Re: Maryland Library article, edits complete

["Stephanie Watson" <stef foresightlinux org>]

I have shortened the excerpt based on feedback... let me know if that's appropriately short.

-Stef

On 11/30/07, Lucas Rocha < lucasr gnome org> wrote:

Hi,

2007/12/1, Lucas Rocha < lucasr gnome org>:
> Hi Stephanie,
>
> 2007/11/30, Stephanie Watson <stef foresightlinux org>:
> > I have finished my edits on the Maryland Library article.  Though I know
> > much of it was quoted information from the interviewee, I took the liberty
> > to correct some grammatical quirks.
> >
> > As a technical writer, I wanted to remind everyone to use trademark and
> > branding information correctly.  In each article, for the first instance of
> > anything with a trademark or registered trademark, be sure to use the
> > &trade; and &reg; as outlined in the company's trademark information.  Also,
> > be aware of appropriate capitalization and punctuation: for example, use
> > "UNIX" (correct) instead of "Unix" and "XML-RPC" (correct) instead of
> > "XMLRPC" or "xmlrpc."  I'd be happy to check on these things for people if
> > they have a difficult time finding the information.
>
> Thanks a lot! Nice remarks!

I forgot to mention two things:
- The proposed title is quite nice!
- It would be nice to have a shorter Excerpt for the article. The
current one is too long.

--lucasr