Re: made some release notes 'splash' changes

From: Jeff Waugh <jdub perkypants org>
To: Luis Villa <luis villa gmail com>
Cc: marketing list <marketing-list gnome org>
Subject: Re: made some release notes 'splash' changes
Date: Mon, 29 Aug 2005 05:50:41 +1000

<quote who="Luis Villa">

> > and remove the icky "people who actually did the work" bit.
> 
> I was attempting there to make it non-marketese; am open to other
> explanations of what the community announce is.

Right, but there's non-marketese and there's ugly, unwelcoming phrases. How
about "is the official community announcement, and the press release is..."

- Jeff

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References:
- made some release notes 'splash' changes
  - From: Luis Villa
- Re: made some release notes 'splash' changes
  - From: Jeff Waugh
- Re: made some release notes 'splash' changes
  - From: Luis Villa

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