Re: Release Notes Fixups

[Murray Cumming <murrayc murrayc com>]

Danilo, do we have permission to apply this patch? It's not essential, I
guess.

On Sun, 2005-03-06 at 15:38 -0600, Shaun McCance wrote:
> Some small fixes attached:
> 
> In US English, it's "minimizing", not "minimising".
> 
> You have "then" when you should have "than".
> 
> Langauge names are always capitalized.
> 
> --
> Shaun
> 
-- 
Murray Cumming
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? release-notes.diff
Index: 2.x/2.10rnotes/rnapplets.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/gnome/releng/2.x/2.10rnotes/rnapplets.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.16
diff -u -r1.16 rnapplets.xml
--- 2.x/2.10rnotes/rnapplets.xml	6 Mar 2005 19:57:10 -0000	1.16
+++ 2.x/2.10rnotes/rnapplets.xml	6 Mar 2005 21:19:15 -0000
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
   <para>
    GNOME &version; features an optional trashcan for your Panel.
    Just like the trashcan on your desktop, you can now drag and drop files and other items into the trash
-   without minimising your open windows.
+   without minimizing your open windows.
   </para>
 
   <figure id="rnscreenshot-applet-trash">
@@ -85,8 +85,8 @@
   <sect3 id="rnapplets-gweather">
   <title>Get even more weather</title>
   <para>
-   The weather monitor can now show even more locations then before, and the 
-   location names have been translated into non-english languages where appropriate.
+   The weather monitor can now show even more locations than before, and the 
+   location names have been translated into non-English languages where appropriate.
    In addition, the forecast now includes sunrise and sunset calculations for most locations.
   </para>