release notes doubts

[Gil Forcada <gforcada gnome org>]

hi,

since there isn't a product in GNOME's bugzilla for release-notes I send
here my dobuts:

msgid ""
"Some new protocols are also available. <filename>cdda://</filename>
will "
"show all of the audio tracks on a CD, available was WAV files. "
"<filename>gphoto2://</filename> will give you access to any connected "
"digital cameras."


what's the «available was WAV files» ?? maybe it should be «available as
a WAV files» ?


msgid ""
"Also appearing in 2.22 are a selection of new plugins, including
support for "
"MythTV, Youtube and Tracker-based searching. Also new is playlist
sharing "
"and the ability to select subtitles for files."

«select subtitles for movies» maybe?


"GVFS/GIO aims to provide a modern, easy-to-use VFS system. Its goal is
to "
"provide an API that developers prefer over raw POSIX IO calls. Rather
than "
"closing the POSIX IO API, it provides a higher-level, document-centric
"
"interface. As well as reading and writing files, GIO provides
facilities for "
"file monitoring, asynchronous IO and filename completion."


«... easy-to-user VFS system» since VFS is virtual file system, the
later system isn't redundant?


msgid ""
"<application>Orca</application>, GNOME's screenreading technology, has
many "
"exciting improvements in 2.22. Close collaboration with Mozilla has led
to "
"excellent accessibility in <application>Firefox 3</application>. New is
Orca "
"is support for Accessible Rich Internet Applications (ARIA) and Live "
"Regions. This allows for much richer accessibility with today's modern,
"
"dynamic web applications."

«New is Orca is support ...» New in Orca ?


msgid ""
"The screen magnifier has been improved and can now take advantage of "
"technology like X compositing to allow smoother scrolling and
fullscreen "
"scrolling on hardware that supports it. There is also improved support
for "
"colourblind filters."

color-blind maybe ?


that's all,

cheers!


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