GNOME.org
 

Banshee help file patch

This is just a small patch for what is currently available in the doc branch for Banshee. 
>From 0042b6cf05c85e840271e89f48ad6d1331de4b5f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Harold Schreckengost <mewshi Emiko (none)>
Date: Sun, 30 May 2010 20:26:55 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Minor edits

---
 help/C/add-podcast.page      |    4 ++--
 help/C/add-radio.page        |   19 +++++++------------
 help/C/import.page           |   12 ++++++------
 help/C/introduction.page     |   10 +++++-----
 help/C/manage-playlists.page |   12 ++++++------
 help/C/manage-tags.page      |   10 +++++-----
 help/C/play-queue.page       |    6 +++---
 help/C/search.page           |    3 +--
 help/C/sort.page             |    4 ++--
 9 files changed, 37 insertions(+), 43 deletions(-)

diff --git a/help/C/add-podcast.page b/help/C/add-podcast.page
index 8a986c2..710ba55 100644
--- a/help/C/add-podcast.page
+++ b/help/C/add-podcast.page
@@ -28,12 +28,12 @@
   <section id="podcastdescription">
      <title>What is a Podcast?</title>
      
-  <p>Podcasts are recorded programs similar to radio programs that are
+  <p>Podcasts are recorded programs, similar to radio programs, that are
   available on the internet and allow you to subscribe.  When you subscribe
   to a podcast in Banshee, each time a new program is released, Banshee
   will automatically download the podcast and allow you to listen to it.</p>
   
-  <p>There are podcasts on almost any subject including music, movies, Linux
+  <p>There are podcasts on almost any subject including music, movies, Linux,
   and more.  Search the internet using your favorite search engine with a 
   search term such as "movie podcast" and you will be presented with many 
   options to choose from.</p>
diff --git a/help/C/add-radio.page b/help/C/add-radio.page
index bc3ac3e..c5aaf9e 100644
--- a/help/C/add-radio.page
+++ b/help/C/add-radio.page
@@ -28,17 +28,12 @@
   <section id="radiodescription">
      <title>What is Internet Radio?</title>
      
-  <p>Internet radio stations are similar to terrestial radio stations allowing
+  <p>Internet radio stations are similar to regular radio stations, allowing
   an individual or organization to stream music live over the internet.
-  Internet radio stations can be a simulcast of a terrestrial radio station,
-  an amateur could be broadasting their own station, or there are commercial
+  Internet radio stations can be a simultaneous stream of a regular radio station,
+  an amateur broadasting their own station, or commercial
   internet radio stations that include live DJs and even commercials.</p>
   
-  <p>There are podcasts on almost any subject including music, movies, Linux
-  and more.  Search the internet using your favorite search engine with a 
-  search term such as "movie podcast" and you will be presented with many 
-  options to choose from.</p>
-  
   </section>
   
   <section id="addradio">
@@ -46,7 +41,7 @@
   <title>Add Radio Station</title>
   
   <p>To add an internet radio station to Banshee, press <gui>Add Station</gui>
-  in the upper right hand corner of Banshee or from the menu choose <guiseq>
+  in the upper right hand corner of Banshee or, from the menu, choose <guiseq>
   <gui>Menu</gui><gui>Add Station</gui></guiseq>.
   </p>
   
@@ -57,15 +52,15 @@
    
 
   <p>Banshee will prompt you to enter the <gui>Station Genre</gui>.
-  Choose the kind of music the internet radio station is from the available 
-  drop down selections. Then you will need to enter the <gui>Station Name</gui>.  
+  Choose the kind of music the internet radio station plays from the available 
+  drop down selections. You will then need to enter the <gui>Station Name</gui>.  
   Enter a name for the radio station.  Then press tab or use your mouse to select
   the <gui>Stream URL:</gui> dialog to paste the URL of the radio station.
   Using your mouse right click and choose <gui>Paste</gui> or press <keyseq>
   <key>Control</key>+<key>V</key></keyseq>.</p>
   
   <p>You can optionally also fill out the fields for
-  <gui>Station Creator</gui>, <gui>Description</gui> and <gui>Rating</gui>.
+  <gui>Station Creator</gui>, <gui>Description</gui>, and <gui>Rating</gui>.
   </p>
   
   <p>Then press <gui>Save</gui> to save the internet radio station in Banshee.
diff --git a/help/C/import.page b/help/C/import.page
index 53a6349..362ec96 100644
--- a/help/C/import.page
+++ b/help/C/import.page
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 
   <title>Import media</title>  
   
