[patch] Desktop Help minor file manager corrections



Hi, here's my first patch for GNOME documentation. These are a few
things in the file manager pages I corrected in the Desktop Help while
preparing the Ubuntu variant.

Jeremy Bicha
From 9e398b7c29b4b5a32cb8160d242384c4e4e78621 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jeremy Bicha <jbicha ubuntu com>
Date: Thu, 4 Aug 2011 19:45:50 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Minor corrections to file manager pages

Corrects a few minor issues in Nautilus & file manager pages
---
 gnome-help/C/files-recover.page       |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/files-templates.page     |    9 +++------
 gnome-help/C/files.page               |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/nautilus-behavior.page   |    2 +-
 5 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page b/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page
index d1137b3..aedb958 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
       </p></item>
     </steps>
 
-<p>If you deleted the file using <keyseq><key>Shift</key><key>delete</key></keyseq>, or from the command line, the file can't be recovered using this method because it has been permanently deleted.</p>
+<p>If you deleted the file using <keyseq><key>Shift</key><key>Delete</key></keyseq>, or from the command line, the file can't be recovered using this method because it has been permanently deleted.</p>
 
 <p>There are a number of recovery tools available that are sometimes able to recover files that were permanently deleted. They are generally not very easy to use, however. If you accidentally permanently deleted a file, it's probably best to ask for advice on a support forum to see if you can recover it.</p>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-templates.page b/gnome-help/C/files-templates.page
index 41ce8a7..60bac5a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-templates.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-templates.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="files#faq"/>
     
-    <desc>Quickly create new documents from custom file templates (e.g. letterheads and memos).</desc>
+    <desc>Quickly create new documents from custom file templates.</desc>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-28" status="stub"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-07" status="review"/>
@@ -12,13 +12,10 @@
       <name>Anita Reitere</name>
       <email>nitalynx gmail com</email>
     </credit>
-    <license>
-      <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
-    </license>
-
+    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Templates for commonly-used types of document</title>
+  <title>Templates for commonly-used document types</title>
 
   <p>If you often create documents based on the same content, you might 
   benefit from using file templates. A file template can be a document 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files.page b/gnome-help/C/files.page
index c040731..5cb9529 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files.page
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
       <link xref="files-delete">delete files</link>,
       <link xref="files#backup">backups</link>,
       <link xref="files#removable">removable drives</link>...
-   </desc>
+    </desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page b/gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page
index c445bb5..6df064a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
 
 <title>My media card reader doesn't work</title>
 
-<p>Many computers contain readers for SD (SecureDigital), MMC (MultiMediaCard), SmartMedia, 
+<p>Many computers contain readers for SD (Secure Digital), MMC (MultiMediaCard), SmartMedia, 
 Memory Stick, CompactFlash, and other storage media cards. These should be automatically 
 detected and <link xref="disk-partitions">mounted</link>. Here are some 
 troubleshooting steps if they are not:</p>
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ readers are also available, and are far better supported by Linux.</p>
 <figure>
   <desc>In the depicted <gui>Computer</gui> window, a correctly-configured card 
 reader is represented by three drives: <gui>CompactFlash</gui>, <gui>SmartMedia</gui>, and 
-<gui>SecureDigital</gui>. Only the SD card is mounted, and 
+<gui>Secure Digital</gui>. Only the SD card is mounted, and 
 is visible in the left column (where it says <em>31 MB F...</em>).</desc>
   <media type="image" mime="image/png" src="figures/hardware-cardreader.png"/>
 </figure>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/nautilus-behavior.page b/gnome-help/C/nautilus-behavior.page
index f4ab04e..425a605 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/nautilus-behavior.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/nautilus-behavior.page
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ and the trash behavior. In any file manager window, click
 </section>
 <section id="executable">
 <title>Executable text files</title>
- <p>An executable text file is a file that contains a program that you can run (execute).  The <link xref="nautilus-file-properties-permissions#execute">file permissions</link> must also allow for the file to run as a program.  The most common are Shell, Python, and Perl scripts.  These have extensions .sh, .py, and .pl respectively.</p>
+ <p>An executable text file is a file that contains a program that you can run (execute).  The <link xref="nautilus-file-properties-permissions#files">file permissions</link> must also allow for the file to run as a program.  The most common are Shell, Python, and Perl scripts.  These have extensions .sh, .py, and .pl respectively.</p>
  <p>You can select to <gui>Run executable text files when they are opened</gui>, <gui>View executable text files when they are opened</gui> or <gui>Ask each time</gui>. If the last option is selected, a dialog box will appear asking if you wish to run or view the selected text file.</p>
 
 
-- 
1.7.5.4



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