[PATCH]g-h/hardware-cardreader: clarify memory card abbreviations



Hi,

I just wanted to submit this slight modification of the card reader troubleshooting page per Phil's suggestion. Also, I would like to tackle printing-setup-drivers next if nobody objects. (Thanks again for accepting me into the program, I'm so excited!)

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Regards,

Kelly
From 3251ecc1dafeb4b52c9b66f9e76ac11961043711 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kelly Sinnott <ksinnott5ht gmail com>
Date: Wed, 27 Apr 2011 12:30:22 -0700
Subject: [PATCH]g-h/hardware-cardreader: clarify memory card abbreviations

---
 gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page |    9 +++++----
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page b/gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page
index 419b420..c445bb5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page
@@ -19,15 +19,16 @@
 
 <title>My media card reader doesn't work</title>
 
-<p>Many computers contain readers for SD, MMC, SM, MS, CF, and other storage media 
-cards. These should be automatically detected and <link xref="disk-partitions">mounted</link>. Here are some 
+<p>Many computers contain readers for SD (SecureDigital), MMC (MultiMediaCard), SmartMedia, 
+Memory Stick, CompactFlash, and other storage media cards. These should be automatically 
+detected and <link xref="disk-partitions">mounted</link>. Here are some 
 troubleshooting steps if they are not:</p>
 
 <steps>
 <item>
 <p> Make sure that the card is put in correctly. Many cards look as though they are 
 “upside down” when correctly inserted. Also make sure that the card is firmly seated 
-in the slot; some cards, especially CF, require a small amount of force to insert 
+in the slot; some cards, especially CompactFlash, require a small amount of force to insert 
 correctly. (Be careful not to push too hard! If you come up against something solid, 
 do not force it.)</p>
 </item>
@@ -60,7 +61,7 @@ readers are also available, and are far better supported by Linux.</p>
 
 <figure>
   <desc>In the depicted <gui>Computer</gui> window, a correctly-configured card 
-reader is represented by three drives: <gui>CompactFlash</gui>, <gui>MemoryStick</gui>, and 
+reader is represented by three drives: <gui>CompactFlash</gui>, <gui>SmartMedia</gui>, and 
 <gui>SecureDigital</gui>. Only the SD card is mounted, and 
 is visible in the left column (where it says <em>31 MB F...</em>).</desc>
   <media type="image" mime="image/png" src="figures/hardware-cardreader.png"/>
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1.7.4.4



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