-  <p>You can import music, videos or playlists into Banshee's library.</p>
+  <p>You can import music, videos, or playlists into Banshee's library.</p>
   
   <section id="importmedia">
   <title>Import Media from your Hard Drive</title>  
@@ -32,12 +32,12 @@
   into Banshee using the mouse or keyboard.
   </p>
   
-  <p>To import files using the mouse, from the menu choose <guiseq><gui>Media
-  </gui><gui>Import Media</gui></guiseq>.  To import using your keyboard
+  <p>To import files using the mouse, from the menu, choose <guiseq><gui>Media
+  </gui><gui>Import Media</gui></guiseq>.  To import using your keyboard,
   press and hold <keyseq><key>Control</key>+<key>I</key></keyseq>.
   </p>
   
-  <p>A dialog box will appear with a dropdown menu and you can choose to import
+  <p>A dialog box will appear with a dropdown menu, and you can choose to import
   from:</p>
   <list>
   	<p><li>Folders</li></p>
@@ -54,8 +54,8 @@
   
   <p>If you want to import only a specific file or files, choose <gui>Files</gui>
   and locate the directory which contains the files you wish to import.  
-  Select the file with your mouse or press and hold <key>Control</key> and choose
-  multiple files and then press <gui>Import</gui> or <key>Enter</key> to import
+  Select the file with your mouse or press and hold <key>Control</key>, choose
+  multiple files, and press <gui>Import</gui> or <key>Enter</key> to import
   the file or files into Banshee.
   </p>
   
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index 6fafbc5..6ba89a4 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -25,17 +25,17 @@
 
   <p>
     <app>Banshee</app> is a media player that allows you to play your music,
-    videos and media as well sync it with portable devices to take your media
+    videos, and other media media as well sync it with portable devices to take your media
     on the go.
   </p>
   <p>
-    <app>Tomboy</app> includes features to import your media, manage its
-    metadata, play your music and videos 
+    <app>Banshee</app> includes features to import your media, manage its
+    metadata, and play your music and videos.
   </p>
   <p>
     Banshee also helps you sync your music and videos to popular portable
-    devices such as digital audio players and smartphones.  Banshee supports
-    popular devices including most iPods, Sandisk and Creative MP3 players and
+    devices, such as digital audio players and smartphones.  Banshee supports
+    popular devices including most iPods, Sandisk and Creative MP3 players, and
     Android powered phones.
   </p>
 
diff --git a/help/C/manage-playlists.page b/help/C/manage-playlists.page
index e8bf570..70e3d4c 100644
--- a/help/C/manage-playlists.page
+++ b/help/C/manage-playlists.page
@@ -31,9 +31,9 @@
   playlist so you can take it with you on the go.
   </p>
   
-  <p>Banshee supports normal playlists which are songs you add and manage to the
-  playlist as well as smart playlists.  Smart Playlists are automatically 
-  generated playlists based on your listening habits, favorite music or more.
+  <p>Banshee supports normal playlists, which include songs you add to the
+  playlist, as well as smart playlists.  Smart Playlists are automatically 
+  generated playlists based on your listening habits, favorite music, or more.
   
   <sect id="manual">
   
@@ -41,18 +41,18 @@
   
     <p>A normal playlist is a list of songs that you add and manage.  You might
     want to create your own list of songs by your favorite artist from 
-    multiple albums, your latest favorite songs or an upbeat playlist to listen
+    multiple albums, your latest favorite songs, or an upbeat playlist to listen
     to while you exercise.
     </p>
     
     <p>You can create a new playlist by pressing <keyseq><key>Control</key>
     <key>N</key></keyseq>, from the menu choosing <guiseq><gui>Menu</gui>
     <gui>New Playlist</gui></guiseq> or by selecing the track(s) you would like
-    to add to the playlist.  Select the track(s) and right click them and choose
+    to add to the playlist.  Select the track(s), right click them, and choose
     <guiseq><gui>Add to Playlist</gui><gui>New Playlist</gui></guiseq>.
     You can also drag and drop them to a new playlist by selcting the track(s) 
     and dragging them to the left hand
-    window pane over <gui>Music</gui>.  As you drag it over <gui>Music</gui>
+    window pane over <gui>Music</gui>.  As you drag it over <gui>Music</gui>,
     a new option <gui><em>New Playlist</em></gui> will appear and you can drop
     the track(s) over <gui><em>New Playlist</em></gui> to add them to the 
     playlist.  You can repeat this process until you have added all the tracks
diff --git a/help/C/manage-tags.page b/help/C/manage-tags.page
index 936f691..00949ab 100644
--- a/help/C/manage-tags.page
+++ b/help/C/manage-tags.page
@@ -29,9 +29,9 @@
   <title>Music metadata</title>    
   
