing top quality
> > infrastructure and services."
> > with "so they are pleased to host GUADEC 2006 with their high-quality
> > infrastructure."
> > 
> 
> I'm not really sure if that makes sense in the 'about' paragraph.
> However, they seem to have no short description. I used the following,
> stolen from 
> 
> http://europa.eu.int/idabc/en/document/3729/5743
> 
> "The Internet Global Congress is the leading Internet and
> New Technologies congress in Spain. Organized by the Fundaci�rcelona
> Digital, the Congress comprises a series of conferences addressing a
> number of key Information Society themes, and an exhibition (IGC
> Village) where delegates can discover the latest ICT products and
> services. More at www.igcweb.net."

Yes, that seems appropriate.

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