   	<p>Digital music contains metadata that stores information in the 
-  	music file including the artist, album, year recorded, genre and more.
+  	music file including the artist, album, year recorded, genre, and more.
   	Almost all music purchased over the internet will have the metadata
-  	already embedded and if you import music from CDs Banshee will include
+  	already embedded and if you import music from CDs, Banshee will include
   	the metadata when ripping the CD if available.  For more information
   	on ripping CDs and including the metadata see the 
   	<link type="guide" xref="import"/>.</p>
@@ -50,8 +50,8 @@
     <title>Edit Your Metadata</title>
     
     <p>You can change and edit the metadata of your songs.  Select the song or
-    songs you want to update and hit the <key>E</key>, from the menu choose
-    <guiseq><gui>Edit</gui><gui>Edit Track Information</gui></guiseq> or use
+    songs you want to update and hit the <key>E</key>, choose
+    <guiseq><gui>Edit</gui><gui>Edit Track Information</gui></guiseq> from the menu, or use
     your mouse and right click on the files and select
     <gui>Edit Track Information</gui>.
     </p>
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
     <p>Update the song's information.  If you have selected multiple songs to
     edit press the right arrow icon to the right of the <gui>Track Title</gui>
     field or press the <gui>Forward</gui> button at the bottom of the dialog
-    when finished with each song.   When you have completed editing all metadata
+    when finished with each song.   When you have completed editing all metadata,
     press <gui>Save</gui>.
     </p>
    
diff --git a/help/C/play-queue.page b/help/C/play-queue.page
index 195f311..387b4fe 100644
--- a/help/C/play-queue.page
+++ b/help/C/play-queue.page
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
   
   <p>The <gui>Play Queue</gui> allows you to add music to play in a sequential 
   order.  You can add many tracks to let you listen to hours of music non-stop.
-  You can individual tracks, entire albums, and sort or re-order them.</p>
+  You can add individual tracks or entire albums, and sort or re-order them.</p>
   
 <sect id="addqueue">
 
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
   
   <p>You can add music tracks to the Play Queue individually or as a group.
   To add an individual file, drag and drop it over the <gui>Play Queue</gui>
-  in the far left window pane or right click the track and choose 
+  in the far left window pane, or right click the track and choose 
   <gui>Add to Play Queue</gui>.  
   </p>
   
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
 
   <title>Removing Tracks from the Play Queue</title>
 
-  <p>You can remove an individual track, a group of tracks or clear your entire
+  <p>You can remove an individual track, a group of tracks, or clear your entire
   play queue.
   </p>
   
diff --git a/help/C/search.page b/help/C/search.page
index 6bdc629..c71d967 100644
--- a/help/C/search.page
+++ b/help/C/search.page
@@ -36,8 +36,7 @@
   <em>dave matthews</em>.  By entering <em>dave matthews</em> in the search box,
    Banshee will search all metatdata fields including Track Title, Album Title,
    Album Artist, Year, etc.  Any track whose metadata includes <em>dave</em> 
-   and <em>matthews</em> will be returned.  Search terms are case insensitive
-   so you don't have to capitalize.  <em>dave</em>, <em>Dave</em>, and <em>DAVE</em>
+   and <em>matthews</em> will be returned.  Search terms are case, meaningyou don't have to capitalize.  <em>dave</em>, <em>Dave</em>, and <em>DAVE</em>
    all mean the same thing when searching.</p>
 
 <section id="operators">
diff --git a/help/C/sort.page b/help/C/sort.page
index d84b2ea..dd22c49 100644
--- a/help/C/sort.page
+++ b/help/C/sort.page
@@ -28,11 +28,11 @@
   <title>Adding Columns</title>    
   
   <p>As your library grows, you may want to sort your library view to play
-  search or view certain songs, artists or albums.
+  search or view certain songs, artists, or albums.
   </p>
   
   <p>You can add additional columns to the library view in <app>Banshee</app>
-  to give you additional information about the songs and also allow you to sort
+  to give you more information about the songs and also allow you to sort
   by.  By default, Banshee displays columns for songs including 
   <gui>Name</gui>, <gui>Artist</gui>, <gui>Album</gui> and <gui>Time</gui>.
   To add additional columns, using your mouse right click on any of the columns
-- 
1.7.0.4
[Date Prev][Date Next]   [Thread Prev][Thread Next]   [Thread Index] [Date Index] [Author Index]